In this section you will answer your historical question. You will analyze and evaluate evidence from a variety of primary and secondary sources to reach a conclusion.
This section should be approximately 1300 words long and accounts for a majority of the marks available.
0
The work does not reach a standard described by the descriptors below.
1-3
The investigation lacks clarity and coherence, and is poorly organized. Where there is a recognizable structure there is minimal focus on the task.
The response contains little or no critical analysis. It may consist mostly of generalizations and poorly substantiated assertions.
Reference is made to evidence from sources, but there is no analysis of that evidence.
4-6
There is an attempt to organize the investigation but this is only partially successful, and the investigation lacks clarity and coherence.
The investigation contains some limited critical analysis but the response is primarily narrative/descriptive in nature, rather than analytical.
Evidence from sources is included, but is not integrated into the analysis/argument.
7-9
The investigation is generally clear and well organized, but there is some repetition or lack of clarity in places.
The response moves beyond description to include some analysis or critical commentary, but this is not sustained.
There is an attempt to integrate evidence from sources with the analysis/argument.
There may be awareness of different perspectives, but these perspectives are not evaluated.
10-12
The investigation is generally clear and well organized, although there may be some repetition or lack of clarity in places.
The investigation contains critical analysis, although this analysis may lack development or clarity.
Evidence from a range of sources is used to support the argument.
There is awareness and some evaluation of different perspectives.
The investigation argues to a reasoned conclusion.
13-15
The investigation is clear, coherent and effectively organized.
The investigation contains well-developed critical analysis that is focused clearly on the stated question.
Evidence from a range of sources is used effectively to support the argument.
There is evaluation of different perspectives.
The investigation argues to a reasoned conclusion consistent with the evidence & arguments provided.
In general, your investigation should include an introduction, multiple body paragraphs, and a clear conclusion.
Introduction (100-150 words)
Hook
Background
Thesis
Body Paragraphs (1000-1100 words)
You should include 3-4 body paragraphs. Each paragraph should present a different main argument, theme, or perspective.
Remember the acronym PEEL:
Point - start with a clear topic sentence that outlines the main idea
Evidence - properly cite evidence from a few different sources; it is good to present evidence representing multiple perspectives
Evaluate - analyze and evaluate your evidence - What does it mean? Why is it credible? What limits its credibility? (consider OPCVL)
Link - make a clear link to your thesis statement or transition to the next body paragraph
Conclusion (100-150 words)
Restate your thesis including main points - Restate means to write it in a different way than you did before
Don't add new evidence
You may suggest areas for further investigation
not citing your sources using in-text (parenthetical) citations - THIS IS PLAGIARISM
writing a narrative rather than analytical essay
not addressing diverse perspectives on the topic
providing too much background information; not enough focus on answering the question
taking all evidence at face value without evaluating the sources (think OPCVL)
quoting evidence directly that should be paraphrased or summarized instead
The Cold War started in mid to late 1945 and ended in 1991. Its inception began when relations between the Union of Soviet Socialist Republics and the United States started to deteriorate and as their relationship began to be filled with suspicion and resentment. Both countries were vying to be global superpowers in order to secure their survival in a potential World War. The growth of each then led the other to gain suspicion, which led to a falling out and the start of the Cold War. From this, the controversy of the more responsible party in the Cold War between the United States and the USSR emerges. The historiography on this subject consists of pro-Soviet accounts, which blame the west, the United States, for the war, traditionalist accounts, which accuse the USSR’s aggressive nature in trying to convert its surrounding countries to communism, imposing their ways of life, and the post-revisionist view in that it only occurred due to a common misunderstanding between both sides. All three of these views will be further explored in order to deduce who was at fault for the war. Through investigation, it is made clear that the Cold War only occurred due to a common misconception between both superpowers. With further scrutinization of all views, it is seen that the best explanation belongs to that of the post-revisionists. The foundation of this perspective being that the Cold War was already inevitable meaning that it was not the fault of the United States, or the USSR, but was instead a direct result of post-World War II land grabs.
