PLEASE READ BEFORE NEXT SHOW
WEDNESDAY, MARCH 30 RUN - STRUDEL CAST - NOTES -- Act 1 (1 hr 20 min), Act 2 (50 mins)
ALL/LARGER ENSEMBLE NOTES:
Gamblers and Hot Box Girls - look at each other on cross in overture
Gamblers - Use hats in Oldest Established - for all choreo
Mission Band cut the entrance in “i’ll Know” scene - the one where you just exit, only have Sarah and Arvide enter, and then Gabby you can come out for coffee from the wings
Hold coffee/drinks at club as if there's really a drink in it
Audience still need more life in Hot Box scenes - you’re out for a FUN NIGHT!
Gamblers - Watch line spacing on "well well well" with Brannigan
Havana is SO Much fun
Gamblers - Pull more downstage for group unison section in Crapshooters please! Isaak - you need to set this since you're in front!
Gamblers - Better with adlibs before Luck Be a Lady - thank you!
Who picks up USL crate after luck be a lady? Make sure it's cleared please!
Mission Band - need bibles in hand end of sit down
Everyone in Sit Down - Don't forget to exit after "stray no more, stray no more" -- if you have a bench, exit right after sit down
Everyone in Happy Ending - Pull downstage more
Hot Box - Don’t pick up petals till after the main is closed please :)
INDIVIDUAL NOTES:
Kyndall - don’t run away until pick pocket celebration
Kyndall and Hunter - I see you stop in the wings after exit - keep moving in overture
Annalia - add a cross after Jude in "Follow the Fold" from SL to SR
Cassidy and Brynlee - come down farther down stage before laugh at Sarah
Nathan - entrance before you see Lt. – come in pat shoulder Benny, so you have no idea Lt. is there
Benny and Nicely - salute the flag hat thing after Nathan
Allie - move farther R in Oldest Established - a capella section
Nathan – so much better!! Great energy. Keep it up!
Jude - missed entrance – jump ahead in lines if that happens cast! - good job staying in it
Sky - Better on cider story
Danielle - Still breathy, assertive strong energy and speaking please!
Sarah & Sky - cute with Isaiah bit
Sarah - Best I've seen you -- you are doing great!!
Sarah - posture is getting better - keep working on it!
Sarah use more of the space - cross farther L and R on “i’ll know” crosses - keep one foot slightly in front of the other so we don't get locked/stuck
Sarah - stay there after slap, then cross all the way to the desk for rip of paper, on desk
Pick up cues even more Biltmore - good attitude though
Ellie - SMILE in all Hot Box scenes!!
Adelaide comb through hair after flowers
Adelaide and Nathan - review we had a baby lines
Adelaide - keep up energy and speed in confession of baby/mothers stuff
Lana - I pity you part - come in from stage right and go to spot for earring bit so you’re not in dark
Adelaide - Emma best you have done Lament!!!!
Allie tilt hat up a bit - we’re losing eyes
Olivia - you're just a beat early on cross step with bags
Liam, Griffin, Jude, Allie - GREAT ending guys and dolls
Sarah - be surprised to see Sky enter to protest the closing of the mission, Don't be totally mad at him – there can be some frustration, but also intrigued by him trying to help
Benny enter sooner for “Everybody got carnations?”
Jude - Make it a bigger deal “i’d like to introduce BIG JULE”
Brayden keep lines up at ends of sentences - don’t let them fall -- gamblers need to be a little scared by you
Annalia - Thank you for fixing the table situation
Sarah - Check in with me about how to hold a margarita glass HAHA! :)
Sarah & Sky - Hold the kiss just a tad longer, fall in arms at end of Havana
Sarah - double check Lyrics in Bell
Emily you are adorable and coming to life in this role!!
Sky - give Sarah space to finish Bell with full outstretched arms, then come in as she falls after she finishes singing
Leah - you are awesome on all of your crossovers, love "vulgar jewelry" line
Sky - I need more diction in My Time of Day
Sarah - Beautiful vocals in "I've Never Been in Love Before"
Sarah and Sky - you know I love to say it but... take your time getting in to end of never been in love - please forgive this helpless haze... SLOWER walk, build the anticipation!
