Board Layout progression & Critiques

For this formative I tried to play with different colours for my images. I preferred having some of the of the images in black and white and others in colour. I found that I didn't like the way a lot of the images turned out in black and white because the reflective images just didn't stand out as much as I wanted too. 

Examples,

• Board two, bottom left image needs to be reshot. the image is to blurry and the barbie isn't in focus.

• Board one, top row looks out of place on the board and needs to be removed. move up the following row to be the start of the board. 

• Board two, top right grouping doesn't look right, either rearrange or get rid of.

• Board one,  bottom row needs to be reshot so the images are in better lighting, which makes the details more prominent. 

• Board one and two need more edited images to show a bigger range in photographic conventions and ideas.

• Try converting all images back to original colour and play with tints and saturation.