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John Sunshine's Lost Rock 'n' Roll Tapes receives amazing feedback from WeScreenplay - Hollywood's #1 Script Coverage Service
OPENING THOUGHTS
Overall, John Sunshine’s Lost Rock and Roll Tapes is a deliciously twisted, tense little story. The pilot is a mostly self-contained chamber piece of a horror tale, and there is enough of a frame story that one can imagine this leading to a satisfyingly offbeat anthology series, where each week the gang encounters a different unsavory rock ’n’ roll character. This setup will require the show to be innovative — a different self-contained found-footage experience organized around an interview, each episode — but that feels like a fun challenge, and this is a show that definitely could succeed in the current climate. A solid story and powerful representations overall.
PLOT
The plot of the episode is very simplistic, but that’s what makes it effective. It’s difficult to find the tension and scares in what is basically just one single long conversation, but the writers do a good job building in regular jolts to keep the audience interested, unfurling the story of Killer Joe in a suspenseful, funny way that will be very entertaining to watch.
DIALOGUE
The dialogue in John Sunshine’s Lost Rock and Roll Tapes is its biggest asset. The pilot depends almost entirely on the strength of the interview, as any moments of shock and horror are captured almost incidentally by the in-story camera; the writers have done an exceptional job making the dialogue engaging, tense, funny when it needs to be, and interesting to follow. The dialogue is especially well-used to set the tone of the episode. In particular, the old man’s line on Page 2 is excellent: “I don’t know nothing about that. But he clung to those boxes like they was his soul and he was hiding from the devil.” The rapport between the friends is also excellent; the moment when everyone realizes that everyone’s being paid differently is funny and says something about each character’s personalities.
HIGHLIGHTED STRENGTH
The concept is strong and could work as half-hour series or web series because characters like JOHN, GARY, RAFFI, and TIM are intriguing and funny enough to follow around for further Rock and Roll exploits. A story set around “lost Rock and Roll tapes” that were filmed by an incompetent film crew and directed by an egotistical host offers several opportunities for humor. The dysfunctional work relationships featured here and the “mockumentary”/"found footage" film style at the center of the story also make this concept stand out from other shorts and/or series.