Major Project 1- The Power of Literacy, Language, and Communication Essay
"Lost in Translation" explores my experience growing up bilingual as a Yemeni-American and how navigating two languages shaped my identity and deepened my connection to both cultures.
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Mar 4 7:13pm
Reply from Melinda Cha
"Hi Klud! I really enjoyed reading your essay. It flows really well as you transition from your introduction to going in more depth with your personal experience of being bilingual and mixing languages. I also really liked the quotes you used in your essay to strengthen your thesis, especially the quote from How to Tame a Wild Tongue. I, too used a similar quote in my essay. Overall, I think you successfully established a voice with including your own lived experiences. One thing I did notice was some spacing between a period and a new sentence. Great work! :)"
This peer review provided valuable insights for both my peers and me regarding our introductions. We critically analyzed each other's work and offered constructive feedback on ways to enhance the strength and clarity of our essays.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AgShgtZHBnIpuFauqvDFP1TYmWY_fIMXFeUYh5GP0wg/edit?usp=sharing
Major Project 2: Media Critical Discourse Analaysis Essay
Reply from Jazlin Nguyen
"Hello Klud! I love how I was able to understand exactly what you were going to do for your critical analysis essay just based off the title. I feel that my only advice back to you would to provide more information about your paragraphs since they feel a bit short. To extend it, I would encourage you to dig a little deeper with your analysis OR transition it more smoothly where you can go into more history about Jim crow laws or other laws relevant during that time period. Other than that, I can see the vision, Keep it up!"
In the peer review, my classmates gave me advice on ways I could improve my introduction.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PBsNN5HPhwYjKPtXHUt0Zk4qaqsgpLQ_ZFnxXIkCbL4/edit?usp=sharing
Major Project 3: The Solidarity Project
Next, I created a Annotated Bibliography with the sources I found to help in answering my research question: What role does identity play in shaping solidarity within and beyond the Arab-American community in the face of discrimination?
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Vxfm1miK4GTh199K_kryc3X5bywEGw0AFpxMcZP8aC4/edit?usp=sharing