Following the principles of good cartographic design, create a map using GIS data sourced online and upload for peer review. Provide peer review on a classmate's map and then review feedback you receive and complete a final map incorporating this feedback if appropriate.
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The feedback from my classmate was that overall, the map looked good but they did observe that most of the elements were on the left. They noted that it wasn't an issue as it balanced well with the land mass, but I felt it was worth exploring whether anything could be shifted. The bottom right corner had good clear space available so I have shifted the North arrow there, ensuring it remains aligned at the bottom with the scale bar. In my opinion this change has provided more balance to the map rather than having a cluster of elements at the bottom left.
In my draft map submission I mentioned that I had struggled to find colours for my symbols that contrasted with each other sufficiently. The classmate who gave feedback felt that the colours contrasted well and stood out from the basemap, however they suggested I could try a dark blue instead of green. I attempted several colour combinations, including dark blue with the red. Using blue in the symbols didn't provide enough visual contrast in the map as there is already blue in the basemap and locator map. I have kept my symbology as the green and red combination as I felt no other combination made the symbols stand out from each other more. I think the problem actually lies in there being only a small amount of 'current wetland' remaining, so that feature will not stand out as much as the 'pre-human wetlands' no matter what colour I choose.
On self-reviewing my map in line with the principles of map design, I made some further alterations. The original scale bar used had tick marks with no numbers associated. I personally find it a clean and simple scale bar that is straightforward to interpret, but in experimenting with different scale bars I found the one used in my final version provided better visual balance with the North arrow, with both having solid black in their design. The downside to this was that the solid black stood out more than the previous scale bar, so the title and legend receded somewhat in visual importance. To remedy this I increased the line width of the title and legend border to bring them more to the forefront. This in turn made them the same border thickness as the locator map.
Hi Kiera. Wow, there are a lot of huts in the Southern Alps!! I like the way you have followed the path of natural eye movement with the locator map to the top left and moving down across the main map to the legend and scale at the bottom right. The visual hierarchy is good with the subject matter and title standing out.
A couple of suggestions - the abbreviation 'DOC' in the title belongs with the 'Huts and Tracks' line so perhaps you could have a title and subtitle. e.g. 'DOC Huts and Tracks' title and 'Southern Alps' subtitle. Or vice versa. I would also move the title a little higher. That would separate the title a bit more from some other elements like the 'Tasman Sea' label. You could also shift the scale bar and legend down a bit so that the gap below is similar to the gap to the right between the legend/scale bar and the map frame. I like that your North arrow is not fussy. Personally, I would make it a little smaller and/or shift it to the bottom left. If you moved it, you’d have to change it to black so it shows up on the white snow, but then it would match the scale bar.
In terms of visual contrast, I do wonder if the colours in the basemap are a bit distracting – I find it harder to view the symbols where it changes to snowy mountains, possibly because there are patches in the snow that are similar colour to the symbol. Maybe a lighter basemap would help the symbols ‘pop’. All minor adjustments and overall, it looks good!
I just reviewed my feedback and I can see why you placed the scale bar where you did. The border between land and sea prevents it going lower because you'd start to lose the numbers in the darker sea colour. I guess you could experiment with a different basemap or different colour scale bar, but overall the placement looks fine and is well balanced within the green space. Sometimes it's hard to tell if these ideas would work or not without trying it!