A thesis will:
Examples of Strong Thesis Statements:
Even though food riots are primarily blamed for the French Revolution (1789-1799), the root cause of the revolution was the heavy taxation of the French people throughout the 1700s.
The Roman Empire crumbled because of internal rather than external problems; even though invasion from outside groups weakened the empire, the real causes of Rome’s fall were political corruption, the mismanagement of money, and economic inequality.
Examples of Weak Thesis Statements:
My thesis is that it was stupid of King Henry VIII to divorce Catherine of Aragon.
In this paper, I will argue that slavery is bad.