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This is my Hatchet mini essay.
Me and Brian’s differences and similars
Luis Ochoa
Brian is a character from a book called Hatchet. He has been through many struggles like surviving a plane crash, surviving a tornado, a porcupine and a moose, and having to hunt to get food or find food also, he struggles with his parents being divorced and arguing.
Some struggles that I had, compared to brian are, Brian parents are divorced and my parents are not divorced but were super close to divorcing but they didn't. Also Brian was not humble when he survived but I am humble. I know Brian brian is not very humble because when he survived the tornado and the moose he was taunting nature.
Which shows that he is not humble. Also I know his parents divorced because in the book it said “ The word divorced it’s a ugly word, that means fighting and yelling”.Then in the book it said “ I always knew my mom wanted to break up”. This shows how these two pieces of evidence show how Brian’s parents are divorced. And that compares to me because my parents were arguing and almost got divorced.
Also me and brian had both got stung/hit by an animal. I know this because in the story I remember that brian got hit by a porcupine, and I got stung by a bee on my arm. I know brian got stung by a porcupine because in the story it tells you that he got hit by a porcupine and survived. This shows how I know brian got hit by a porcupine. Also when I got stung by a bee on my arm I was ok but it still kinda hurt.
Also I had never been on a plane before and Brian has been on a plane before. I know this because in the story it tells the reader about how Brian was on an airplane, and it crashed in a forest. This shows how I know that Brian has been on a plane before. Also I have never been on an airplane and it is not because I'm or scared of it just because it's the only other place . This shows overall that me and brian have some common and some uncommon things.
This is my mimi Persuasive essay
Should Teens Have
Part-Time Jobs?
Do you want your son or daughter or even your brother/sister to get money while they're still a teen? Well if you do then you will agree with me because I think teens should have part-times jobs. See there are multiple reasons why teens should have jobs. The first reason is responsibility, the second reason is savings and lastly it's to get things they want.
Okay so let me explain first up is responsibility when kids turn into teens they still need to learn responsibility especially when kids are 14-18 years old. The reason is when kids have jobs they can learn responsibility from what type of jobs they get; for example if a teen gets a job at a movie theater they can get responsibility when they have to clean up the trash on the floor.
Or when they have to lead/help people to where they need to go and what room. And with that type of responsibility teens can become very successful and organized later in their life. Second is savings. Teens can start to save money while they're still young so, once they get older they can have money that is saved up already and can maybe even buy a car depending on how-
much money they saved up as a teen. Or with the saved money you can keep saving until you have enough money to even buy a house while still at a young age. Teens can also help their parents with saved money like if their parents need a little more money to pay something like rent, or bills, teens can give them that money they need. And if your kid wants to go to college-
they can be able to pay for those classes with the saved up money from their part time job. Like when my sister had a part-time job so she could have some money for college classes. And finally teens can buy things they want. When kids turn into teens they explore new things like new fashion that fits them or electronics they want. Some examples are when kids turn into-
teens might like different clothes then they used to as a kid. Like I have a brother who used to always like to wear shorts and slides but once he turned into a teen he started to always wear pants with boots. But that was a long time ago now he's an adult and he still wears that. Also when teens have a phone or social media they can see cool things online that they might want-
to buy. And you might be thinking why would teens have part-time jobs when they have to focus on school instead and my answer is teens don't have to work on school days they can work on weekends or after school if they really want to. You might also be thinking what kind of jobs they can work at, as a teen they have the option to work at a
movie theater, fast food place or-
something else you might want to do. So this is why I think that teens should have a part-time job not only just for responsibility, savings, or things they want but to prepare themselves when they become adults.
THE GREEN WING
Start your story here: (At the forest)
“It's super dark out here I can't see anything, we should turn on the flash light.” Said Andy.
“But don’t you know about the GREEN WING? And what will happen if he sees light in the forest at dark.” Says Jacob.
Andy-“Green Wing? Like if that story is real now turn on the flash light or we will never get out of here.”
Jacob-“But it is real, remember what grandpa said?”