Arvide - “Good morning brother masterson” - can that have an edge to it -- check in with me about this before the run!
Ellie - Thank you for yelling "HEY" in raid - keep it!
Sarah - make it a bigger deal that all the raid is happening
Sarah - finish that last line "I’m a mission doll" strong - don’t stomp - finish line and then can go
Jack - get into your light quicker for intro debutantes line
Adelaide - Brighter lip please! Bright red!
Sarah and Arvide - stay in light, more downstage in scene and song "More I Cannot wish You" -- you can totally use that space in front of the brick wall - it's lit well there!
Maya M - any chance you have more of a wide leg black pant instead of dance leggings? Just so it looks more like a suit pant!
Adelaide - don't forget mother's letter! But good job covering
Adelaide - Tomorrow before the show - Let’s practice the cue before Sue Me
Adelaide - Try not to get stuck physically behind the luggage in Sue Me
Reid and Ashley - don't forget to set USL bench prior to Sit Down!! Super important!
Jude - check line -- it's “I still wish it” not “i still do” in Sit Down scene
Brayden - can we continue to be skeptical of the "prayer meeting" in Sit Down after your entrance -- maybe cross arms over in SR corner, contemplating whether you should break this up or not?
Sarah - let’s do mission doll outfit the whole second act
Sarah - sit with your legs together on bench in Marry the Man - knees together, cross ankles
Sarah & Adelaide - Finish Marry the Man “TOMORROWWWW” last note with big outstretched arms separated, then come together for handshake, we were a little tight together and awkward with our arms on the last note
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TUESDAY, MARCH 29 RUN - CHEESECAKE CAST - NOTES
ALL/LARGE ENSEMBLE NOTES:
Don’t let us see you in the wings - sightlines!
I need more makeup and volume in hair from just about everybody
Gamblers I need you to slick your hair back, and you should wear your hats!!
Mission Band - I need WAY bigger physicality in overture -- if you're thinking it's too much, it's probably right! It should feel like a fun, animated introduction into the world -- BIG reaches with the pamphlets, I want to see you really try hard to connect with passerbys
Mission Band - please exit out wing 2 stage right after overture
What happened to my crossovers in Follow the Fold BEFORE "to the meadows" folks? We added some people in!!
ALL gamblers need to slick their hair back -- like Cassidy's or Brayden's!
Pick up the cues!! Pacing is everything in this show - keep it snappy!
ALL - entrances on stage are taking too long - we aren't used to this size stage yet... you need to anticipate that your walking in will take a little longer and enter sooner
Gamblers - Spacing in "Oldest Established" clump - be aware
Hot Box Girls - on crossover with Adelaide - please go farther Stage Left so she can say "order me a tuna fish and rye" without having to face the back
Audience in Bushel and a Peck - more life, more audible reactions please!!
Adelaide and Hot Box Girls - you can break the 4th wall in Bushel and a Peck, and sing to audience!!
Gamblers - Please see Katie Jo about red carnations on your suits for that scene
Gamblers - I need MUCH more dramatic swoop step out before Big Jule's entrance
Gamblers - pick up the pace/cues!!
We are going to bring in the mid for gamblers "he's a jolly good fellow" scene so we can make the Havana change happen - we may need to relook at some spacing on this - gamblers be aware!
Havana dancers - I need bigger audible reactions in the fight part of Havana - "oh NO!" "Get her!" "Ahh!"
You are responsible for moving tables/chairs/Sit Down benches, cast!! Please be ready. The crew is working really hard and needs your support!
We need some more boys in the Hot Box scenes - Jude can we add you into Mink as well?
Hot Box Girls - I need WAY more face/excitement in Mink! Remember you are PERFORMING in the scene -- extra energy!
Hot Box Girls - Don't look at the floor - keep face up when dancing
Gamblers that bring on the USL crates for sewers scene - get those set behind the mid before the song starts - during Arvide/Sarah's scene
Gamblers spacing in Crapshooters! Please be aware!! Check for center, and keep V formations open
Gamblers - everyone please look at Act 2 scene 3 lines, we are still struggling here
Gamblers - pick up cues and add adlibs "come on roll" "yeah we're ready Masterson" etc. in dead space before Luck Be a Lady
Gambler Crossovers after Luck Be a Lady - who goes with Brynlee? Also, please bring these crossover down stage of the bench
Benches for Sit Down need to be READY to go during "Sue Me" scene - that took way too long gamblers, be ready!!
