Sentence Improvement

SENTENCE IMPROVEMENT

In questions given below, a part of the sentence is italicised and underlined. Below are given alternatives to the italicised part which may improve the sentence. Choose the correct alternative. In case no improvement is needed, option 'D' is the answer.

1. The workers are hell bent at getting what is due to them.

A.hell bent on getting B.hell bent for getting C.hell bent upon getting D.No improvement

2. When it was feared that the serfs might go too far and gain their freedom from serfdom, the protestant leaders joined the princes at crushing them.

A.into crushing B.in crushing C.without crushing D.No improvement

3. If the room had been brighter, I would have been able to read for a while before bed time.

A.If the room was brighter B.If the room are brighter

C.Had the room been brighter D.No improvement

4. The record for the biggest tiger hunt has not been met since 1911 when Lord Hardinge. then Viceroy of India, shot a tiger than measured 11 feet and 6 inches.

A.improved B.broken C.bettered D.No improvement

5. His powerful desire brought about his downfall.

A.His intense desire B.His desire for power C.His fatal desire D.No improvement

6. Will you kindly open the knot?

A.untie B.break C.loose D.No improvement

7. He sent a word to me that he would be coming late.

A.sent word B.had sent a word C.sent words D.No improvement

8. John had told me that he hasn't done it yet.

A.told B.tells C.was telling D.No improvement

9. If he had time he will call you.

A.would have B.would have had C.has D.No improvement

10. Will you lend me few rupees in this hour of need?

A.lend me any rupees B.borrow me a few rupees

C.lend me a few rupees D.No improvement

11. During his long discourse, he did not touch that point.

A.touch upon B.touch on C.touch of D.No improvement

12. He found a wooden broken chair in the room.

A.wooden and broken chair B.broken wooden chair

C.broken and wooden chair D.No improvement

13. He could not look anything in the dark room.

A.look at B.see C.see through D.No improvement

14. The greatest thing in style is to have a use of metaphor.

A.knowledge B.command C.need D.No improvement

15. While crossing the highway a five year old child was knocked out by a passing car.

A.away B.up C.down D.No improvement

16.I hoping not to be disturbed, I sat down in my easy chair to read the book. I won as a prize.

A.I had won as a prize B.I have won as prize C.I had to win as a prize D.No improvement

17. More than one person was killed in accident.

A.were killed B.are killed C.have been killed D.No improvement

18.No one could explain how a calm and balanced person like him could penetrate such a mindless act on his friends.

A.perpetuate B.perpetrate C.precipitate D.No improvement

19.Five years ago today, I am sitting in a small Japanese car, driving across Poland towards Berlin.

A.was sitting B.sat C.have been sitting D.No improvement

20.I took the cycle which he bought yesterday.

A.that he bought yesterday B.that which he had bought yesterday

C.that he had bought yesterday D.No improvement

21.Please make it a point to send you letter at my address.

A.on my address B.to my address C.in my address D.No improvement

22.If you are living near a market place you should be ready to bear the disturbances caused by traffic.

A.to bear upon B.to bear with C.to bear away D.No improvement

23.I hope you won't object to me watching while you work.

A.against me watching B.me to watch C.to my watching D.No improvement

24.You cannot forbid him leaving.

A.he leaving B.his leaving C.him to leave D.No improvement

25.You have come here with a view to insult me.

A.to insulting me B.of insulting me C.for insulting me D.No improvement

26.20 kms are not a great distance in these days of fast moving vehicles.

A.is not a great distance B.is no distance

C.aren't a great distance D.No improvement

27. The more they earn, more they spend.

A.More they earn, more they spend B.More they earn, the more they spend

C.The more they earn, the more they spend D.No improvement

28.It became clear that the strangers were heading into a serious disaster.

A.along B.towards C.for D.No improvement

29.The dissidents hold a great problem in every political party.

A.cause B.give C.pose D.No improvement

30. I would have waited for you at the station if I knew that you would come.

A.had known B.was knowing C.have known D.No improvement

31.They are social insects, living in communities, regulated by definite laws, each member of society bearing well-defined and separate part in the work of a colony.

A.who are living in communities B.living among a community

C.who lives with a community D.No improvement

32.Practically every part of the banana tree is used by man.

A.each part B.any part C.most part D.No improvement

33. My opinion for the film is that it will bag the national ward.

A.opinion to B.opinion about C.opinion on D.No improvement

34.The end of the examinations is (an) oppurtunity for celebrating.

A.chance B.moment C.occasion D.No improvement

35.We were not the wiser for all this effort to explain the case to us.

A.none B.neither C.nevertheless D.No improvement

36.Whenever my students come across new words, I ask them to look for them in the dictionary.

