Comparison

Make notes as you listen to each poem for the first time. For both poems:

• Write down or draw the pictures that come to mind as you listen to the poem.

• Jot down any words that stick out for you, or other words that come to mind as you listen, even if they're not in the poem.

• What feelings does the poem evoke?

• What words or phrases stand out? Is the poet emphasizing these as he or she reads the poem? How? Do the poets pause before or after? Speak louder? More quietly?

Then, decide whether the reading is effective. Consider the following:

• Is the emphasis the speaker makes, or the way he or she uses her voice, suitable to the poem?

• Did you notice any patterns in the sounds?

• Was there repetition in the poem? If so, what effect did it have on you?

• Did the reading bring out the "music" of the poem?

• Was there a rhythmic quality to the words?

• Did the reader use his or her breath in a way that suited the poem?

Make as many notes as you need to address these questions. You will likely have a half to one full page of notes for each poem.