2/3/17

5 Women

NOTES

• • Charlie - good crash into furniture

  • All - watch the skirts

  • skirts are better w/ shear fabric

  • All probably need to pull up the dresses often

  • choose a moment to all pull up at the same time

  • Elizabeth - watch the skirt (it should be better on a sofa and with the shear fabric)

  • all - if you distract the audience w/ skirt stuff, they will not be paying attention

  • E - got to have your lines better

  • E - louder offstage

  • Karm & Char: $6000 needs big reaction

  • E - why do you wish you knew which boy wrote on the shoes '

  • Karm - you are going too fast with lines . . . esp as you are the confident one.

  • Eliz - teeth cleaned - you dropped the word cleaned. ("clipping")

  • Kar - "I'm so sorry" need a 3 second beat before

  • Char - I've been trying to remember that name (can you be in love?) "I met him once" . . and you are blushing

  • Char - need to check in with the other girls when they say hell things . . . anything that is inappropriate. . . and sometimes try to fit in and sometimes try to fix it.

  • Kar - "piece of work" suggestive

  • Char - earing is a really dangeroud thing.

  • Eliz - lobster . . . don't let the joke get ahead of you (character doesn't know what they are going to say)

  • All - characters don't know what they are going to say

  • All at the window - "Which one do you want?" Want one of them. . . sultry eyes - leaning toward him .

  • Eliz - "he's a fag" lean toward him. then look at Kar, then back to him, then say the line.

  • Jasmine - "so ...sexy. . . " cry at this line in a funny way

  • Jasmine - slow down lines and make sure you are getting your point across to her (and the audience)

  • Jas - Kappa Sig Luau - need diction

  • Jasmine - of course I married

  • Jasmine - f word was cut

  • Karmyn - after 3 months (leaning back)

  • Jasmine - story place the image out over the audience about garbage

  • Karmyn - big reaction when she says she hasn't had sex with her husband for a year

  • Sabrina - memorize by the beats.

  • Sabrina - make sure you are looking at something always. . . unless it is totally in your head.

  • Kar - if you are keeping that F word then make it really good. Otherwise it is just gratuitous. (supposed to be CUT)

  • Kar - make sure when your are too emotional. . . it is getting too real, you can't look at another girl

  • Kar - whole section about lifeguard and stuff is all serious

  • All - place Tony Valentine exactly - last row, 3rd from the end

  • Sab - almost spill the food on the girls

  • Sab - keep the F word.

• All - you are always getting ready to talk at any minute.

  • all - after jasmine says you all don't like her. . .we need a 4 second pause.

  • all - slowly look at Sabrina when asked doesn't she have any friends.

  • Jasmine - after she calls him garbage you need a physical reaction

  • Sabrina - you need to sober up

Monday

- no calling line. . .

Needs

• • Music Opening

  • Practice w/ lights

  • Champagne Magnum

  • Ring for Elizabeth

  • food on the tray