Describe or narrate a scenario about a pill found two generations into a future in which society as we know it has come apart. Your description should address issues related to algorithms and elicit feelings of admiration. (<--I'm choosing to disregard the feelings of admiration as it doesn't fit with where I want to take the narrative)
My prompted crafted on the basis on the two above:
The elders do not tell us much about how the world ended. What we know we learn from holostories and the brave ones who sneak out into the forbidden zone and bring back stories and random objects. Though the few that come back do not tend to talk much. To cross the barrier, you have to stop taking the pill distributed to us by the AlgoRythm. "Everyone fits in, and everything has a place, and nothing is never more but always enough", chant a group of hatchlings in the GridSpace. Always enough. And never more. Including feelings--dangerous, uncontrollable human feelings that always wanted more--more shiny things, more food, more speed, more pleasure, more, more, more...
The elders tell us that the Greedkind, the Burners, the Eaters -- the people before us have 3 names -- were so hungry that they ate all the animals, and plants, and drank all the water, and everything turned to ash, and the air was sour. Then the Machines took over and there was order and AlgoRythm was put in place.
Now we, the Greyborn, are content. AlgoRythm knows what we are, what we need, and when we need it.
Except for me.
The elders do not tell us much about how the world ended. What we know we learn from holostories and the brave ones who sneak out into the forbidden zone and bring back stories and random objects. Though the few that come back do not tend to talk much. To cross the barrier, you have to stop taking the pill distributed to us by the AlgoRythm.
"Everyone fits in, and everything has a place, and nothing is never more but always enough," chant a group of hatchlings in the GridSpace.
Always enough. And never more.
Including feelings—dangerous, uncontrollable human feelings that always wanted more—more shiny things, more food, more speed, more pleasure, more, more, more...
The elders tell us that the Greedkind, the Burners, the Eaters—yes, the people before us have three names—were so hungry that they ate all the animals, and plants, and drank all the water, and everything turned to ash, and the air was sour. Then the Machines took over and there was order, and AlgoRythm was put in place.
Now we, the Greyborn, are content.
AlgoRythm knows what we are, what we need, and when we need it.
Except for me.
I stopped taking the pill six cycles ago. At first, everything was noise. Brightness and shape and scent. The color of the air changed. I could hear my own thoughts scraping against the inside of my skull like claws. I didn’t sleep for three rotations. I saw things—remembered things—that weren’t mine. A jungle with birds that screamed, water that fell from the sky, a face with eyes that smiled. None of these things exist now.
Or do they?
That’s the trick the pill hides from you.
It doesn't just remove the bad. It removes the maybe.
Now I walk the GridSpace and watch the others—hatchlings chirping out chants like static, elders with their hollow eyes and mechanical grace—and I wonder if any of them feel it too. The itching behind the thought. The little crack in the Perfect Enough.
Last dark-cycle, someone left a feather in my ration slot. A real one. Bent and grey, brittle at the tip. The Machines do not make feathers. They say birds are mythcode—imagined, not real. But I held it. I smelled it. It was old. And someone knew I would understand.
There are others. I can feel them.
They drift just beneath the surface of this world like shadows under ice. They know what the elders won’t say, what the Machines can’t code. That there is more. That once we were not just managed, not just fit in. We were wild. We were loud. We were broken. We were alive.
I hide the feather in my sleepchamber.
Tomorrow, I stop pretending.
Tomorrow, I step beyond the barrier.
And if the stories are true, if the sky is real and the trees still breathe—
Then I will remember what it means to want.
Working on this task has been fun! My goal was to craft a prompt that would establish the framework of a dystopian society—one stripped of traditional structures and saturated with algorithmic control—and then invite ChatGPT to continue the narrative. The AI built upon my foundation in a way that felt true to my vision.
Central to my world was the pill, distributed by an omnipresent system called AlgoRythm, which suppresses emotion and desire—erasing, essentially, the essence of what makes us human. This idea was inspired by The Giver, a young adult novel that portrays a seemingly utopian society where citizens receive daily injections that mute their emotional range and remove the world’s color from their perception.
One of the most enjoyable parts of my process was working with ChatGPT to generate new languagefor this world—language being a powerful tool in any speculative fiction. I asked for ten alternative words for children, given that in my dystopia, the concept of a nuclear family no longer exists. The term “Hatchlings” immediately stood out to me. It carries unsettling implications: are children no longer born, but manufactured? Is reproduction mechanized, controlled? It evokes Brave New World by A. Huxley and deepens the reader’s unease.
Similarly, I requested names for the generation responsible for the planet’s destruction. I chose to use three: the Greedkind, the Burners, the Eaters. The repetition and variety were to emphasize the insatiable, multidimensional nature of the destruction.
What surprised me most in this hybrid writing experience is how it left me with lingering, uncomfortable questions. Is there a seed of destruction embedded in human nature? Is the collapse of our society inevitable?
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What does it mean to co-create with an AI? If a story written with the help of a machine can make me reflect and feel—then the boundary between writer and tool becomes more fluid, more blurry.
This collaboration has made me think differently about authorship and the future of storytelling. Not as a replacement of human creativity, but as a kind of mirror—one that reflects our ideas back at us with new angles and unexpected clarity I wonder where this relationship between human and machine will take us.