sentence revision

-Sentence revision on draft 2
Sentence level work
-Examples of sentence level work
Sentence work and revision:
-lead-in. detailed, specific, visual, directly connected to thesis
-thesis: placement, idea, word choice, wordiness, specificity
-sentences: wordiness, diction, sentence combining, punctuation
-Transitions between paragraphs and within paragraphs.
-Transitions Resource

*Make sure to rewrite sentences on the paper copy of your draft. We need to document the changes. -EXPERIMENT!!!!! This is practice!

1) Rewrite most sentences!!!!  Wordiness, diction, sentence combining, punctuation; must be rewritten in pen or pencil on your draft!!! Then make the changes in word for next class.
2) Experiment with punctuation
3) Make sure you bring your first draft 4 back with you next class! We will need it for comparison!!!!!