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Bayonet Charge By Ted Hughes
Suddenly he awoke and was running – raw
In raw-seamed hot khaki, his sweat heavy,
Stumbling across a field of clods towards a green hedge
That dazzled with rifle fire, hearing
Bullets smacking the belly out of the air –
He lugged a rifle numb as a smashed arm;
The patriotic tear that had brimmed in his eye
Sweating like molten iron from the centre of his chest,
In bewilderment then he almost stopped –
In what cold clockwork of the stars and the nations
Was he the hand pointing that second? He was running
Like a man who has jumped up in the dark and runs
Listening between his footfalls for the reason
Of his still running, and his foot hung like
Statuary in mid-stride. Then the shot-slashed furrows
Threw up a yellow hare that rolled like a flame
And crawled in a threshing circle, its mouth wide
Open silent, its eyes standing out.
He plunged past with his bayonet toward the green hedge,
King, honour, human dignity, etcetera
Dropped like luxuries in a yelling alarm
To get out of that blue crackling air
His terror’s touchy dynamite.
What is conflict?
What is power?
What is the importance of the patriotic tear?
Why do you think he froze?
Have a read through these slides, really try to engage with how the soldiers would have been feeling, can you empathise? How did this poem make you feel?
The next set of notes are the annotations made from this weeks Zoom meeting on our poem Bayonet Charge, please use them to complete your own annotations and to help in your completion of pg 27+33 for you homework task. You will be required to have them with you in the Zoom lesson next week.
Week 1 - Here is the mind map covering some of the main points we made during our Zoom lesson.
In his dark room he is finally alone
with spools of suffering set out in ordered rows.
The only light is red and softly glows,
as though this were a church and he
a priest preparing to intone a Mass.
Belfast. Beirut. Phnom Penh. All flesh is grass.
He has a job to do. Solutions slop in trays
beneath his hands, which did not tremble then
though seem to now. Rural England. Home again
to ordinary pain which simple weather can dispel,
to fields which don’t explode beneath the feet
of running children in a nightmare heat.
Something is happening. A stranger’s features
faintly start to twist before his eyes,
a half-formed ghost. He remembers the cries
of this man’s wife, how he sought approval
without words to do what someone must
and how the blood stained into foreign dust.
A hundred agonies in black and white
from which his editor will pick out five or six
for Sunday’s supplement. The reader’s eyeballs prick
with tears between the bath and pre-lunch beers.
From the aeroplane he stares impassively at where
he earns his living and they do not care.
Carol Ann Duffy
Some points to consider when reading the poem...
Can you recognise the references to photography?
What is the relevance of the colour red?
How do you think it must feel to be the one taking these photos?
Can you notice any biblical references?
Watch this video of a real-life war photographer - Don McCullin - talk about his own experiences, they are quite harrowing!
Please find below the notes from 10A and 10B's group Zoom lessons.
For your homework, please complete Page 117, which requires you to discuss your own thoughts and opinions on the job of a war photographer.
Also, complete Pages 111 and 112 which are questions about Stanza 1 and 2. These must be completed. If you can, then complete Pages 113 and 114.
10A Mrs Wyles' Class
10B Miss Mills' Class
Here is a copy of the script of An Inspector Calls. Please read from this document each time you need to read further...
Task: (2 lessons)
Using a spider diagram create a map of thoughts for the themes Social Responsibility and Class. For this you will need to think about: characters that represent these themes, events within the play, quotations and finally, the intent of Priestly for using this theme.
Once you have done this, I would like you to plan a PEE(D) paragraph that you could possibly use in an exam on the subject matter.
Point
Evidence
Explanation
Develop (What effect does this have on the reader? What effect does it have on the other characters/rest of the play? What what Priestly trying to achieve by showing this?)
Mr Arthur Birling, Sheila's father, is particularly pleased since the marriage means closer links with Crofts Limited which is run by Gerald's father. Crofts Limited is a rival company to Mr Birling's company, Birling and Company, Mr Birling hopes that these family links will bring the two competitors together to 'lower costs and higher prices'.
Gerald explains to The Inspector that he had an affair with Eva, but hasn't seen her since he ended their relationship back in Autumn 1911.
Sheila gives her engagement ring back to Gerald.
Eva approached a charity chaired by Mrs Birling to ask for help. Eva was desperate and pregnant but help was refused by Mrs Birling because she was offended by the girl calling herself 'Mrs Birling'. She tells Eva that the baby's father should be made entirely responsible. She also tells Inspector Goole that the father should be held entirely responsible and should be made an example of.
