My revision for this literature review was defining honors student and revising the paragraphs on perfectionism and personality. I added a definition of an honors student, stating that an honors student is a student who has been accepted into their college's honors college. In my original version, I ended the paragraphs on perfectionism and personality traits with direct quotes. I added a new sentence to end the paragraph so that the paragraphs ended with my ideas and not someone else’s. My last revision was fixing an in text citation error. I had incorrectly typed in "2016" instead of "2006".