Who sets the chair in Sit Down scene? Lets take that more left please
Mission benches - need to exit Stage Right now after Sit Down
Wedding garland holders - let it be the full length strung out and then let's push back the move to taking them off stage when the song begins of "The Happy Ending" and then just come out and join the song as soon as you can
Watch spacing/positioning in "The Happy Ending" - Sophia and partner need to be back a line
INDIVIDUAL NOTES:
Brayden - come all the way, farther downstage for sigh at top of show in overture
Jude - don’t totally freeze on pick pocket = open that up, keep talking to gamblers
Allie - be aware of spacing in Fugue -- need to move farther Left once you go to the center trio bit
Josh - looks like we are tickling the drum! Ha! Play the drum with full hand please!
Griffin - you are adorable!! Keep energy and volume up throughout!
Griffin slick hair back
Nathan slick hair back
Liam - let's try hair in a ponytail under the hat and see what that looks like Wed night
Jude - still project, even with a mic! You are so great!
Nathan - when you reference "Radio City Music Hall" can you gesture behind you, since we have that on on our drop!
Nathan, Benny, Nicely - pick up those cues in your first scene together
Nathan - stage whisper the line "provided it's a bet there's no chance of losing!"
Nicely & Griffin - let's cut the walk/turn around together bit ... it's not working!
Jude/Harry - enter sooner for baby bit with Nathan
Sky - still want more of the "Cider" story -- out to the audience, deliver to us, and then check in with Nathan
Sky - keep hand on Nathan's tie until he says "no bet" - then you can let go
Nathan - make sure it's really clear who you are referring to when you say "I name her" about Sarah
Sky - I know you haven't had a "no peace to the wicked" sign to practice with yet, but know that it will be either on the desk or the brick wall, so make sure you reference towards wherever it is, not old blocking on that!
Sky - felt a little stiff/stuck on some lines in "I'll Know" scene - please refresh!
Sarah - let's try curling hair/half up half down, some more volume around the face
Adelaide - we need to pin some hair back in the front of that wig so we don't lose your face!
Sarah - so much better on the AHH sound in "I'll Know"
Sarah & Sky - we need to hold the kiss longer through the applause after "I'll Know" - then slap after the applause dies down
Cassidy - keep up the energy/bite of Joey Biltmore! You had it for the second half of the scene after I called it out - need that from the beginning!
Adelaide - let's take the flowers out of the hair after Bushel and a Peck for the robe scene down right
Nathan - "we had a WHAT?" - is funny but getting a little too high/screechy
Adelaide we are working on shortening your robe!
Lana - Fully FINISH the sentence "I pity you." then take a beat and see earring -- we're still missing the end of that line
Adelaides - need big red lips and big lashes please!
Isaak - there's an umbrella for your crossover with Hunter - please use it!!
Benny - go to the telephone booth after duet with Liam in "Guys and Dolls"
Benny and Nicely - so cute in "Guys and Dolls" -great job!
Allie - we lost your note on the ending of "Guys and Dolls"
Sam - I need WAY bigger energy for the general! Enter with PURPOSE and INTENT please!! I need to see you be assertive in this role, I know you can!
Ellie and Allie - you split center for line when Brannigan enters
Sarah and Sky - let's try a big fall into him kind of kiss at end of Havana - the peck thing was funny, but isn't working anymore
Sarah - we are working on getting you a cardigan for the scene after Havana - once you're back in New York, so we can show that you've "cleaned up" - it's the next day
Sky - let's check in about your hat ! I like the red for Havana, but would like a darker more neutral one for you for the rest of the show
Allie - plant those feet and just yell "COPS!"
Maya - I need your waiter lines louder please!
Nicely - can you wear some black socks please!
Maya/Danielle - wondering if we can try a little bit of makeup to age you a bit, or maybe a little gray in the hair? Let's chat options tonight!