After Inspector Goole leaves, the family begin to suspect that he was not a genuine police inspector. A phone call to the Chief Constable confirms this. Next, they phone the infirmary to be informed that no suicide case has been brought in.
Mr Birling, Mrs Birling and Gerald congratulate themselves that it was all a hoax and they continue as before. This attitude upsets Sheila and Eric.
The doorbell rings unexpectedly during Mr Birling's speech to Eric and Gerald, they were not expecting a visitor. Edna Maid (the maid) announces that an inspector has arrived.
Inspector Goole says that he is investigating the death of a young woman who committed suicide, Eva Smith.
Mr Birling is shown a photograph of Eva, after initially denying recognising the woman in the photo, he remembers firing her in 1910 for organising a strike over workers pay. Birling feels justified for his actions and does not believe he committed any wrongdoing.
Inspector Goole moves the investigation over to Sheila. Sheila recalls also having Eva sacked about her manner when served by her in an upmarket department store (Eva smirked to another shop assistant about the dress Sheila tried). Sheila regrets her actions and feels hugely guilty and responsible for Eva's death.
The Inspector reveals that Eva Smith changed her name to Daisy Renton. Gerald acts guilty and Sheila notices his worry, she confronts Gerald when the Inspector leaves the room. Gerald reveals to Sheila he had an affair with Daisy Renton.
The Inspector tells them that they are all partly to blame for Eva's death and warns them of the consequences of people not being responsible for each other, "If men will not learn that lesson, when they will be taught it in fire and blood and anguish".
The phone rings. Mr Birling announces to the family that a girl has just died on her way to the infirmary, a police inspector is coming to question them.
When the women leave the room, Mr Birling lectures his son, Eric Birling, and Gerald about the importance of every man looking out for himself if he wants to get on in life.
Eric is revealed as the father. He stole money from Mr Birling's office to provide money to Eva. Eric is angry at his mother when he learns that she has refused to help Eva.
Set in April 1912, Brumley, Midlands, UK. The Birling family and Gerald Croft are celebrating Sheila Birling's engagement to Gerald with a dinner.
The Inspector turns his attention to Mrs Sybil Birling, she confesses that she also had contact with Eva, but Eva gave herself a different name to Mrs Birling.
Go through each of the characters with this PowerPoint this week and create revisions resources for each character. You will need to include:
Descriptions of the characters
How the characters speak to other characters
Any key quotes about the character
Anything that you think needs to be specifically remembered about this character.
Use this PowerPoint to remind yourself about the different steps of an essay. How do we write one? (Think back to our lessons).
You can either look at your written one from the lesson or you can read this one that 11b wrote with Mrs Wyles
'Within An Inspector Calls one of the key theme is the divide between the younger and the older generation in the play. The parents and the children are compared. Priestley also utilises the Inspector to help show this divide. Additionally the younger characters (Sheila and Eric) feel social responsibility and the older generation (Arthur and Sybil do not).'
For English Language past papers please click on the AQA Symbol to the right.
I met a traveller from an antique land,
Who said—“Two vast and trunkless legs of stone
Stand in the desert. . . . Near them, on the sand,
Half sunk a shattered visage lies, whose frown,
And wrinkled lip, and sneer of cold command,
Tell that its sculptor well those passions read
Which yet survive, stamped on these lifeless things,
The hand that mocked them, and the heart that fed;
And on the pedestal, these words appear:
My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings;
Look on my Works, ye Mighty, and despair!
Nothing beside remains. Round the decay
Of that colossal Wreck, boundless and bare
The lone and level sands stretch far away.”
Please listen to the dramatised reading of this week's poem.
If you would like a closer look at the poem before/after the zoom lesson here is a video analysis that will help you to gain that greater depth of understanding.
10A work from our Ozymandias Zoom lesson.
Pg 11 of your Power and Conflict Work Booklet.
10B Zoom Meeting notes of Ozymandias
Week Beginning 14/12/2020
This week I would like you to continue your revision. The mock exams have been postponed until after the Christmas holiday, so please take advantage of this extra time, to do this you can:
Click on the links to past papers below (don't forget you have already taken paper 1 on Literature and Language, therefore, focus on paper 2 of both)
If you are in need of support in focusing your revision, please follow the link for Oak Academy, as there are video lessons on there that are fantastic in helping you in your focus.
Look out in your parents/carer's email inbox for a Zoom link tomorrow at 11:30. In the session we will focus on exam techniques and we will touch on the 'Unseen Poetry'.
Please send me an image of your revision, to show me how well you're working, either via email or upload it as work to my 'Mrs Wyles' Google Classroom' (please see the new invite in your school inbox).
For English Language past papers please click on the AQA Symbol to the right.
For English Literature past papers please click on the AQA Symbol to the right.
Go through the PowerPoint above, to understand the differences between implicit and explicit meaning. You will look to understand why a writer might use implicit and explicit techniques in their writing. Follow the activities on the PowerPoint and complete them on the sheet.
This worksheet is a word document, you can edit this document or if you do not have word, you can write your answers on an email document and send it to me.
Microsoft office has a free downloadable version online.
Starter: What kind of person is she?
Choose one of the pictures to work with: Decide on their personality, job, family etc. If they are on their way to the shops, what might they be going to buy?
Use this as a clue to their personality. Write about their personality, write about it as a piece that uses explicit and implicit information such as describing body language or actions that suggest character. You may find it easier to describe them carrying out a task; how do they complete this task? In what manor do they move? What is their attitude to this?
Remember your learning on explicit and implicit from yesterday; you may choose to recap from yesterday and read through the PowerPoint again.
Starter: Look at these image of animals. Considering the explicit information shown in the images and the implicit information we know about the 'personalities' of animals, can you rename them? e.g. What could be a more appropriate name of a cat? A four legged snoozer?
Look back at these images from the previous lesson. Consider that this person was walking to the shops, we are going to write a description of this person walking there. However, we are going to show their personality (implicit), rather than explain their personality (explicit).
For example: we wouldn't write that 'She likes horses' (explicit). Instead we would need to show that she likes horses, such as 'she bought carrots to feed the horses in the field near her house' (Implicit).
Try to avoid using a lot of dialogue to show their personality, however you may like to use SOME.
My expectation in this writing is at least 3 paragraphs (assuming around 6 lines in each). You need to show me your ability for writing at length; you must consider your basic punctuation ( , . "") and you may want to push yourself to show your higher punctuation ability ( ; : - )
Don't forget to email me your work each day!
Independent write!
Use this image for inspiration! to write a hobbit story! The focus is to use our learning for the week. In your writing, it is key that you use both explicit and implicit descriptions.
e.g The hobbit hole was slippery from the river water trickling down the walls (explicit)
The creature knew to tread carefully through fear of slipping (Implicit).
Don't forget to have high standards of yourself with your basic punctuation ( , . ! ?) and your more complex punctuation ( ; : ( ) ).
If you are struggling with your ideas, or where to start; please begin with this senses table (below), that will help you to build your picture in your head.
20/01/2021: Begin this PowerPoint today; read the examples to help shape your answer, but try not to rely on it too heavily, use them for support. This lesson will finish on slide 16 (we will use the remaining slides in the following two lessons).
Resource:
PowerPoint for lesson content
Word document for exam sources
AQA mark scheme to help you to raise the standard of your work and to peer assess the examples given.
22/01/2021: In light of what we achieved together yesterday, I will amend the lesson expectations today, please begin where we left off yesterday (slide 9). Work up to slide 16; follow what the PowerPoint says, read the example to help you to write your own 12mark answer.
The PowerPoint will help you by asking questions about why certain techniques or phrases are used. You must ask yourself here, what effect does it have on the reader? Does this provoke an emotional response? Why would they want to draw an emotional response? What is the writer aiming to achieve?
25/01/2021: Slides 18-30 -This will require you to read the second source. Please join us for the Zoom meeting.
27/01/2021: I would like you to go to slide 31; you will see an image of children in two different classrooms in the 1950's, you will also notice the difference in ethnicity of the children in the classrooms. Please can you comment on how equal you think this education is.
You will look to comment on:
The warmth of the environment (see flowers and pictures)
The number of children in each class (are there more in one than the other?)
The quality of the resources they are given (see the whole library in the one on the right and the quality of the tables)
The genders you can see in the classrooms (are the genders separated or together?)
I would like you to voice thoughts on the quality of the education these pupils may receive in each of the two classrooms. What effect have these factors had on the pupils? Is there inequality?
My work expectation for this lesson is 1 page of writing of this, or more! Remember you are continuing to build your stamina for writing at length, so push yourselves.
