honest, straightforward, one-on-one script consulting for everyone.


Comprehensive Critique

This is a thorough 8-10 page analysis of your script with specific advice on how to improve every aspect of your screenplay.

For less than the price of cursory “coverage” , you’ll get a comprehensive appraisal of:

  • plot
  • character
  • dialogue
  • presentation and formatting
  • audience and industry reader reception
  • next steps

If you have questions, feel free to email me. I'm happy to tailor the critique to your specific needs.