For my Revised Major Project, I made several global changes to improve clarity, professionalism, and overall academic quality. I removed all first-person language to make the writing sound more formal and objective, and I corrected my citation formatting so that both the in-text citations and Works Cited page followed proper academic guidelines. I also revised my title to be clearer and more specific, and I strengthened the content to meet a more collegiate level based on Mr. Adofo's feedback.