POV essay

Reflection: My POV essay is proving that third person is better than first person. I wrote about how the tow articles and why one is worse than another. Then I wrote a comparison paragraph to compare the two articles. One of my weaknesses was picking out a piece of data, I was never sure if the data I was using was good enough. One of my strengths is writing explanations, I feel like I can include everything I need when explaining a piece of evidence. For my future writing piece I hope to pick out a good piece of evidence for my claim.