As previously mentioned, pro-Soviet historians discreetly blame the United States of America for the war. Joseph Stalin, the leader of the USSR, believed if the world was divided into two camps, imperialism and capitalism would be in one and communism and all other progressive forms of government would be in the other (Cold War: Soviet Perspectives, 2013). Along with Stalin, but to a lesser extent, many historians, like Pechatnov, held a similar belief. “ For American and British planners the Soviet Union with its hostile ideology and huge military capability became the next logical candidate after Nazi Germany for the role of Eurasian hegemonic power an emergence of which the U.S. and its allies tried to prevent in two world wars” (Pechatnov, 2010). By presenting it this way, Pechatnov highlights the United States aim to eradicate communism to be motivated by self-interest. Any global hegemonic power, especially communist, threatened the United States capitalist economy as it could potentially complicate the current U.S. markets. The United States only sought to destroy the USSR to make certain that they would be able to get their products and goods into foreign markets, which would not be allowed with communism’s global establishment. This selfish cause led the United States to pass the Communist Control Act in 1954, serving as a justification to act on current tensions that were in place between the two countries and allow conflict with the opposing power to begin.
In contrast to the belief of the pro-Soviet historians, traditionalist(orthodox) historians thought the USSR directly caused the conflict. Those in western countries held this view, especially in the United States. Similar to how Nazi Germany’s continual expansion was viewed, Western Nations depicted the continual expansion of the Soviet as obsessive and recognized this expansion as the USSR acting in compliance with their doctrine of Marxist-Leninism (Haynes 12). This doctrine read of how it was the Soviet’s obligation to combine the whole known world into one collective communist nation through the means of an international revolution (Cold War: Soviet Perspectives, 2013). Meaning that their expansion was the start of an attempt on potential world domination. Along with this, traditionalists were outraged that the USSR had stayed in Poland past the amount of time that they said they were going to stay, which was until a communist leader was elected. Traditionalists hold this as a violation of the post-world war Yalta Agreement of 1945, which let the USSR stay in Poland, temporarily occupying it with troops to stabilize the country. As the Soviets stayed longer than what was agreed upon, they were therefore breaking the agreement. Traditionalists also believe the agreement by Roosevelt to be too generous towards the Soviets and, “accuse him of ‘handing over’ Eastern Europe and Northeast Asia to the Soviet Union at Yalta despite the fact that the Soviets did make many substantial concessions” (The Yalta Conference, U.S. Department of State). This is where traditionalist historians, like Haynes, are convinced all relations dissolved and the Cold War began to commence.
Taking into account both sides of this argument, a third perspective was born to give a better explanation. Historians with this perspective are labeled Post-Revisionists. These historians identified the perspectives of traditionalist and pro-Soviet historians as extreme, so they took views from each side, and along with time for reflection, understood each side’s struggles and could see the war from a middle ground (Gaddis, “The Emerging Post-Revisionist Synthesis” 10). John Lewis Gaddis was the pioneer of this school of thought. “Both the United States and the Soviet Union had been born in revolution. Both embraced ideologies with global aspirations: what worked at home, their leaders assumed, would also do so for the rest of the world” (Gaddis, The Cold War: a New History 7). He saw them both as global superpowers, trying to protect their own securities and interests. Their reality worked so well for them that they assumed it would work well for everyone else and decided it was high time to change it. Aware that communism and capitalism could not fully function on a small scale, this war of ideologies was inevitable. Unlike the other perspectives, post-revisionist historians believe both sides are in the wrong. These historians are confident that Stalin was not a revolutionary, but instead an opportunist and the United States at the time was not driven to protect foreign policy, but instead by economic ideals.
It is obvious why the pro-Soviet and traditionalist historians believe in what they do, though many of these viewpoints are biased toward the environment the historians were raised in. The majority of the historians that were researched, that were born in western countries, take up a traditionalist viewpoint, while those raised in Russia have pro-Soviet views. Each side blamed the opposite party and had plenty of grounds to do so. From this, the post-revisionist viewpoint is most supported of the three. There is a wealth of evidence supporting either side and there is a required ignorance to accept that the Cold War is the fault of purely one side, as the other side’s evidence would have to be disregarded. Both parties were at fault and the situation they were in made the war inevitable.