Editor's Notes--Jerome W. McFadden

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Issue 73, Summer 2023

Hello, readers!

Summer is (finally) with us and that brings a myriad of activities such as swimming, biking, picnics, playing in the yard or going to the beach—as well as gardening and doing all those chores outside the house that we have been thinking about all winter, turning us into jacks-of-all-trades, which is defined in the dictionary as "one who can do any kind of work or business.”

Writers, too, can fit this definition. Many talented writers can excel at poetry, short stories, and novels, as well as journalism and magazine articles. In other words, they are jacks-of-all-trades. Which brings us to our theme for this issue: A Jack-of-All-Trades: Everyman's Tales.

Our featured story is Peter J. Barbour's "Henry Smith's Seasonings," but Peter is also doing this edition's Literary Learnings, about The Wizard of Oz. Our author interview in this issue is with Emily P.W. Murphy, who has just published a children's book.

We also have three outstanding poems. “Extravagance” by Bruce Parker is a look at the future that has already arrived. "From the Tech Table at the Ritz Carlton" by Morgan Driscoll offers sardonic insight into today's commerce. "My Mother's Umbrella Stand" by Claudia M. Reder gives an emotional insight to a mother's sickness.

But not to be left out, “Ogglemate” by Margaret Kelliher is a fun story about going to a summer carnival and winning a goldfish.

Enjoy your summer and our creative jacks-of-all-trades writers. And maybe you, too, can show us your ability to cross the lines in your writing efforts.


Issue 68, Spring 2022


I hate arguing with people who know more than I do, but somewhere along the way these smarter guys messed up big time when they created the calendar. If I were in charge (which is never going to happen), the year would end on March 31st and the New Year start April 1st. Why? Because life starts all abuzz the first weeks of spring.

Winters (in my mind) are a dormant period: cold, snow, ice, short days with long nights, nothing growing (I am talking northern hemisphere here, guys – and ignoring you ski bunnies). Come spring, trees remember they have leaves, birds return from their winter vacations, grass spurts up and turns green, insects awaken with bursts of energy, and bees are all abuzz around a world of budding flowers. Bears even come out of their dens to ask what’s for breakfast. It’s a New Year all abuzz

And we, too, are all abuzz with our Spring issue: new stories, new writers,  new poems, and new efforts from some of our favorite authors. First up, BWG’s own Daniel Krippene regales readers with our featured story, “Desert Buzz.” True to its title, small buzzing things play a part in a budding romance. But never fear, bug-loathers; these busy buzzers have beaks and feathers! For our other stories, William Sharon’s “Jacob” peeks into the perspective of a young man with an extraordinary mind, while Richard L. Shelby’s “Saturday Afternoon at the Wash & Dry, Fluff & Fold” muses on life, love, and the consequences of the choices we make. Our Spring 2022 issue is especially rich in poetry, with Alexander Zera, Christopher Clauss, and Maggie Kennedy all offering their musings on family, the changing of the seasons, and how to make the best of the moments we’re given—good thoughts for spring!

The BWG’s own Christopher Ochs handles this issue’s interview. We were very lucky to snag Peter Prellwitz, author of the sci-fi Shards series, with ten novels and eight anthologies to his credit. The words of the prolific Mr. Prellwitz, who also writes under the name H.K. Devonshire, should prove both inspiring and thought-provoking for fans and fellow writers alike.

Finally, as usual, the BWG Roundtable is happy to supply writers with Betty’s Tips, a column featuring links to interesting and useful sites, as well as this issue’s Literary Learnings, in which Carol L. Wright takes us beyond the romantic aspect of Jane Austen’s novels to view the practical foundation of the lovers’ relationships.

That’s it for this issue! We’ll be back in the summer with our lazy Unplugged issue. But for now, keep buzzing busily away!


Issue 65, Summer 2021


I spent the hottest summer of my life in Muscatine, Iowa. It was a summer job at the local ketchup factory. In the first five minutes on the job, I discovered that every tomato in the state of Iowa ripens on the same day. I stood on the loading docks with my fellow summer employees, mostly college kids, looking at line of farm trucks that stretched over the far horizon. Twelve hours a day, six days a week, under a broiling sun, we hoisted baskets of tomatoes from the back of the trucks to the conveyer belts, with the foremen and the farmers shouting at us to move faster. It was hotter than sin. Being a fast talker with no shame, I tried to finagle my way inside the factory.


I succeeded. They hooked me into a leather vest and gave me a hose then hoisted me high up to lower me inside an empty railroad tanker to wash out the residue. Other tankers to follow. Out of the sun and into an oven that was hotter than sin. More fast talking. Now down to the warehouses. The mighty Mississippi flooded that summer, and the warehouses were inundated with soggy crushed cardboard cartons and broken bottles of ketchup bleeding red muck into an endless sludge of Mississippi mud. Don’t ask about the smell. Our job: Shovel it out. Indoors, out the sun, but hotter than sin.


All of which made me curious to see what our contributors could come up with when we said that our summer theme was “Hotter Than Sin.” I was delighted, and you will be too, as you read their stories. They have dug into the essence of the term “Hotter Than Sin.”


Happy reading.


P.S. It took me years before I could ever eat ketchup again!

In this issue: Here’s what our authors have come up with for this theme. Our featured story, “A Good Man,” by Dustin Lawrence Lovell, weaves a tale of crime and punishment in the heat of the American West. Dan Morey takes on sin in San Francisco in “The Body in the Blue Kimono,” while Margaret Kelliher’s “Churros and Treasure” tells a sweeter tale of a food truck at a beach. Our own BWG member, D.T. Krippene, goes otherworldly with our theme in his story “Hot as Sin.” In addition to stories, we have two poems to offer, Amera Elwesef’s “Prayers on Our House Roof,” which speaks of cooking bananas and feeding the hungry, and Deryn Pittar’s “Desist,” depicting a slice of Maori history. We’re extremely proud of all our writers and are proud to publish their work.


