Austin's Butterfly

Notice how this first-grader revised his drawing by making six drafts.

Apply this to your writing pieces. Think about the kind of feedback that can help you make it better and then be persistent at trying to make improvements.

Part One - The Assignment

Part Two - First Draft

Part Three - Giving Feedback

Part Four - More Feedback and More Drafts

Part Five - Perseverance Pays Off

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All Six Drafts: