Revision

Revising Checklist

• • I have read it myself

  • My Title _________________________

  • My piece has a ___________ (what kind e.g. description) beginning

  • My piece has an ______________ (what kind e.g. circular) ending

  • My paragraphs are connected by linking or transitions.

1. _________________ 2. ___________________ 3. __________________

• • My writing makes sense

  • I have had a peer conference with ____________________ and we worked on _____________________________________________________________

  • I have completed an analytic grid and my focus should be ______________________________

  • I have ADDed details 1. _______________ 2. ________________ 3.____________________

  • I Removed words and sentences that don’t make sense

  • I have moved words or sentences to another spot from ________________

  • to ___________________________

  • I substituted boring words for exciting words(boring word/new word)

1. _________________ 2. ___________________ 3. ___________________

After conference with my teacher

My Revision goal is: _____________________________________

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My Teacher’s revision goal for me is: _______________________

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• • I completed my goals on ____________________(date)