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This is my first project of the class. I didn't do really good on this, but after some time in the class I realized what I did wrong. If you would like, you could compare the original essay to the revised one and see what changes I've made!
Description: "To complete this assignment, you will analyze the rhetorical effects of one or more of the modes of self-
presentation listed in your textbook (see Becoming Rhetorical page 23-24)"
My First Attempt
I was pretty shy here. I provided a lot of details, but not enough relevant or more descriptive details. This was also way too short and not in the correct format. I also briefly mentioned rhetoric due to my behavior not being accurately addressed. Thus, I couldn't draw a connection between rhetoric and my behavior correctly.
My Second Attempt
I was more willing to share relevant details. This created more understanding and possibly more connection to anyone reading. I also provided more analysis to each of my behavior descriptions so I could accurately tie rhetoric and my behavior correctly.
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