As well as the stories, this issue of the BWG offers an interview with author and BWG member Pete Barbour, editor Dianna Sinovic’s perspective on the work of Philip K. Dick, and numerous helpful links for the writers among our readers. Stay cool this summer, and don’t sin. We hope to see you back in three months, ready to fall into place with the BWG’s next issue.

Issue 63, Winter 2021

Part of the fun of being a writer is the love of words, which also includes a love for the history and mystery of words. I often find myself wondering “Where did that word come from? And did its meaning get transformed into something else over the years?” The word “January” is a good example. Who came up with that word, and why? With a little research, I discovered that January is a very old word whose meaning has not changed or mutated over the years—or centuries, in fact.

Back in the good old days of Ancient (very ancient) Rome, about eight centuries before the Christian era, the calendar year began in March (not a bad idea if you hate winter!) with only ten months being counted. The year still ended in December but skipped the two cold months. (Good for you guys!) Then Numa Pompilius came along and added the two extra months. History is not sure if he was the second king of Rome or if he ruled in 715 or 673 BCE, but they give him full credit for adding January and February to fill in the missing gap. (The blame falls on you, old Pompi!)

Where did old Pompi get the idea for January? From the god Janus, a minor deity not worth a temple or a hell-raising clergy, but who seemed to be running around Rome since the beginning of time. In fact, January was present at the creation of the world and assigned to guard the gates of heaven—St. Peter must have been bumped him out of the job a little later. Symbolizing change and transitions, January was also two faced; one visage looking back at the past, the other surveying the future. That pretty well sums up January doesn’t it? The old year is gone, and the new year is now here, in our face. Auld Lang Syne and all that.

And we are here, too, the Bethlehem Writers Roundtable, eagerly facing the new year with a new format, with new challenges and new hopes, looking for new poems and exciting stories. We look to discover wonderful new writers and poets while also saluting our past, proud of how far we have come, celebrating the delightful poets and writers we have met, and the selection of excellent stories and poems we have published.

You did good, old Pompi! January is a damn fine name. Now we gotta work on February.

In the meantime, enjoy the winter 2021 issue of the Roundtable. Our interviewee for these cold months is none other than Charlaine Harris, best-selling author of the Sookie Stackhouse series, among other exciting works. She will be the judge of this year’s short story competition, which is now open for entry—so sit up and take note all you writers! Our theme for this anthology and the next is “mystery stories,” so, readers, confound us!

Speaking of our contest, you’ll meet several of last year’s writers in this issue. Our main stories feature Paula Gail Benson, our second-place winner with “Cosway’s Confidence,” and third-place winner Alexandra Otto with “Last But Not Leashed.” You’ll also be able to read the works of honorable mentions Debra Goldstein and Louella M. Nelson. Congratulations to all! Poetry lovers will not be neglected either, with two splendid pieces by Emma Snyder and Devon Balwit. Editor Carol Wright muses on time travel, and there are, as always, several useful links included to help you on your writing way.

Thanks for reading, and keep safe and warm this January!

Issue 58, Autumn 2019

Golden Era. This term has always intrigued me: “The Golden Era of Hollywood,” “The Golden Era of Train Travel,” “The Golden Era of Radio,” etc. The term sounds both joyous and melancholy at the same time, as if there was a magical epoch for some activity, but we missed it because we were too young, or weren’t born yet, or were so busy doing other things that we didn’t notice the era go by.

And yet we are now in another Golden Era: the Golden Era of Short Stories. Never before has there been an era with such a proliferation of short stories being both read and written. It is a flood, a wonderful flood.

You want read a great short story? Or write one? There is a massive array of literary magazines (nearly every university and college in America has one) trying to fill their pages. Browse the internet, and you’ll find dozens of small publishers and individuals putting together hundreds of anthologies based on a theme or concept, as well as many e-zines looking for literary or genre stories. There are social sites that want to share their writers’ treasures, and individual and group blogs dedicated to sharing their own and their friends’ stories. Finally, don’t forget the immense assortment of writing contests looking to discover new talent. 

Our own BWG Roundtable is right in the mix. Our featured stories for this issue are “The Spouses Club,” by Jeanne Moran, and “A.E.S.O.P.,” by Sarah Felsted, which took, respectively, second and third place in our annual BWG short story contest, focusing on the theme of “animal stories.” These were truly outstanding efforts by Jeanne and Sarah, considering the quality and quantity of stories submitted to us.

This issue also has a fascinating interview of Kelly Jensen by BWG member Ralph Heib. Ms. Jensen, who writes science fiction and romance—sometimes both together!—is the author of twelve novels, including the Chaos Station series co-written with Jenn Burke. She’s here to talk about genres, publishing, and how to get your work noticed.

Based on our theme of family and family dysfunction, I could not, as one of your faithful co-editors, resist adding a book review of the New York Best Seller The Great Santini (also a major movie hit starring Robert Duvall) and the follow-up autobiography, The Death of Santini, by Pat Conroy. Mr. Conroy knows family dysfunction, and for many of us, his stories strike close to home.

And as usual, we have a great range of short stories and poems in our &More section that we hope you will enjoy.

All of us at the BWG Roundtable staff love to read and to publish your stories. You and we are in the Golden Era of short stories. Let’s enjoy it and take advantage of it while it is happening, so that one day we can say we were part of it. And keep on reading (and writing). 

Issue 51, Winter 2018

Writing is a lonely business. It doesn’t get done unless  you park your butt in a chair and concentrate, blocking out the physical or mental distractions around you while you are in your home niche or at a Starbucks or a library. The fact that it is lonely pushes most writers to search out writers’ groups, critique sessions, or on-line writing sites, etc, to share the writing experience.

In the beginning, joining these groups is a way to gain affirmation that you are a  writer, to maybe hear someone say “Hey, that’s not bad,” when talking about your writing efforts. But after a while you gain confidence that your efforts are indeed not bad but continue with the group, or search out new groups, and attend writing conferences, to share the pain and joy of writing.

And somewhere along the way, these other writers become warriors in arms, fellow veterans, unattached colleagues, kindred spirits . . . in other words: Friends.

But it is a strange group of friends. It is disparate group that do not necessarily share your insights, attitudes, or you values. But, if they are honest writers, writing from their hearts and souls, you share the empathy of struggling to put words on paper (or screens). It is  a very eclectic group that allows you to talk about your differences, to explore both parallels and wide divergences, as friends.

Which brings us to Sally W. Paradysz. We were friends that bonded through our writing group. We couldn’t have been more dissimilar if we had come from different planets. Nor could our writing have been more dissimilar.

Sal was a wonderful writer, and a sweet, gentle woman who wrote about her God, her faith, the wonders of nature, about the hard effort of building a home in the wilderness by her own hands, and about her friends. I am a sarcastic old man  who writes about crime, scary things, quirky things and the humor of the  dark side. She was a woman of great faith. I make it to church (grumpily) only for funerals and weddings. She was a vegetarian. I like vegetables with my meat, maybe twice a day. She went through truly  tough times as an adult. I enjoyed an entirely pleasant adulthood. (Don’t ask about the childhood!)

But we became good friends through writing. We could talk about all of this as friends, as we struggled to write from our different perspectives. I am convinced that the world needs more writers so the world can explore our differences as friends.

Most of this issue is presumed to be about Sally Paradysz.  Actually, it is about friendships.

We’re gonna miss you, Sal.

Issue 49, Summer 2017

Many of our readers are also writers. Or they want to be. If you are among them, you have probably already read at least a dozen or more books about writing, covering everything from plotting, themes, characterization, technique, grammar, formatting, etc. But the real question still remains: How to get it done? How to find the time to write? How to start the process? How to get your butt into the chair and keep it there?Here are a few simple answers that might help: 

Let the world know you are a writer: Being a writer doesn’t mean you have already published a book, or a novel, or a collection of short stories. It merely means that you write -- often, consistently, and with passion. No one asks a biker if he competes in the Tour de France. No one asks a jogger if they have been in the Olympics. No one asks a golfer if they plan to play in the Masters. You write, therefore you are a writer. Dare to tell the world.

Assume that you are going to write:Sometime soon, today, tomorrow, this week, you are going to sit down to write. Make that a fixed assumption. Not a nebulous promise to yourself. Not a tenuous wish. You know you are going to write.

Make a plan to write: Once upon a time I was a professional runner, and a great coach instilled in me that I should plan to train at the same time every day. So it becomes a habit. I often found myself dressed and out on the road without really thinking about it. This happens with writing or any other activity. Set the time of day when you can find time to write, and then keep that as your writing time. Soon you will find yourself at your desk writing, before you are even aware you’re doing it.

Volunteer to write anything: The more writing you do, the better you will become. Volunteer to write for the local neighborhood news rag, or as the secretary for an organization, or something important for a friend, etc. You will be organizing your thoughts, using words, improving your grammar, making a written document clear to others. All of this will eventually be reflected in your fiction, your creative non-fiction, your memoirs, maybe even your poetry.  I wrote an obituary this week, the first time in 20 years of writing. It tested my writing skills.  

Rewriting is writing: Don’t feel guilty if you spent your precious time rewriting one of your earlier efforts instead of writing something new. You are improving your skills. working your words. No matter what you have just written, or just rewritten, it will need more rewriting. Trust me on this. Learn to live with it. But then learn to move on to something new.

Researching is not writing. It is fun to find out about whaling ships in the 1800’s. Or how forensic professionals really do their job. But all of it is a distraction from writing. Learn a little, then move on, and come back to it when you think you need more. You’re at your desk to write, not to obtain a PhD in whaling. 

Find a deadline. Nothing inspires the writing adrenaline like a deadline. Submit to a contest that you care about, or an anthology that closes on a fixed date, or commit to an editor at an e-zine, or a literary mag, or a magazine, or newspaper.  A public commitment, staring you in the face, will always get your juices rolling.   

Happy writing! In the meantime, enjoy our summer issue.

Issue 46, Nov/Dec 2016

November and December can be tough months for writers. The holidays, travel, family, parties, shopping, plus actives you haven’t even counted on, and possibly even the weather. All of these cam take time and attention away from your writing efforts and your writing routines. Which might add the stress of guilt about not doing the writing that you had planned or hoped to do.

But you shouldn’t approach the holiday season that way. Rather you should see and embrace it as life flowing around and into your writing. This life that flows around you (and maybe over you) is what makes you a good writer. This is what writing is all about.

So back off your imposed writing routine if need be, then fill in with a writing activity when and where you can. Have a spare moment? Work on the outline of your stories or your book. Sitting at an airport? Scribble notes to describe the people sitting at the tables around you or walking past you. Going to a new region? Listen for and note new accents or expressions that people do not use at home. You’re at a holiday party and a family fight breaks out? Remember it and understand it so that you put it into one of your stories later on. You have 15 minutes or a half hour to yourself? Write. Just put something on paper. Then come back to it later, when your routine is back to normal to see if it is applicable to one of your stories.