A.to look it up B.to look them up C.to look at them D.No improvement

37.We look forward to hear from you.

A.hearing B.have heard C.listen D.No improvement

38.It was indeed a shock for her, but she has later recovered from it.

A.since B.then C.afterwards D.No improvement

39.Realising is the significance of technical education for developing country, the government laid aside a large sum on it during the last plan-period.

A.laid up B.set aside C.laid out D.No improvement

40.If you are not clear about the meaning of a word, it is wise to look to a dictionary.

A.look for B.look at C.look up D.No improvement

41.You are warned against committing the same mistake again.

A.to commit B.for committing C.against to commit D.No improvement

42.No sooner he had returned home then his mother felt happy.

A.had he returned home when B.he had returned home than

C.did he return home than D.No improvement

43. He should move on to the next point, and not harp one sting only.

A.harp on string only B.harp only one string C.harp upon one string only D.No improvement

44. Either he or I am going.

A.he or I are going B.he is going or I am C.I or he is going D.No improvement

45. I hope you vividly remember the premier of the film when I, my wife and you were present in the hall.

A.my wife, I and you B.you, I and my wife C.my wife, you and I D.No improvement

46.To get one's name in the Rowland Ward's book of hunting records was the hot ambition of every serious hunter.

A.extreme B.burning C.high D.No improvement

47.Taxpayers are to be conscious of their privileges.

A.have to B.need C.ought to D.No improvement

48.As she was suffering from high fever, she could not face the examination.

A.bear B.suffer C.take D.No improvement

49. The demonstration passed off peacefully.

A.passed out B.passed away C.passed on D.No improvement

50.Every time I go in a lift to my sixth floor apartment, I remember the calm and serenity of my ancestral home in the village.

A.move in a lift B.ascend in a lift C.take a lift D.No improvement

51.In fact, if it hadn't been for his invaluable advice on so many occasions I wouldn't have achieved anything in life.

A.remarkable advice B.valuable advices C.priceless suggestion D.No improvement

52.Mr. Smith arrived at India in June last year.

A.to B.by C.in D.No improvement

53. But in all these cases conversion from scale have well-formulated.

A.can be well-formulated B.are well-formulated

C.well-formulated D. No improvement

54.With a thundering roar the huge rocket soared up from the launching pad.

A.flew up B.went upwards C.took off D.No improvement

55.There is dearth of woman doctor in our state. We shall have to recruit some from the other states.

A.women doctor B.woman doctors C.women doctors D.No improvement

56. If you cross the line you will be disqualified.

A.cross upon the line B.cross on the line C.cross out the line D.No improvement

57.Why the dinosaurs died out is not known.

A.it is not known B.the reason is not known C.that is not known D.No improvement

58. His father won't be able to leave for Varnasi until they have arrived.

A.until they arrive B.until they will have arrived C.until they will arrive D.No improvement

59.I will not go to school, if it shall rain tomorrow.

A.it would rain tomorrow B.it will rain tomorrow C.it rains tomorrow D.No

60.If I stood alone in defence of truth, and the whole world is banded against me and against truth. I would fight them all.

A.will be banded B.were banded C.banded D.No improvement

61.He has not and can never be in the good books of his employer because he lacks honesty.

A.has not and cannot be B.has not and can never been

C.has not been and can never be D.No improvement

62.When the examinations were over Anil and me went to our native town.

A.me and Anil B.Anil and I C.I and Anil D.No improvement

63.Our office clock is not so correct as it should be it is usually five minutes fast.

A.right B.regular C.accurate D.No improvement

64.The cloud of misfortunes appears to have blown out.

A.over B.up C.away D.No improvement

65.While we would like that all Indian Children to go to school, we need to ponder why they do not.

A.that all the Indian children B.if all the children of India

C.all Indian children D.No improvement

66.In India today many of our intellectuals still talk in terms of the French Revolution and the Rights of Man, not appreciating that much has happened since then.

A.much has been happening B.much had happened

C.much might happen D.No improvement

67.I shall be grateful to you if you are of help to me now.

A.help B.would help C.helped D.No improvement

68.The logic of Berlin wall already had been undermined but when the news came through that the wall itself had been opened I jumped into a car.

A.had been undetermined already B.had already been undetermined

C.had been already undetermined D.No improvement

69.Other countries have eradicated this disease ten years ago.

A.eradicated B.had eradicated C.did eradicated D.No improvement

70.Young men and women should get habituated to reading and writing about current affairs.

A.used B.prepared C.trained D.No improvement

71.The poor villagers have waited in the bitter cold for more than 4 hours now.

A.have been waiting B.had waited C.has been waiting D.No improvement

72.The old man felled some trees in the garden with hardly no effort at all.

