Miss Cyr's Shorthand
Over the years I have adopted my own shorthand and editing marks. Here is a list of what you may see
DUH: um...duh states the obvious
FABW/FABP: Find a Better Word or Find a Better Phrase Your choice is either immature, slang, or unspecific.
Hmmm: You've introduced something I need to think about
FAS: Find a synonym
AWK: awkward construct
DM: Dangling Modifier - Usually this is a prepositional phrase in the wrong place "We saw ducks riding around the lake on our bikes."
PS: Plot Summary
MOB: Moments of Brilliance
HOP: Heart Attack on Paper