Your writing routine may be broken up, but your love of writing should not be. Your writing muscles will be taking an enforced rest, but if you keep doing these little things, snatching writing time when available to you, your writing will come back stronger than ever. Trust it.

One of my favorite philosophies has always been - “Life is what happens to you while you were busy planning.” The holiday season is just that - life happening to you. Embrace it, pack it into your memories, and then write about it, one way or the other, when you get “back home.”

In this issue: For our Roundtable holiday season, our featured author for our November/ December issue is the talented and prolific Carol L. Wright. As you will see from the bio that accompanies her story, she has a fascinating background and a devotion to writing. Her specialty is “Cozy Mysteries,” i.e., murder mysteries that happen in gentle surroundings to gentle people, which are then investigated by nice people. A great way to gently read your way through the holidays. And the &More stories are a nice basket of holiday discoveries. And you should never, ever, miss Betty’s Tips - they are great way to explore different depths of writing that you may not have thought of before.

Above all, from all of us on our Roundtable staff: Happy Holidays!

Issue 42, Mar/Apr 2016

When I tell people that I am a writer, someone almost always immediately asks, “Oh, have you published a book?” The person asking is then almost dismissive when I answer, “No, I write short stories,” as if somehow short stores do not really count.

I compare this to a similar response I get when I tell people that I am a runner. “Oh, have you run a marathon?” No, I haven’t. I enjoy running quality 5K and 10K races. I see no reason, and have no interest in spending three to four hours running on the road. I had a championship high school career in running, went through college on a full scholarship on running, and actually ran as a professional for a couple of years after university. So I definitely consider myself a runner, although I have not trudged endlessly through a marathon.

The same in writing. I have received enough feedback on my short stories to confirm my belief that I am a writer. I do not need to plow through six months, or a year, or more, writing a book just to prove that I am a writer. Let those who enjoy that long drudge do their thing. They, too, are writers.

A good short story demands that character, setting, conflict, tension, and resolution be told in a few well chosen, exact words, in a tight time frame. Only good writers can do that well. If you can do that, you should be proud to call yourself a writer - and stand up for yourself when someone dismisses your efforts because you have not, and do not plan to write a book. You are a writer. Tell yourself that, and don’t be shy to tell others that, too.

If that is not strong enough to keep you involved in writing short stories, listen to the words of the noted Science Fiction writer, Larry Niven: “You learn by writing short stories. Keep writing short stories. The money’s in novels, but writing short stories keeps your writing lean and pointed.“

We are proud of the short stories, and the writers, that we publish. And this month our featured writer is the very talented and very prolific Diane Sismour. Her range of short stories (and books) is awesome.

In this issue: In a diversion from our usual content, our &More section this month is devoted exclusively to poetry. A great argument can be made that if you want to be a good writer, you should be reading good poetry! And we have a special interview this with the outstanding New York writer guru, Gabriela Periera, well known for her lectures/presentations at writing conferences and workshops around the country and the founder of the DIY MFA program. And of course - you never want to miss Betty’s Tips.

Issue 39, Sept/Oct 2015

We are a nation of sports fanatics. Ever wonder why? Could it be because we have an innate love of stories? All of our games have unique settings, a cast of characters, plus tension and conflict that neatly end in a clear resolution. Consider the following:

Football - A thriller novel: A large cast of violent characters trying to dominate an opposing group, set in a larger than life setting. The hero (our quarterback) leads his team to victory in a struggle with a talented evil villain (their quarterback) as the clock ticks against a deadline.

Baseball - A literary novel: The characters are almost as important as the game. The setting is well defined but can be a large setting or a small one. the timing is leisurely, with a few points of intense action and emotion, but the plot goes on. Finally, in the end, there is a resolution, more  or less, although it may be anti-climatic. But the itself game was more important than the results. 

Basketball - A short story: A tightly confined setting, a small cast of characters, a short time frame, an intense conflict filled with sharp give and take, ending in a speedy resolution

Track & Field - Flash fiction. Not enough time to define the characters, but the setting is obvious and the action is fast and furious. The resolution defines the end the story.

Lawn Bowling - a cozy mystery? And soccer?- (insert your answer here)

It would be fun to go on and on like this, sitting around a table matching our sports to their 

literary counterparts, but the underlying point remains - We love our games because they have all the elements of a great story: Setting, characters, tension, conflict (another name for plot), and resolution. Even after the game is over, we continue to recount the stories, both talking about them and writing about them  - who did what, against whom, how tense it was, and how it was finally resolved. When the tension remains high to the end, with resolution coming just before time runs out, the more we love it, and talk and write about it later. 

Maybe that is how our stories began, before we had the ability to imagine our own stories, then to write them down, so we could enjoy them over and over.

All of which makes us proud to present our own all-star line up for our Sept./Oct. issue of BWG Writers Round table.

In this issue: We are happy to present the work of  Rich Mantle, the third place winner of the 2015 SHORT STORY AWARD competition, as our featured author, backed by wonderful poets and authors by Elizabeth Kirkpatrick Vrenios, Patricia Perry Donovan, Marina Favila, and Debra H. Goldstein as our &More contributors. As usual we round out our line up with a wonderful Diane Sismour interview with romance author Jennifer Apodaca, and the always fun Betty’s Tips. 

Happy reading!

Issue 36, March/April 2015

We are an “old fashioned” editorial crew: we love stories. We admire great writing; we swoon at beautifully worded sentences and lovely descriptions, and chuckle at clever metaphors--but we always choose a great story over all of that. We constantly receive great character sketches, serious mood pieces, wonderfully written scenes that in the end are just wonderful scenes or elegant reminiscences that are in fact just “a day (or month, or year) in the life of…” And we judge all of this by one simple standard--where is the story?

