We've been learning about the _ING phrase (the participle phrase) and how to use it in our writing. Today it's time to put this into practice.
Writing task instructions
Duration: 1:46
Imagine you are Colvin and write about your first taste of freedom outside the dome. In your writing you must include at least one ING phrase (participle phrase).
Length: 4 paragraphs minimum
When you have finished, self review using the success criteria below and then submit for peer review and feedback.
Syllabus links
Outcomes
EN4 – 3B uses and describes language forms, features and structures of texts appropriate to a range of purposes, audiences and contexts
Develop and apply contextual knowledge
analyse and examine how effective authors control and use a variety of clause structures, including clauses embedded within the structure of a noun group/phrase or clause(ACELA1534, ACELA1545)
Understand and apply knowledge of language forms and features
interpret and analyse language choices, including sentence patterns, dialogue, imagery and other language features, in short stories, literary essays and plays(ACELT1767)
EN4-4B makes effective language choices to creatively shape meaning with accuracy and coherence.
EN4 – 5C thinks imaginatively, creatively, interpretively and critically about information, ideas and arguments to respond to and compose texts.
Develop and apply contextual knowledge
explore the ways individual interpretations of texts are influenced by students' own knowledge, values and cultural assumptions
critically consider the ways in which meaning is shaped by context, purpose, form, structure, style, content, language choices and their own personal perspective
Literacy Progression links:
GrA6
Sentence level
selects simple, compound and complex sentences to express and connect ideas, occasionally manipulating the structure for emphasis, clarity or effect
uses at least one subordinate clause in a complex sentence
Uses subordinating conjunctions ('even though' in 'Even though a storm was predicted, the search and rescue mission still went ahead.)
GrA7
Sentence level
crafts both compact and lengthy sentences with challenging structures, such as embedded/relative clauses, non-finite clauses, interrupting clauses, nominalisations, passive voice • makes more sophisticated connections between ideas by creating complex sentence
Creating Texts 8-10 Generic Indicators
CrT8
tense mostly correct throughout text (see Grammar)
consistently writes compound sentences correctly and uses a greater range of complex sentences (see Grammar)
uses a variety of sentence structures and sentence beginnings
CrT9
maintains appropriate tense throughout the text (see Grammar)
uses a range of sentences including correctly structured complex sentences (see Grammar)
• uses complex punctuation correctly (apostrophes of possession) (see Punctuation)
CrT10
uses a range of complex punctuation flexibly and correctly (see Punctuation)
uses a range of sentence types for effect
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