IDONTWANNABEYOU
ANYMORE

8.11.22

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• Good use of dynamic in the beginning

• smooth, flows with the notes

• Very breathy and calm

• Lots of emotions visible in voice

• Good dialect

• Good crocendo in chorus

• Good vibrato

• Clear riff in hum

• Hit all the right notes

• Good pitch

• Great vibrato and pitch in ‘mood’

Ebi:

• Could change things up from time to time

• Could use best voice in some areas

• Could improve last note in ‘be you’: a bit more clearer

20.1.23

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• Beginning really soft and emotional

• Beginning a lot more emotional than last time

• Flow, good pitch and notes

• Holding the notes

• Great dynamics

• Chorus a lot more softer 

• Great head voice

• Good high notes

• Clear riff in hum 

• My own style, like my own song

• Good improvisation on ‘we’ve made every mistake’

• Good storytelling 

• Good projection and added power to ‘what you k now she’s heard before’ 

• Good crescendo

• Improved on last note on ‘ be you’ 

Ebi:

• Could hold the notes ‘what you know she’s heard before’: work on breath control in that area so that two notes flow together to treat just one note

• Improve riff on ‘I break’: too messy, not clear

• Could improvise on ‘I don’t wanna be you’ at the end