What’s a story? A character(or characters) that we care for (or hate) in a conflict (plot) that leads to a logical resolution that has an emotional effect on the character, and on us, the readers. For us, story trumps even superior writing. The writing quality may be less than that in the character sketches, mood pieces, scenes, or reminiscences, if the story pulls us in and makes us root for the character as he/she wrestles through a conflict.

This does not disqualify real life memoirs or reminiscences, as long as they are told as a story--a real life story. After all, everybody’s life is a story. You are the character fighting through a conflict which changed you somehow. If this didn’t happen, you wouldn’t be trying to tell us about it.

So send us a story, real or imagined. Try hard to give us good writing, but try harder to give us a good story--and we will love you for it. 

 

In this issue: Our Featured author, Edward Ahern, shares a story of a man facing the crossroads of a passing generation with "The Cottage." Founding BWG member Courtney Annicchiarico brings us her interview with a truly remarkable young man, John Lahutsky, who overcame enormous odds and tells his story in his book, THE BOY FROM BABY HOUSE 10. Our &More authors--Jackie Davis Martin, Julia Pimblett, and Sara Etgen-Baker--bring us their stories with good characters, good challenges, and good endings. And, as always, we have Betty Wryte-Goode's tips--this time on how to avoid procrastination. 

Issue 33, September/October 2014

September and October are pivotal months in the calendar year. Some people look at this period as the beginning of the end of year: the best parts of the year, spring and summer, are past as we head towards shorter days and winter. Other folks are cheered by this period: The wonderful colors of fall, fresher weather, the start of a new school year, the beginning of the football season and the other great fall sports. New beginnings.

Writers are great ones for new beginnings: The fun of starting a new story, developing new characters, the possibility of a new acceptance, friends coming back from their summer activities and summer vacations to resume their involvement in your writers/critique group. In many ways, the fall season is as optimistic as spring.

And optimism is a key element for a successful writer. Writing is a tough business. Rejection is much more common than acceptance, with most of these rejections seemingly arbitrary, based on the subjective taste of the editor, or an opaque criterion not apparent to the writer. But the successful writer must push past this, remain optimistic, knowing that a new story will be better than the last one, and that there are people out there waiting, even anxious, to read it. The successful writer also keeps rewriting and sending out the stories that have been previously rejected, maybe many times, knowing that they will eventually find a home. The history of literature is filled with examples of writers and novelists who were rejected an astonishing number of times before they were acknowledged as truly talented writers.

Enjoy the fall. It is its own form a new beginning, a new year. Enjoy your writing. Each day, each new effort, is a beginning.

In this issue: We are happy to present the work of talented writer, Suzanne Purvis as our Featured Author. Her story mixes up hot coffee, a hot guy, and a "hot ticket" for a fun read. Our interview is with Curtis Smith, a highly respected novelist and short story author who will serve as the celebrity judge for the 2015 BWG Short Story Award. The competition opens on October 1. (See the tab above for more information.) In our &More section, we present a mix of stories dealing with transitions and family--at their best and worst. And once again we have Betty's Tips from around the Web. Happy reading--and happy new beginnings.

Issue 30, March/April 2014

Editor's Note: We are making a big change this month, converting from a monthly magazine to bi-monthly. The current issue will continue on-line for both March and April. We are making this change to put out a literary magazine of outstanding quality and pertinence that vibrates with our readers and writers. This change also has the advantage of allowing your stories and interviews to be posted on-line for a far greater period in front of a larger reading audience. You might also have noticed that we've changed our look--a bit. We hope our new color scheme enhances your reading pleasure.

In this issue: For our new bimonthly issues, we've combined our March theme, Luck of the Irish, with our theme for April, and Death and Taxes. Our featured author is Walter Bego with his scintillating tale, "Four Quarters of the Apocalypse." Diane Sismour brings us another of her in-depth interviews, this time with the fascinating Stacy Wilkes. Mike Berlin joins us for the first time in our &More Section with his short story, "A Penny Saved," and we're happy to have Gloria Alden back with her new story, "The Body in the Red Silk Dress." It's not what you think! Good reading and good writing for all. Jerome McFadden, editor.

Issue 27, December 2013

Editor's Note:  Once upon a time in an ancient but proud land, there was a tribe of so-called “cub reporters” who haunted the fringes of city newspaper press rooms. We slaved away at menial chores for menial pay and less than menial acknowledgement, covering such news stories as police blotters, church socials, water and sewage announcements,  bridge openings, baptisms, obituaries, and other “news” trivia of the back pages  We were lashed daily by the whip of the FIVE Ws of journalism: who, what, where, when, and why. If we did not have all of those in our lead paragraph or in the one or two paragraphs allotted to us, we were castigated, criticized, made fun of, and trembled for our jobs. Example: “John D. Doe, 47, of Bethlehem, was pulled out of a tree on Oak Street on Wednesday afternoon  by the Bethlehem Fire Department where he became entangled while trying to rescue his cat. Neither Mr. Doe nor his cat was injured.”

The few of us who survived moved towards the front pages, with the FIVE Ws ingrained into our psyches on whatever we wrote. They had to be in the story—otherwise we had no story. Later, when some of us moved into creative writing, we found these same five elements necessary for our fiction: Who (your character or characters), What (the conflict in your story), Where & When (the setting of your story), Why (your character/characters’ motivation).

Forgetting any one of these lessens your story. But it is easy to forget one or two of them in the heat of writing when you are immersed with your 

characters and your emotions. All five do not have to be in your lead paragraph or paragraphs but they do need to be in the story, and soon. Next time you launch into a story, think of the big FIVE Ws. They will help you set up your story!