Maya- you sound really beautiful on "More I Cannot Wish You"
Maya - open up the More I Cannot Wish You scene/song a bit more so that the audience on SR side doesn't lose your beauty!!
Sky - more diction in Luck Be a Lady - when you focus on that, your vocals come to life!!
Anya M - thank you for helping to create levels, but just go to a squat in Luck Be a Lady freeze - not all the way to the ground
Nathan - notice the gamblers who are crossing over during Adelaides line "I've completely gotten you out of my mind, you can't upset me anymore"
Adelaide - booty short lines show through the purple dress, can we try a leotard maybe?
Nathan - get down on your knees on last line "I Love you!" with hat
Sam - we keep losing the line "what a remarkable young man" -- please check and review
Isaak - "as I can prove by my record" line - mixing up words
Brayden - after you do the finger/hat bit with Nathan and cross stage right, you can just hold the hat, you don't have to keep it on your finger!
Sarah - wait longer to enter before Marry the Man scene, let Adelaide come in and sit down and be sad at the bench for a second
Sarah and Adelaide - Marry the Man is ADORABLE - you are so cute together!! Keep the strength of the last line vocally! - and that's the climax of the great plan you just came up with!! Don't let it die at the end.
Please read the notes thoroughly ;)
TECH RUN 3/30
FUGUE – don’t let the newspapers become distracting, ending note is so nice and strong!!!!
FOLLOW THE FOLD – YAY!
OLDEST ESTABLISHED – MUCH BETTER - mic’ed friends – whisper a little quieter now on "crap game:, Nathan, don’t take so long after you cut off, give that dice roll cue faster please!
I’LL KNOW – Y’ALL. YES. SO GOOD. Thank u for applying ur notes
VOCAL FINISH – it sounds gorgeous, if u could give me a tiny bit more power in that last phrase we will have literal perfection
BUSHEL – GIRLS!! YES!!! EXACTLY!!! PERFECT!!!!
LAMENT – P.E.R.F.E.C.T.
Mission Band - Come in RIGHT WHEN YOU HEAR FOLLOW THE FOLD
GUYS AND DOLLS – YES!!! Little timing issue in the beginning section but we recovered so well. ALLIE THAT WAS PERFECT PLS DO IT JUST LIKE THAT. THAT LAST HARMONY WAS SO NICE AND GORGEOUS THANK YOU LIAM GRIFFIN ALLIE AND JUDE
HAVAN YOU GOTTA TAKE YOUR TABLES OFF PEOPLE!!!
BELL – SOUNDS GORGEOUS, great recovery on the lyric flub!!!
My time of day - lets try to run this once before curtain up tomorrow :)
NEVER BEEN IN LOVE – connor - “wine” was better!!! Little more diction and we will be 100%!
Emily -so sweet so gorgeous, heart eyes heart eyes heart eyes!!!
MINK – emma that was BEST. EVER. “I was wanna those girls im screaming” and “eek” – our costumes are distracting from our voice so project more here, make sure its nice and strong!
MORE I CANNOT WISH YOU – YES KWWWUEEEEEEENNNNNNNNNNN
LUCK BE A LADY – YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SO MUCH MORE DICTION, ENSEMBLE SOUNDED AMAZING!!!! Connor great job applying those notes that was EXACTLY right!!!!
GRAB UR CRATES PPL
SUE ME – lets practice that cue tomorrow before curtain but good recovery!!!!
SIT DOWN – TEARS. SO GOOD. LIAM THANK YOU FOR FIXING THAT TIMING!!!
MARRY THE MAN – GREAT!
KIDS GET OUT OF WAY FOR ADELAIDE QUICK CHANGE
HAPPY ENDING – don’t forget that last section at the end of bows!
Who said "that’s a lot of nights" at the end bc that’s the funniest thing ive ever heard
If you read all the notes, come tell Miss Annie your favorite song in the show when you check in!
NOTE FOR ALL: Ensemble numbers are just sounding sloppy/timid - add more diction, review your parts to fix
NOTE FOR UNMIC'ED CAST: the house really swallows all the sound so I can barely hear y'all on stage - PLEASE PROJECT!!
