WALT: use similes in my writing to add effect
WILF: I can use like or as
Examples:
It was pitch black like a moonless night
I was brave as a lion
Everybody cheered and clapped like cheerleaders
He was tough as nails
Here is an example to support you with your writing
Neighbourhood maps
Your neighbourhood can provide some of the best writing ideas as this is something you will have a vast knowledge of. On a piece of paper (provided by Miss Fuapoivaha) draw your neighbourhood including key landmarks such as your house, your school, local parks or playground, churches, shopping stores and many more that you deem important. Here are some examples of neighourhood maps to support you.
You will be writing a recount about the duffy show we watched on Wednesday 16th March here is an example of Raisha's recount
Use these slides to support you with your recount writing. Please complete your writing in your writing books.
Here are photos of the duffy show to support your writing
Once you've edited and double checked your writing you may now publish using this template