Explore how the writers of Half-Caste and Search For My Tongue explore their feelings towards identity in their poems. 30 marksÂ
This is a model of a comparative essay with annotations. The essay has clear comparative links and sustained analysis of both poems.
As you can see, in blue there is a comparative statement at the top of the paragraph, and then another in the middle to make it clear that you understand the links between both of the poem. You can also see that after the blue, there is much highlighted in pink - this demonstrates thorough analysis of the first poem. The green highlighting demonstrates thorough analysis of the second poem.
In orange, you can see that there is regular use of comparative connectives throughout the essay.