A.hard effort B.hardly any effort tC.a hardly any effort D.No improvement

73.The company goes to great length to ensure that employees can be comfortable in their work environment.

A.are comfortable B.will be comfortable C.should be comfortable D.No

74. I want you to clearly understand that excuses won't do

A.you clearly to understand B.you to understand clearly

C.to clearly understand you D.No improvement

75. He was fined for careless driving.

A.got fined B.fined C.was to be fined D.No improvement

76.Although India is still by far a poor country, it can become rich if its natural and human resources are fully utilised.

A.few and far between B.by and large C.by and by D.No improvement

77.The reason why he wrote the letter was because he could not contact him over the phone.

A.why he wrote the letter was since B.for which he wrote the letter because

C.why he wrote the letter was that D.No improvement

78.As he is past his teens now, he can look for himself.

A.after B.to C.around D.No improvement

79.There is no more room for you in this compartment.

A.there is no more seat B.there is no more space

C.there is no more accommodation D.No improvement

80.Most donors would seriously protest any effort to extrapolate from such limited data.

A.protest against B.protest at C.protest to D.No improvement

81.She says she's already paid me back, but I can't remember, so I 'll have to take her word.

A.to take her word true B.to take her at her word

C.to take her word for it D.No improvement

82.If you had attended the meeting, you would have benefited a great deal.

A.could benefit B.would benefit C.benefited D.No improvement

83.This matter admits of no excuse.

A.admits to B.admits from C.admits D.No improvement

84. If he would have tried he would have succeeded.

A.is tried B.was tried C.had tried D.No improvement

85.It will be no good trying to find an excuse next time.

A.to try to find B.to try finding C.trying finding D.No improvement

86. Please remind me of posting these letters to my relatives.

A.by posting B.to post C.for posting D.No improvement

87.Not a word they spoke to the unfortunate wife about it

A.did they speak B.they will speak C.they had spoken D.No improvement

88.Not long back, in Japan, a mysterious nerve gas affected a large number of people.

A.effected B.infected C.infested D.No improvement

89.We had nothing to eat since 8'o clock, this morning.

A.have had nothing B.has had nothing C.did have nothing D.No improvement

90.We did not see this movie yet.

A.have seen B.have not seen C.have seen DNo improvement

91.My friend was in hospital for a week after an accident.

A.through B.following C.for D.No improvement

92. All, but her, had made an attempt.

A.All, but she, B.All, but herself, C.All, but her, D.No improvement

93.Whatever to our other problems. we have no shortcoming to cheap labour in India.

A.default B.deficit C.scarcity D.No improvement

94.I have lived in Delhi since I was four.

A.am living B.lived C.had lived D.No improvement

95.This telephone number is not existing.

A.has not existed B.does not exist C.has not been existing D.No improvement

96.I shall not go untill I am invited.

A.till I am invited B.Unless I am invited C.if not I am invited D.No improvement

97.He died in the year 1960 at 11pm on 14 July.

A.on 14 July in the year 1960 at 11pm B.in the year 1960 on 14 July at 11pm

C.at 11pm on 14 July in the year 1960 D.No improvement

98.Due to these reason we are all in favour of universal compulsory education.

A.Out of these reasons B.For these reasons C.By these reasons D.No

99.I love the man so well that I wish he should overlive me.

A.May overlive me b) ought to overlive me c) might overlive me d)Try to overlie me

100.Can this machine be adopted in farm work.

a)By b)into c) for d) to e) no correction

101.When the Prime Minister said this, we know whom he was eluding to.

a)Referring b) alluding c) hinting d) suggesting

102.The weather was not good; it was a bit pleasant.

a)A little b) to some extent c) fairly d) rather

103.He lives in his remote colony since August 1989.

a)Is living b) has been living c) has lived d) continues to live

104.Other countries have eradicated this disease ten years ago.

a)Eradicated b) had eradicated c) did eradicate d) no improvement

105.We were not the wiser for all his effort to explain the case to us.

a)None b)neither c) nevertheless d) no improvement

106.If I stood alone in defence of truth, and the whole world is banded against me and against truth, I would fight them all.

a)Will be banded b) were banded c) banded d) no improvement

107.During his long discourse, he did not touch that point.

a)Touch upon b) touch on c) touch of d) no improvement

108.For all our powers of reason and understanding we know a little about life’s secrets.

a)A little of life’s secrets. (b) Little about life’s secrets.

c)Nothing about life’s secrets. (d) No improvement

109.You have come her with a view to insult me.

a) to insulting me b) of insulting me c) for insulting me

110. This matter admits of no excuse.

a) admits to b) admits from c) admits d) no improvement