In this issue: We have a great range of Holiday stores, featuring one of our favorite writers – Jo Ann Schaffer – with her intriguing story Cold Turkey. Her story also appears in the BWG’s new anthology, Once Around the Sun: Sweet, Funny, and Strange Tales for All Seasons, that is now in book stores. We also have an interview with Kat Fast, the winner of our 2013 BWG Writer’s Contest with her story Ave Maria, which we all loved.  Which brings up the reminder that the 2014 Bethlehem Writers Roundtable Short Story Award competition is now accepting submissions. See the announcement in this issue.  Our &Moresection follows all of this with Bill Vernon’s story Recess and Jeff Baird’s sweet Count Down To A Christmas Hug. Enjoy! --Jerome W. McFadden--co-editor 

Issue No. 24, September, 2013

Editor's Note: We have a mantra in the BWG: Crap on paper is better than crap in the mind. Translation: Write the first draft NOW, rather than endlessly playing with it in your head. If you capture the idea in the raw form, no matter how rough it is, you can always go back and re-write. It is important not to lose the crystal of the idea that you have, that bright spark of creativity, rather than to tie yourself up trying to perfect the loose thought that has not yet been written down – because you know you are going to have to re-write, anyway!

Very few people can write a perfect first version of anything.  The indisputable truth is that a good writer is a re-writer, who re-writes his or her re-writes. There is the story that Hemingway was still re-writing and editing his stories when he received the printed galleys of his stories and novels (driving his editors crazy). The moral of this story: Get your idea down on paper and then re-write and re-mold it until it reaches the original perfection that you pictured in your head. 

Then you must learn when to quit re-writing and send it in. But that is another story.

In this issue: And we have some fine people this month in our September issue who know how to shape their ideas and then send them in. Our featured author is Ruth Heil, giving us strong insights into the differences between fiction and non-fiction writers, while our lead off story for our &More section is Bankrupt by Alex Bernstein. We  have a fascinating interview with David Chesney, our 2012 Short Story Award winner, telling us the genesis for his charming story Autumn Pursuit, that will soon be published in our new anthology, Once Around the Sun: Sweet, Funny, and Strange Tales for All Seasons. We also have Catcher Ames telling us more about his high school adventures in this Back-to-School season.

Issue No. 21, June, 2013

EDITORS' NOTE: We read our slush pile. In fact, every submission we receive is read by three or four of our editorial staff.  All of us are writers but of widely different genres, which means that a story from any genre has a chance of finding a champion among us. But, although we differ greatly in our backgrounds and tastes, we are all looking for the same thing: A great story.

A great story to us means an interesting character enmeshed in an interesting situation. Our greatest joy is for such a story to jump out of the pile and grab us. Smiles all around.

Other stories generate debate and discussion but, often, with a little editing or a slight re-write by the author, the story finds a home.  That is the case for one of our &More stories for this month, “Cokie May’s Magical Day” by Laurie Long. It came to us as a good story and we were keen to publish it but felt it needed a bit of editing and re-writing. The writer worked with us and it is now a great stories that we are proud to present to you. Our other &More story, "SARs Season" by Suzanne Purvis came through our 2013 Short Story Award. It earned Honorable Mention, and once you read it you'll understand why it was so honored. 

Our Featured Author for June is Paula Benson also came through the 2013 Short Story Award competition. Her story “Long in the Tooth” took third place,  and we are honored to publish it in this month’s issue. Actually, this is the second time for Paula to be our Featured Author of the Month, as she was also our Featured Author last February. 

Whether a story comes from our slush pile or through blind judging in our annual writing contest, we like to think we know a good story when we see one--and hope you enjoy them as much as we did!

Issue No. 19, April, 2013

Editor's Note: Writers need three assets: 1) a modicum of talent; 2) a willingness to work hard at it; 3) perseverance – and perseverance may turn out to be the most important of the three. Why? Because your work, no matter what talent you are graced with, and no matter how hard you have worked, will be rejected. Maybe for justifiable reasons, maybe because of timing, maybe on a whim, or maybe for no reason at all.

James Lee Burke’s first novel was rejected 111 times over nine years. The Lost Get-Back Boogie was finally published by Louisiana State University Press in 1986 and was then nominated for a Pulitzer Prize. He has since written 36 novels and two collections of short stories- racking up numerous literary awards.

Closer to home, my friend Paul and I have shared the experience of winning Honorable Mention in major national writing contests but without publication. We both assumed the stories would be shoe-ins at some other publication – only to have the stories rejected again and again and again, over the next three years. Why? Only the writing gods know.

The solution: Keep writing, keep submitting, keep persevering. In an interview for Writer’s Digest magazine (Nov./Dec. 2011) James Lee Burke is quoted as saying, “Put your rejection slips in a shoe box and tell yourself that one day you’re going to autograph them, and sell them at auction.”

In this issue: Our featured author this month is Bethlehem Writers Group's own Sally W. Paradysz, providing us with the story of losing and finding her Dragon Red Italian scooter- done in her usual insightful and spiritual style. In our &More section we have an outstanding story called "A Winter Tail" from a newcomer to our magazine, Teresa Leigh Judd, and (how modern of us!) a delightfully eclectic Scandinavian twist from Mi West entitled "Sparrow Spring Engineers."

Finally, what many of you have been waiting for: this issue includes our announcement of our 2013 SHORT STORY AWARD winners. We are gratified by the quality of stories that were submitted to us. CONGRATULATIONS TO THIS FINE LIST OF WINNERS AND HONORABLE MENTIONS!

Issue No. 17, February, 2013

EDITORS' NOTE:  Are your New Year’s resolutions on writing still intact? If not, maybe the attached suggestions will help:

 1) Plan to write everyday. This will not happen because there will always be something that comes along during the week to interfere. But if you know you are going to write everyday, you won’t be as upset by the interruption, knowing you will be at the desk tomorrow.

