Formative Assessment for Writing

ELNG 310 Portfolio Activity Week 6

Formative Assessment for Writing

Names: Karlee Andres, Dayle Deck, Carolyn Garnier, Crystal Flegel, Carla Ash, Brenna Fonagy

Read the three samples of writing provided on our UR Courses page.

Only look at the first sample in each pdf.

For each piece:

a. Identify qualities in the writing. What is this student able to do? What do you notice?

b. Identify an Area of Growth, provide and explanation for this decision

Sample 1

Grade 2 - First story

a) -student is able to retell a story, with basic details.

b) -this student could work on capital letters and periods

  • Finger spaces

  • Different sentence starters

  • Letter size (might help if they were given paper with bigger lines and a center dotted line for visual)

Sample 2

Grade 4 - First story

a. - good amount of detail, and ideas

b. - there isn't much flow to the sentence and paragraph structure

- idea is too big for his short story

- pick one idea and focus more on it than all over

Sample 3

Grade 7 - Second Story

a) - informative

-Stays on topic

-knowledge is there, they have the right idea but could use a bit more resources to look up info

-descriptive words

b) - they are struggling with tenses

  • Spelling could use some work

  • Sentence structure

  • Capitals



For one piece:

c. Provide a specific learning experience (mini-lesson) you would use to support this student

d. The learning experience should include a detailed account of how you would teach it.

· What materials will you need?

· What will you say?

· How will you model the experience?

· Remember to reference the source of the learning experience

· Please do not simply use a worksheet

Which sample?

Sample 1

Grade 2 - First story

a) -student is able to retell a story, with basic details.

b) -this student could work on capital letters and periods

  • Finger spaces

  • Different sentence starters

  • Letter size (might help if they were given paper with bigger lines and a center dotted line for visual)

Learning experience


Formative Assessment for Writing Lesson Plan
Writing Improvement Rubric

I created this rubric individually.