NO TIME TO DIE

13.9.22

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• Very soft and emotional beginning 

• Great vibrato

• Good high pitch

• My own style

• Soft chorus

• Clear riff in the hum

• Love how I sang ‘I let in burn’ and ‘my concern’ 

• Good projection 

• Good crescendo

• End of second, held the note and had a bit more power

• Good improvisation at the end of Corus, adding my own melody

• Good diaphragm contour

• Good soft emotional ending, good contrast fro the last chorus 

Ebi:

• Need to work on low notes

• Work on break control on song areas

• Chorus could be more emotional

• Need to perfect chorus

• Second chorus could be a little more powerful 

• Can open vocal box a bit more In ‘no time to die’

• Last bit can be a lot more emotional

22.922

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• Very clear pitch

• Improved on low notes

• Very flow breathy

• Better dynamics in this version

Ebi:

• Beginning was a lot more emotional In the last version

• Still need to work on breath control

• Need to work making low notes clearer 

27.9.22

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• Liked how did the beginning, very soft

• Feel a lot more comfortable with the chorus, improved

• Like the vibrato in ‘no longer my concern’

• Voice box has opened up a little, chorus feel’s a lot more natural

Ebi:

• Could perfect some of the crescendo

• ‘I let it burn’ feels a bit forced

• Need to add emotion, too of caused on the technical area

8.10.22

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• Improved a little low notes

• Love how I made the fist chorus cry soft, soft and breathy, held all the nots, sounds like my voice is crying

• Decided to keep first two chorus

Ebi:

• It sounds when it’s soft but can project at the end 

• Change up second chorus and perfect it