Guiding Questions:
Here's my first attempt at an essay. My grammar is pretty good, but my writing is messy. I also need some more words to describe the things I'm writing about. Somethings to work on might be how I hold my pencil. I can also use Google Read & Write to get my ideas onto paper without worrying too much about my printing.
Here's my revised essay. Notice the printing is clearer and the ideas have better descriptive words. I used Read & Write first, then practiced my printing after.
This is the final version of my essay. It changed quite a bit. I learned how to use words to describe actions and objects. As well, I can see that I am indenting my paragraphs to show separate groups of thoughts.
I'm good at spelling and using periods. I also like to read novels like "Harry Potter" and comics.
I want to get better at how my writing looks. Right now my writing is messy an is hard to read sometimes. This happens when I rush.
I really like to write about things that interest me. I enjoy reading and writing about sports, superheros, and amusement parks.
I'm going to try to improve how my writing looks. I also want to get better at describing things in my stories.