27/01/2021: I would like you to go to slide 31; you will see an image of children in two different classrooms in the 1950's, you will also notice the difference in ethnicity of the children in the classrooms. Please can you comment on how equal you think this education is.
You will look to comment on:
The warmth of the environment (see flowers and pictures)
The number of children in each class (are there more in one than the other?)
The quality of the resources they are given (see the whole library in the one on the right and the quality of the tables)
The genders you can see in the classrooms (are the genders separated or together?)
I would like you to voice thoughts on the quality of the education these pupils may receive in each of the two classrooms. What effect have these factors had on the pupils? Is there inequality?
My work expectation for this lesson is 1 page of writing of this, or more! Remember you are continuing to build your stamina for writing at length, so push yourselves.
29/01/2021:
Independent Write! I would like you to write about and incident that has occurred; it could be something real that you know many details about, or it could be something totally made up.
For example:
A car accident
A bank robbery
A significant protest
the death of somebody famous or important
You are required to write two different news paper reports, one on the day after the incident and one 60 years later...sound familiar?
How will you show that it is 60 years later?
What has changed in time since this incident?
What details do you know now that you didn't know before?
Has this helped to change society's political or moral perspective?
This is a great opportunity for you to practice writing at length, it also allows you to practice editing skills to ensure you are using your lower and higher level punctuation (this includes paragraphs).
Once you have completed your work, please email it to me, or share it with me if you are using Google Docs.
Good morning all, as I am still waiting for a few lessons from people last week, I am unable to put any more work up here. Please ensure to send the work to me ASAP.
Have a good day!
04/02/2021: Please look in your inboxes for the resources today, however they are still attached above (week beginning 18/01/2021) if you need them.
You will need to start on slide 36 (for question 4) and then you will need to look at the advice again around it for support. Please follow all of the guidance given.
The word document is the file you will need, to be able to access Sources A and B (the news paper reports) sources.
Please send me your work before the end of the day. If you have any questions please email me. I can't stress strongly enough how important it is to join the Zoom meetings.
05/02/2021: Please consider what we know about Emmet Till from source A and B (you may want to read them again), you will also want to think about what has happened in the past 60 years since the event of his murder.
I would like you to write a letter to his mother, explaining to her what has happened in the 60 years since his murder.
You may want to tell her:
he was the catalyst in the thoughts of change for Rosa Parks,
about anti-discrimination laws
The change in schooling.
Successful black men and women (First black President and Vice President).
I am looking for you to show me that you know how set out your writing in the layout of a formal letter. You do not know Emmet Till's mother personally, therefore you will have a formal register. Can you find out her name from Source A?
I will also be looking for you to show me your ability to use higher level punctuation.
23/02/2021: Use the same paper to complete questions 5-8 (level 1) and 5+6 (level 2), don't forget that you must use and only use the information on the insert as your evidence.
24/02/2021: Continuing with our Functional Skills work, complete questions 8- 14 (Level 1) and questions 7-11 (level 2).
Don't forget to read all of the sources that it indicated for you to use, not just 'Source A'.
Please attend the Zoom calls where possible.
25/02/2021: Continuing with our Functional Skills work, complete questions 8- 14 (Level 1) and questions 7-11 (level 2).
Don't forget to read all of the sources that it indicated for you to use, not just 'Source A'.
Please attend the Zoom calls where possible.
This lesson is the same as yesterday, as we did not complete it the day before.
01/03/2021: If you have not completed the reading paper, please complete that today. If you have completed the reading paper, please move onto the written paper. We are only looking at question one so far. Please read the PowerPoint that accompanies it, to help you work through it. I have also included the mark scheme so that you can see what an examiner is expecting to find in your work.
Please be mindful that you are looking at the correct level. If you are unsure; please email me.
11/03/2021: At the beginning of the week, I explained that we would be working on our Speaking and Listening, ready for our GCSE Endorsement and also our Functional Skills assessments.
You will need to perform your presentation later next week; so it will need a good level of detail and prompts for you. You must consider your audience, therefore it must be pleasing to the eye and draw their attention.
Your presentation (probably PowerPoint) can be on whatever you wish, just as long as it is appropriate for school and you have the rest of the week to research and create your presentation. However, I must receive an updated copy of your presentation each day to see your progress and to give you any feedback that you may need.
Have fun and email me if you need any guidance!