(EXCLUSIVELY IN ARIAL FONT!!!!!!!!)
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hi. life is unbearable rn and entropy has devolved into its base form - a fountain of self hatred. it's gotten so bad that every single character has merged into one. crimson, azure, and everyone else was only a fragment of myself. instead of all my struggles being poured into multiple characters, all my struggles are being poured into one. my direct reflection. i can no longer lie to myself and say that i hate my characters. my characters are myself, and there's really no way around that now. the entropy document has been deleted, and i'm abandoning the project. i'm sorry.
goodbye.
Hello, once again. Really, really sorry about the length between the updates this time. There was a lot of stuff going on in my personal life, and I wasn't really doing well mentally at the time. We're all good now, and I've been working really hard on the book! This is the biggest update yet! First of all, Chapter 3 is done! This chapter has been an unimaginably huge mental roadblock. All because of one scene... but that scene is done now... and I'm proud of it. We're heading into the Eye Of The Hurricane. This chapter will be exactly what the name implies. So much will be revealed! Discordants (and discordant forms) have been... vaguely introduced, we have the first "real" fight scene, and Azure gets to show off his cool shadow powers! Nosmirc finally "takes control" of Crimson, and the overarching mystery has been revealed... and I could go on and on about all this. but I'll stop now, haha. Here's to Chapter 4, and to the many chapters that come after!
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- CHAPTER THREE IS COMPLETE!!!!!!!
- renamed chapter three to "calm before the storm" because the leetspeak was too quirky for me
- Introduced... Spectral Laboratories, 043, 012, P2, D3, D1, D4, D30 [Ebony], (honorable mentions: D31, D7, D24, D6, D14, D11, D20, D28, D32, and D16 [Azure] and D22 [Crimson/Nosmirc])
- Named Chapter 4: "Eye of the Hurricane"
- New fight scene with D31.
- Coffee shop scene... complete.
- Nosmirc being helpful for once?????
- DISCORDANT FORMS introduced.
- Disconnection Theory introduced and vaguely hinted at what it is.
- Crimson_has_a_mini_panic_attack.txt
- Vaguely hinted at D30's identity...
- Vaguely hinted at Azure being... actually I'll just let you figure that one out yourself.
- Richard from Entropy 1.0 makes an abusive return!
- Riley has been (vaguely) mentioned, everyone is happy now.
- Crimson x Azure is still real. <3
v2.2.4 - April 11, 2024
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Hello! So much has happened since I last wrote here. Lets get into it, shall we? First of all, Crimson x Azure is now real. I hate you all. (that's a joke, i love y'all <3) There is now more "exposition" for Nosmirc, and why he does what he does. Before that, we have more "weird" things going on with Azure... maybe involving the spirits of the dead? I've introduced Julia Tortura as a character now! Funnily enough, she's probably one of the best written characters in the book at the moment... and she has 3 paragraphs to her name. An old friend, who you might recognize, (if you read entropy during the dark ages of 1.0...) will be coming soon! Speaking of 1.0... Here's a little secret... Scroll down to the bottom of the vault... I've left a secret there! That's all for now, see you in 2.2.5! Check out what I'm working on in the to-do list tab!
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- negated the effects of the previous update (seriously, what was that?)
- crimson x azure is now real
- exposition for azure
- added the character "Julia Tortura"
- started a chess game in the comments next to azure's dreamscape
- reverted that scene with nosmirc back to its original state (it's finally over. acceptance.)
- cleaned up grammar, punctuation, and point of view inconsistencies (spring cleaning!)
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- renamed chapter zero to "silver string on the clothing attire"
- renamed chapter one to "i cant sleep and i cant move"
- renamed chapter two to "the five senses dont work"
- renamed chapter three to "relax before the hurricane begins"
- added the character "Dark Red"
- added the character "Slightly Lighter Than Normal Blue"
- renamed the book to "a thermodynamic quantity representing the unavailability of a system's thermal energy for conversion into mechanical work, often interpreted as the degree of disorder or randomness in the system"
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Hello, small update. A couple things happened. Not much to say here, just read the update notes below.
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- renamed chapter three to "c4lm b3f0r3 th3 5t0rm"
- watered down the nosmirc scene at the end of chapter two once more (not again...)
- CRIMSON X AZURE IS NOT REAL
- worked on chapter one and two to make them flow better
- started planning for restaurant scene (ITS NOT REAL ITS NOT REAL ITS NOT REAL)
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This idea for chapter three, you know, with time repeating? It's not good. It's a lot like a filler chapter. And I don't really want to have a filler chapter. So, I'm scrapping all of it, (you can find it in the vault!) and instead, taking it from where Crimson met Azure. No time loops, just pure story. So, I need to figure out a new name for this chapter. I'm very tempted to take a song lyric from "Team" by acloudyskye but uhhhhh that would be too long... Maybe something to do with Tortura? Torturas Testing (lmao)... no. that wouldn't work. Maybe... i can reuse the old chapter name from chapter one? No... Okay, let's just use "Julia Tortura" as a placeholder until I think of something better.
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- removed Azure (temporarily)
- removed like 87% of chapter three
- re-added like 33% of the 87% that was deleted from chapter three
- re-added Azure
- un-ruined the ruined un-ruined ruined un-ruined subway part and then deleted like 90% of it
- decided the first parts of chapter three were ok and re-added them
- crimson x azure isn't real please stoppppppppp
- removed the heavy foreshadowing :(
- renamed chapter three to "Julia Tortura" as a placeholder
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Small update, finally added Azure. It actually happened. Before March, too. Yay!!
update notes
- added Azure (FINALLY!!!!!)