Jacob-“He said when he was a kid he and his friends were out in the forest camping, but once they had many lights on by the time it hit nighttime and the Green Wing came flying to them.”
Andy-“He only said that because we were kids and probably just wanted to scare us.”
Andy-“So can you please TURN ON THE FLASHLIGHT.”
Jacob-“Fine.”
(Click Bob turns on the flashlight)
Andy-“Don't worry were probably not that far from a road remember when we crashed the bikes we fell down the hill
and fell into the river and now we're in the forest…”
Jacob-“It sounds like we're lost.”
Andy-“Ok you know what we might be lost, it's okay we will get home soon now that we can actually see where we're going.”
Jacob-“Oh no mom is probably worried about us, what are we going to do and how are we gonna explain that we lost the bikes they bought us for christmas.”
Andy-“Can you calm down, being lost is already stressful, and now I have to be stuck with you too.”
Andy-“So let's hurry and…”
(WHOOSH WHOOSH)
(The boys both stop and look at the air as if something flew by them so fast they couldn't see it.¨
(In fear Jacob says) “Did you hear that?”
Andy-“Of course I did why else would I be looking up”-Andy
(WHOOSH WHOOSH)
(The boys saw something green in the air this time that looked like a big bird almost as tall as 6 feet, and looked like it was mostly blue but green wings and 2 heads with 2 necks and 2 arms with 2 legs)
(Said Jacob in fear) “GREEN WING!!!!”
Andy-“RUN!!”-Andy
Andy-“Follow me jacob and quick turn off the flashlight”-Andy
Jacob-“Okay wait, it's not turning off. How do I turn it off if it doesn't work?!”-Jacob
Andy-“Just throw it in that tree look”-Andy
(Bob quickly throws the flashlight as far as he can while running)
Andy-“Look come over here you get the left one I got the right one”
Jacob-“Okay”-Jacob
(The boys find logs with that has nothing inside so they quickly get inside)
Jacob-“I think we got away”
Andy- “Be quite”
(Nothing is heard everything is quite)
Jacob-” I don’t hear nothing”
Andy-”I SAID BE QUITE”
Jacob-”Ok sorry”
(Out of nowhere the flash light is floating?)
Jacob-”Do you see that? How is the flash light floating and looking at us I threw it away?”
Andy-”Wait its not floating, SOMETHING IS HOLDING IT BUT WE CAN’T SEE IT”
Andy-”RUNNNNN!!!”
(The boys run as fast as they can to hide from whatever was holding it while their running they hear something following them so they hide behind a big tree in the dark)
Jacob-”What are we going to do when it finds us we can’t keep running”
Andy-”Im sorry but I know what we have to do”
Jacob-”Wait what?”
Andy-”We going to have to kill it”
Jacob-”WAIT NO NO WE CAN’T”
Jacob-”We will die if we even try”
Andy-”Oh yeah then what else can we do except run, and it will eventually catch up to us.”
Jacob-”Fine I guess you're right, here get this stick and I will get the other one”
Andy-”Ok good luck”
(Everything is quite the monster has finally got to where their hiding and is smelling them he knows their close)
Andy-”1……2……3…..ATTACK”
Jacob-”AHHHH TAKE THIS”
Green Wing-”AHH STOP STOP THAT HURTS”
(The boys stop and look at each other like they just saw a ghost walk past them)
Jacob-”Did you just talk?”
Green Wing-”Yes don’t you know about me the Green Wing I am the nicest monster of my family I don’t attack humans I help them when their lost like yall are”
Andy-”Wait how do you know were lost and not just camping, and I thought you were the one who hunted the forest in the night”
Green Wing-”First I can see everyone in this forest and I heard a loud crash over here and yall were the closest ones here so I figured that y'all are lost and not camping.”
Green Wing-”And the Green Wing y’all are talking about is my dad he doesn’t like humans in his forest but now that he passed away I own this forest and im friendly.”
Jacob-”Wait, I didn't know you had a family?”
Green Wing-”Yeah, about that I have 1 older brother his name is red wing
This is my monster story I haven't finished it but, this is it for now.