NOTE FOR MIC'ED CAST: your voice is now amplified - which means your harmonies HAVE to be spot on!! please review your parts!!!
Notes by song:
TECH RUN – 3/29/22
FUGUE - SO MUCH BETTER!!!!
FOLLOW THE FOLD – Maya, ask Danielle to show you how to swing the bell
Griffin we lost the accent after Fugue!
OLDEST ESTABLISHED – Ensemble is SUPER quiet! Nathan, PLEASE practice that cue timing - everyone watch nathan for that acapella section! Notes for the acapella section were incorrect for the show run so please review!!
Follow the fold reprise – no bell arvide, too loud over the dialogue
I’ll know – closed off on chorus, create more space, just like you do on the vocal finish. Connor – more diction, especially at “stop and stare face in the throng”
Vocal finish – PERFECT.
BUSHEL – Aly – chin down on barrel and a heap, we're reaching here a bit too much
LAMENT – Mix got a little bit too poppy/contemporary
GUYS AND DOLLS – TIMING SO MUCH BETTER IN THE BEGINNING!!!!!!!!!!! Fix timing on “love”. Allie – if we’re gonna speak sing, don’t over do it too much, Allie lost your note on the ending
Aly – we lost accent a bit in jolly good fellow scene
Bell - Don’t start before your music, wait for that cue so that pause isn't so awkward
My time of day – a little flat, nick Jonas vocal breaks, needs to be more focused, timing issues on entrances are still not fixed. NEED to be fixed by next run.
Never been in love – connor - wine needs to be same placement as the the subsequent LOVE – given this note multiple times.
MEGHAN GORGEOUS GORGEOUS GORGEOUS
MINK – don't forget our slide on REMOVE, mix got a little pop/contemporary again
Aly – we lost the accent in scene after mink
MORE I CANNOT WISH YOU – beginning section sounded a little timd – need to find balance between softer dynamic and timid. Some phrases sound a bit unfinished, don’t make every When we get to "music I can wish you", should be fully opened up at this point, still sounds closed off.
LUCK BE A LADY – connor - DICTION, “STICK” needs more ummphhh, BOYS REVIEW THE HARMONIES!!! MIC’ED GIRLIES THANK YOU!!! ACED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SUE ME – track still wrong, working on fixing. Nathan - NO SQUEAKING on the Adelaides. Ending note was right!
SIT DOWN – ensemble is REAL sloppy on this one. track needs to be louder, liam fix timing on “sailed away”, don’t let hat distract you from the song, sam hold out that note, or at least until arvide and sarah join in. break between it is awkward
GUYS FOLLOW THE FOLD – UNISON melody (mission band do not sing harmonies here)
MARRY THE MAN – SO GOOD. SO SO SO SO SOSOS OSOSOSOSOSOSOOSSOOOOO GOOD. (Meghan, the really low stop was a lil bit funnier), make sure the last tomorrow is SUPER STRONG
Happy Ending - Stronger cut off at the end!
If you made it to the end of the notes, please tell Ms. Annie your favorite color when she signs you in tomorrow!
Overture
Anya and Isaak change “current” handshake
Oldest Established
Cassidy pull downstage at beginning opposite of Allie into a horseshoe
Monique get in formation in clump
Alli angle stage left then right on where’s the action where’s the game
Bushel
Split center
Pin headpieces
CIRCLE 6 chasses step back right with right arm going up (5,6) and over to connect small of back with left foot bevel (7,8) before continuing into grapevine around
Interact with tables when open up at end
Guys & Dolls
Better Jude & Allie, even more character
Stuff the bags
So cute!!
Havana
Even more fluidity in the upper body and energy- super playful
Corrina great job. Eyes up even more
Mink
Ellie and Anya split enter in the beginning
Way more face and character
Crapshooters
This really fell apart
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE review and practice choreography
Luck
More levels at the beginning and stay frozen
Cassidy and Brynlee split center
Isaak wrong arm and direction of turn in clumps
Monique and stage left lines clarify spacing
Please review all choreography
Sit Down
Review counts for up and over benches
Bigger cleaner arms at the end
Come find me tonight and give me one of the above notes that applies to you!