Start your introduction with a Hook
→ make the reader interested in your topic/paper
Next, provide a few background sentences
→ on your topic in both the book and your connection (1950s, mental health, book bans, etc.)
In the background, name the author and novel title
Possible ideas:
Give a bit of background on the author or novel
when was it written?
why was it written?
End your introduction with the thesis statement
→ clearly states the topics of your body paragraphs in one sentence
**Remember to transition from one sentence to the next**
Introduce the quotation or paraphrase by setting it in context. For a nonfiction source, identify the author the first time you cite the source. For a literary source, identify the speaker or writer and the position of the quoted piece in its work for every quotation. There are three ways to introduce quotations or paraphrases:
1. You can use a full sentence followed by a colon to introduce a quotation.
Coming upon the witches, Macbeth unknowingly echoes them: “So foul and fair a day I have not seen” (1.3.39).
Economist Grant Houston lays the blame on bad government policy: “subsidies to corn growers keep the price of corn artificially low” (122).
2. You can use a lead-in naming the author or character, followed by a comma.
Often since his walk, the speaker confides, “They flash upon that inward eye/ Which is the bliss of solitude” (21-22).
According to Sanchez, parents are furious about the ban on bake sales at schools (“PTA Focuses on Food” 16).
[No quotation marks in this example because it’s a paraphrase.]
3. You can also begin a sentence with your own words and complete it with quoted words. In this case, do not use a comma before the quotation.
Mr. Bennet, however, is “among the earliest of those who waited on Mr. Bingley” (7).
Houston argues that “tariffs on imported sugar unfairly subsidize US sugar growers” (248).
What is a Paraphrase?
A paraphrase translates the source’s words into your own voice and your own words. If you copy three or more words in a row, you must put those words in quotation marks and name the source. Just like a quotation, a paraphrase is always cited in your paper and on the Works Cited page.
5 Steps to Effective Paraphrasing
Read your passage until you comprehend its full meaning. As you read, jot down bullet points on the facts or opinions presented, but do not copy "word for word" without using quotation marks.
Write out your paraphrase in full sentences.
Check your version with the original to ensure accuracy. Make any corrections about facts or details.
Use quotation marks to identify any unique phrases that you may have used directly from the source.
Record the source and page number so that you can refer back to it later when creating your citations.
Adapted from the Purdue Online Writing Lab's Guide to Paraphrasing.
The paper is not JUST comparing and/or listing your topic.
If you're writing on technology, what about technology are you trying to say? Society’s dependence on it? The positive or negative effects of technology? Must show the HOW and WHY.
Every example must be set up and broken down
Use the MEAL Plan for your body paragraphs: MAIN IDEA, EVIDENCE, ANALYZE, LINK
This means that you are introducing each MAIN idea/topic, providing your EVIDENCE, ANALYZING or explaining how that evidence relates to your topic, and then LINKing to the next paragraph.
This is not a template- this is a concept/guide!
Don’t dump all the examples from the book in one paragraph...give them room to breathe. Also by breaking them apart, you’ll have more to write!
Use literary present tense!
Spell out “television” first, then use TVs
Avoid:
Very
lots
First person
Second person
Contractions
This quote, This shows...try to explain without starting every sentence with this.
Use signal phrases…
When first introducing another source
EX: In the article “The Fifties,” author Jane Meyers states: “....
Don’t say the article says...an article can’t speak.
When using a signal phrase from the novel, put the character who is saying the quote. Bradbury is not a character in the book. If it’s narration, just leave the quote by itself.
When using pronouns, an antecedent must come first in each new paragraph.
WRONG: They use technology in the book…
RIGHT: The citizens of society use technology in the book…. They abuse it…
Formatting Titles
Books = italics
Articles = “Quotes”
Works Cited must be last page of paper
Put cursor after last line. Insert → Page Break. Do your Works Cited here.
See the handbook page 36 for a sample
MLA!
Heading (student, teacher, class, date)
Header (LastName 1)
Title - try to make as original and creative as possible
Citations!
Every body paragraph should have at least one quote...and every quote/paraphrase from a source needs an in-text citation...or it’s plagiarized!