- un-ruined the ruined un-ruined subway part (this is getting out of hand)
- added heavy foreshadowing ;)
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We did it! We made it to 2.2! That’s six years less than RobTop! And on this day, (well, yesterday, but shhhhhh) we made it to Chapter Three, “Repeat The Cycle Again” (name subject to change), and finished Chapter Two’s Draft! I began to start some cleanup on chapter two, just like I did for chapter one. I also, simultaneously worked on chapter three. I originally planned on Crimson meeting Julia Tortura on the subway, but then I scrapped the idea. Too early in the chapter. But then, I had a revelation. (spoilers, highlight to read) What if, Julia Tortura was the subway driver, and she was going to crash it, on purpose? Crimson would have to stop her from doing that, and THEN he would have to kill her! It’s perfect! *laughs maniacally* Anyway, I plan to introduce Azure in this chapter, but if that does not work out, then I’ll just introduce them in chapter four. See you… probably in late february? Maybe early march? I may make some minor updates, but the big update is not coming until later.
update notes
- CHAPTER TWO DRAFT IS COMPLETE!!!!! WOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!
- watered down the nosmirc scene, just a little bit.
- added some cool text sizing to the nosmirc part to give more *emphasis*
- added some page numbers to the bottom right of pages
- watered down the nosmirc scene, again. (im very uncomfy reading it)
- made a nice subway scene in chapter three (very peaceful and comfy)
- watered down the nosmirc scene, again (x2). (it’s so self-loathing)
- Ruin The Subway Scene (Any% World Record in 4:22)
- introduced azure
- removed azure (IT KEEPS HAPPENING!!!!!)
- un-ruined the subway part
- ruined the un-ruining of the subway part
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Well, it’s been a while, hasn’t it? It’s the new year, and I intend to work even harder on entropy! This means less updates, but the updates will be more fleshed out. Now, to the actual things. I’m almost done with chapter two, I just need to add some final touches. Thinking about chapter three, and I’m thinking about a time loop. You know, the ones where the main character dies, then wakes up right back where they were about an hour before. Gotta cause some more mental trauma for Crimson, eh? I also renamed the chapters, once again. You can see those names below. That's all for now, see you in… probably… early february?
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- chapter one renamed to: insomnia paralysis
- chapter two renamed to: sensory deprivation
- nosmirc content!!!!
- fixed some point of view inconsistencies
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Started the Soul Center segment. I renamed chapter one and chapter two. Tried introducing Azure (the involuntary necromancer), but thought it didn’t fit into the story this early. Cleaned up chapter one some more.
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- chapter one renamed to: infrared insomnia
- chapter two renamed to: scapegoat
- introduced azure
- removed azure
- introduced azure (again)
- made azure a necromancer
- removed azure (again)
- chapter one cleanup
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Started some general cleanup for chapter one. I removed a ton of elipses. Which made the story sound a lot better. Also worked on chapter two some more.
update notes
- chapter one cleanup
- got feedback from writingforums
- heavy foreshadowing added ;)
- ate egg 🥚
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CHAPTER ONE DRAFT IS DONE! It is six pages, which is pretty good! I’m starting on chapter two now. But I won’t be making much progress on the book now. I have to study for midterms, which is the priority.
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- chapter one draft done
- removed copy pasted nightmare scene
- chapter two is unnamed infrared insomnia
- new title stylizing
- changed letter to discordant labs bloodspire labs spectral labs
- got feedback from tutor.com
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Got more feedback from writingforums, finished the first draft of the main conflict with Crimson and Nosmirc. Copy+Pasted the nightmare scene from v2.1.2. Also ate a waffle. It was good. 🧇🧇
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- got feedback from writingforums (thanks theglasshouse)
- worked on chapter one
- finished first draft of forest conflict scene (crimson + nosmirc)
- procrastinated the timeline some more
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Nothing much, just started more work on chapter one, set up the first conflict between Crimson and Nosmirc, and added the mailperson character.
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- worked on chapter one
- new characters: mailperson
- started revising a few parts of chapter one
- procrastinated the timeline
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Well I got some “constructive criticism” from my brother, (basically he called entropy bad in 17 different languages) and I am NOT taking that. I removed all of the beginning, and I'm restarting FROM SCRATCH. The only thing i’m keeping is the beginning poem, and the little thing after the hands scene. That’s it.
I’m going to take my mothers feedback and write an in-universe timeline, and then a timeline following crimson. And I got the writing forums feedback, and I'm going to start semantic mapping.
update notes
- restarting entropy entirely (again)
- started to write a timeline for entropy
- started semantic mapping
- new characters: boss now replaced w/ mailperson
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Thinking about the plot… it needs to transition into normality somehow… Also made the scene break icon. And worked on chapter one, as always.
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- made the scene switch icon
- sent story to writingforums for feedback
- worked on chapter one
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Got a little thing for chapter zero. A little poem that provides a little exposition, and gets the reader hooked! Also started work on chapter one, which is called “eternal night”
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- made the chapter zero poem, title undecided silver lining
- started work on chapter one of entropy, eternal night
- added some text coloring to “silver lining”
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Alright, I’m finally doing it. I'm starting Entropy back up again. I got the basics done, and I'm thinking about a beginning. It’s gonna be the same plot, but… better. I will probably go in depth with the “split personality” thing. I will be keeping the text effects, but I will also make a document without them, for reader satisfaction.
update notes
- restarted entropy entirely
- placement of title and blurb moved to center
- changed the font of the title to rubik glitch
- changed the font of the blurb to homemade apple
- made the traditional “prologue” header to “chapter zero” because i think it sounds really cool