2) Always write at the same time everyday. Writing at the same time everyday will quickly turn this segment of your day into a habit. Some days you might find yourself at the desk writing without realizing that you gave it any thought.

3) Do not expect everyday to be highly productive. Out of a full week, two days will probably be very productive, two days will be mediocre, and two will be like plowing hard ground. That’s the way the human mind and body works. Accept it. Go with it on the good days; work through the mediocre days; write something light, fun, or trivial on the hard days – but write a something.

4) Give yourself a day off. Give yourself a break. Everybody needs a day off. But you will be surprised how many problems, questions, scenarios will be resolved on this off day while you are out for a walk, taking a shower, etc. Just be sure that you have a notebook or piece of paper lying around so that you won’t forget them!

5) Submit your work. You’ll be surprised how much adrenalin will flow through the keyboard when you know that a world of strangers might read your story.

 

IN THIS ISSUE: This month we are featuring Paula Gail Benson as our Author of the Month. She has a fascinating background and has presented us with a sensitive, spiritual story that explores relationships in the month of valentines. Also, Diane Sismour has provided us with a great author interview with Caridad Piniero, the prolific New York Times and USA Today bestselling author of paranormal and romance novels. Our other stories include another irreverent effort by Catcher Ames and an interesting tale by Ralph Hieb.

Issue No. 13, October, 2012

EDITORS' NOTE:  I was reading the September issue of the UK’s Writing Magazine (a great writer’s magazine if you ever come across it) and was tickled by the conundrum faced by Alex Keegan: His work was plagiarized by another writer and sold to a magazine that had previously rejected the same story. The article did not explain how the unpublished piece was stolen by the plagiarist but there was no doubt that it was stolen and that it was sold to a magazine that had formerly rejected it. A better pen name? 

Who knows. But the magazine did agree with what experienced writers already know: Rejection can come from many things other than the writing itself. Wrong timing, a reader who does not like your style, the editor was in a bad mood, too many submissions that week, etc. And that leads to another thing that experienced writers know: keep faith, keep writing, and keep submitting. And that includes to us, too, the Bethlehem Writers Roundtable.

In this issue: We feature the irrepressible Headley Hauser with his story “Mortified,” plus an outstanding interview with the best-selling suspense and mystery writer Hank Phillippi Ryan. We also include two different takes from the standard ghost stories, the first by Susan Gabrielle in her sentimental “Someone to Watch Over Me,” and the way off base “The Basement,” by Catcher Ames.

Issue No. 11, August 2012

EDITORS' NOTE: Here’s a challenge for you: How short can you write a short story? The late great Ernest Hemingway once, on just such a challenge, wrote a short story in six words: “For sale. Baby shoes. Never used.”  We won’t push you to this extreme. We’ll allow you the luxury of one hundred words. Or fewer, if you want. We’ll publish the best of them in our November issue. No prizes. No Awards. Just publication of authors clever enough to tell a great story in one hundred words or fewer. Note: They must be stories—not reflections on a moment, emotional ramblings, poems, etc. By definition a story must have a setting, a character (or characters), a conflict, and a resolution. Good luck! We need to receive your story by Oct. 1 at the latest.

If you want more of a challenge, try our SHORT STORY AWARD competition. This one offers you a cash prize plus publication for our First, Second, and Third Place winners. And with this competition you can use a lot of words--up to 2,000. You may enter as many times as you want. See the official announcement in this issue. 

In this issue: We are featuring BWG’s very own Irish writer, Bernadette DeCourcey, telling us just how much she hates sharks. Our interview of Neil Pasricha tells us how he wrote a popular 1,000-word blog every day for three years and he is still going! Then finally, in our &More section we have two outstanding but very different stores from award-winning authors Richard Lutman and Ramona Scarborough plus a short piece from Catcher Ames telling you why chaperons don’t go to proms. Co-editor Jerome W. McFadden

Issue No. 9, June 2012

EDITORS' NOTE:  Researching anything that comes to your imagination is one of the fun aspects of being a writer. The difficulty is knowing when to start – and when to stop. 

Some writers prefer to wade deeply and broadly in the research before they begin writing so that they have the facts, the tone, and the myriad details on hand (and in their heads) as they write. Others prefer to start writing immediately while they have the pulse of the story and then go into the research to correct the details as part of their re-write. Either way is correct, if that way works for you.

The other decision is when to stop putting all of the great details that you learned from your research into your story. You may need enough details of how a nuclear submarine works to make your thriller story seem true–but none of your fans want to read the submarine’s operational manual just because you found it fascinating.

In this issue: Our featured author, Marianne Donley, is well known for her fun, down-to-earth stories that provide great insights to family life and the world around. Carol Wright brings us a great interview with bestselling author Barry Eisler, while our & More section has the outstanding stories “The Amish Woman,” “Angelika’s Song,”  and  “Toto in Munchkinland,” along with Anne Decker’s prize-winning flash nonfiction piece, “Backyard Raisins.” Our own Betty Wryte-Goode provides us links to information on the changing nature of publishing. Have a fun read. Co-editor Jerome W. McFadden 

Issue No. 7, April, 2012

EDITORS' NOTE: Writing fiction is hard. It is solitary. It does not get done unless you park your butt in a chair away from everyone and from all distractions and just do it. It is not written until you download it from your mind through your fingers to either paper or a computer. There is no template to measure it against to verify if it is good when you are finished. This first draft probably needs to be revised and rewritten several times to refine it before it goes public.

Getting published is harder. There are thousands of very talented (and non-talented) writers out there competing for the same space. Editors are harried. They want to find something (and someone) that is new and good but the volume of submissions, lack of time, and pressure of deadlines are counterproductive. The old route to a book career has disappeared into a morass of dying bookstores, rudderless e-books, books on demand, self publishing, etc. where writers now have to shamelessly promote themselves through a staggering mix of social media, that takes precious time away from their writing.

