Darius King
In this piece, my main inspiration was actually one of my friends -- I had asked her if she wanted me to write a poem about her, and she said yes, so I chose one of her most significant traits to focus on: her eyes. Eventually, the poem spun into something less specific and rather just a general poem about a set of beautiful, unavoidable eyes that held power in the form of inescapable magnetism. I really wanted to capture the beauty of them in the details I used to describe the colors, as well as the hyperboles I used to describe the impact they have on me/the speaker, as well as other people. The biggest takeaway for me this year has been the power that creating vivid imagery and solid details holds in writing, which I feel I applied to this piece and have demonstrated many times in my writing.
the bronze glare
an ember burns gold in the circle of her eyes
a golden flame shimmering brightly
against the cool darkness of her gaze—
a gaze so terrifyingly beautiful,
even medusa envies it’s power
as this bronze glare
turns it’s victims to ash
rather than stone
it is a gaze too magnetic to be ignored
but too risky to love
a gaze crafted from the sparks of a golden star
and boiled in with the greens of life and the reds of blood
‘getting lost in those eyes’ is an understatement
these eyes will swallow you whole
and take the last of your breath away
so quickly
you won’t even realize she’s taken your heart
and taken your life
before the light fades from you
i could write a thousand poems
and spin a thousand metaphors
about those eyes
and she could stop a thousand mens’ hearts
with just a glance