Making a living from writing fiction is even harder. Statistics point out that out of 311 million Americans, only 800 support themselves through fiction writing. That’s 0.00026%. Good luck with that. If you are writing fiction only for the joy and financial reward of being published, you are wandering a very lonely, very dark alley.

So why write? Because you love it. Because there is something inside you that tells you to write. Because you love words. Because you need to release the characters inside your head. Because the words and characters build a scene and the scenes build a story that you want to tell. Because you are a writer. Anything past that is a random blessing that should be fully seized and enjoyed.

In this issue: For the month of April we are featuring Sally Paradysz, a gentle, wonderful writer who has the unique ability to combine a focus on the natural world around her into deep spiritual insight. Her story “Tool Belt Spirituality” appears in the anthology, 65 Things to Do When You Retire: 65 Notable Achievers On How To Make The Most Of The Rest of your Life, available at independent bookstores, Barnes & Noble, and Amazon.com. Her colleagues in this anthology include former President Jimmy Carter and noted feminist/writer Gloria Steinem, among others. All royalties from this anthology go to cancer research.

Courtney Annicchiarico has also provided us with an important story that gives us a caring, in-depth look into raising a child with autism. Marianne Donley continues our streak of great interviews with an outstanding conversation with noted historical romance writer DeAnna Cameron.  Enjoy.  

Co-editor, Jerome W. McFadden

Issue No 4, January 2012

 Good writers are selfish. It’s the nature of the beast. With the few exceptions that make a living from their writing, all of the other good writers are stealing the time to write from their families, their friends, their other interests, and sometimes from their "real” job. They feel they have no choice: There are only so many hours in the day and good writing takes time. A lot of time.

Novelists are probably more selfish about this than short story writers or poets. Writing 90,000 to 100,000 words in itself takes time. If the writer could crank out 1,000 words per day (4 pages) on just the first draft, that will take 3 to 3 ½ months. And then there are the re-writes! If the writer is working 8 to 9 hours per day, the time has to come from somewhere else.

Note the emphasis on the term “Good Writer.” Good writers are those who write, then re-write, and re-write once again, and then verify the final proof for corrections. To quote the old phrase, good writing is re-writing.

But this is a choice. No one is making you write. The family, friends, other activities, or jobs, may be more important to you. And in most cases, should be. If you do decide to steal the time to write, you must then choose between feeling guilty or not guilty. In some cases your family and/or friends may encourage you to take this time to write – count yourself lucky. The rest of us will continue to wrestle with the time stolen vs. the level of guilt felt.

Keep writing – if that is your choice.

In this issue: Will Wright is our featured author for January, and we are pleased to publish his outstanding story, The Fall of Brother Moon, which received HONORABLE MENTION in Writer’s Digest Magazine’s 2007 NATIONAL SHORT STORY AWARD, a true achievement considering the thousands of entries in this annual writing competition. Will is a prolific writer of short stories and poems. We also have an outstanding interview on the current state of the publishing industry from Mark Tavani, Senior Editor at the prestigious Random House Publishing Group in New York. Our other features highlight a collection of beautiful poems by Ann Decker, Sally Paradysz, and Diane Sismour and an insightful post Christmas short story by Nan Scott. Finally - don’t forget to submit your entry for the BWG Short Story Award! (Jerome W. McFadden, co-editor)

Issue No. 2, Nov 2011: 

“Rejection: To dismiss as inadequate, inappropriate, or not to one’s taste.” This is how my iMac’s dictionary defines rejection. If you are a writer, a would-be writer, or a wanna-be writer, you already know the definition. It is part of the writing life. Acceptance is rare (and oh, so sweet) while rejections dominate.

    I discussed this with Paul Weidknecht, our featured writer in last month’s issue, and discovered we shared a similar experience: We both had stories receive honorable mention and placement in the top 5 at national writing contests, which stroked our egos and gave us a pretty certificate and another notch to our writing resumes. But neither story was published. So we were free to submit them to other publications. We did, assuming that well-received stores would be quickly accepted somewhere else. Wrong. Both of our stories were rejected 30 to 40 times after that, neither of them finding a home. Inappropriate, or not to someone’s taste, or maybe inadequate. Who would have guessed?

    But you have to keep trying. Re-write (maybe) and re-submit. Again and again. There are endless stories of brilliant novels (Harry Potter, anyone?) and quality short stories being endlessly rejected until someone notices the pearl lying there waiting for them.

    The bright side of this litany of rejection is that there are editors, agents, and publishers desperately searching for a good story, something to their taste, appropriate to their publication. That is how they stay in business and make a living. They are looking for you. You only have to get in front of them (submit a good story) for them to see you.

    We share that passion to find that good short story, and seek your submissions. If we reject you, it is only because that one submission is inappropriate or not to our taste. Try again.

    This month we are featuring a story by Carol L. Wright. She works hard at her writing and is a strong supporter of the writing community, both pushing and encouraging others to do their best. This story reflects her talent, hard work, and perseverance in becoming a noted and published writer. Her first novel is on the way, too. We are also pleased to present short fiction from Ralph Hieb  and flash fiction pieces from Ann Decker and Headley Hauser, all gifted writers from the Bethlehem’s Writer Group. Another of our members, Marianne Donley, has brought us an interview of best-selling author Rebecca Forster,  

    Don't miss the announcement of our first Bethlehem Writers Roundtable Writing Award competition. Prizes include cash awards and offers of publication. Details can be found at the SHORT STORY AWARD tab above. (J. McFadden)