Best image

Evaluation:

In the first I use different camera angle to photograph and use the reflection of the lake and I think my first is not bad but still have some things to improve. Such as I can use other camera skill like shutter speech at my first shoot  I try to use it but not the effect I want.

Next time I will probably use shutter speech to do photograph and try to use different kind of skill to finish the shoot.

                                                                       Artist model is Wayne Wilson-Wong

Evaluation:

This holiday I went to Ohakune so my shoot 2 is photographing from there. I inspired by  Wayne Wilson-Wong. So of his photograph is about hills so I decide to photograph the snow mountain. This time I didn't photograph so clearly and include that much details. But I did like my composition Next time I will include more detail and try to make it less blurry.

Evaluation:

This shoot I inspired by Andre Kertesz the plant and flower which he photographed I love very much. In second image he not only photograph the flower in vase but also I can see the clean vertical line. Thus, I use this idea apply on my shoot 3. I am satisfy with my work but the one thing I have to improve is trying to use another skill that I learnt not only photograph in a simple way.

Evaluation:

This shoot I use Jerry Takigawa to be my artist model. I use the blurry and monochrome background, and I add some of my idea to photograph this shoot like; mirror and I use some reflection thing to help me whish is the chocolate packet, the inside part of it. Due to match my theme so I replaced the bottle cup to leaves.  I use the mirror to do the reflection of the background I chose, and I really like the effort and I try different camera angle to photograph it. However, this shoot I don't have enough idea for how to photograph it. And I will use some other technique in my next shoot.

Student evaluation questions - self critique

Questions to help you review and evaluate your work. Complete this and add to your website on your board layout page. This will be added underneath your A2 file on your shoot 1-4 page of your website

• Do you have a clear theme and direction? What needs to be improved / refined?

Yes, I know I need to photograph about nature for a whole year. Which are trees, sky, flower and leave etc. Every things can connect with nature will be the object that I gonna photograph .

Conventions

Is there a range of the following in your work on the layout spread? Highlight what you currently have.

• Camera control

• Range of depth of field, small and large

• Shutter speed

• Lighting

• Composition

• Framing 

• Perspective 

• Leading Lines

•  Camera Angles

- Bird’s Eye Angle 

- High Angle 

- Eye-level Angle 

- Low Angle/ Worm’s Eye Angle 

-Camera shots

- Extreme close-up 

- Close Up 

- Mid Shot

- Full Shot 

- Long Shot 

- Extreme Long Shot

From the above list what conventions do you need to focus on for your new work?

Is your work technically strong? Exposure, colour cast etc. What needs improvement?

I think is close up and mid shot because I wanna to zoom in to an object when I do my new shoot.

No, My work not technically strong enough ,I think some of my shoots are too blurry I gonna fix that problem in my following shoot.

Artist models.  

Can you see the use of artist models to generate original work, which are obvious?

Some of them I can see like Andre Kertesz and Jerry Takigawa their work have obvious black and white and technique.And Jerry Takigawa blurry the background of his work.

Do you need to further explore the use of artist models to explore in your work? Why

Yes, because I don't have idea to finish the follow 4 shoots if I don't explore more artist model to give more inspire.

Is there clear use of artist models (obvious), Explicit?

Some of my works have clear artist models

Are implicit artist models explained in your workbook?

Not really

Ideas 

Have you got a range of ideas? No, I need to find more artist model to inspire me

Can you see how your ideas are developing? When I am doing some shoot I will get some ideas during photographing

What ideas need further exploration, refinement to make them stronger? Use some other things to help my shoot like mirror and glass

What are your most innovative and creative aspects of your photographs? I think is to make it blurry

What are some new ideas, potential options you could use? shadow and half brighter, half darker

Goals

• What do you need to do better for your next assessment? Please set some goals. Use more different technique such as shutter speed, low angle and close up.

• What grade are you aiming for, 2.2 & 2.3 Merit

• Look at the marking schedule and evidence required for the standards. Level 2 

• Evaluate your work. Is there anything you need to do to reach that criteria for the mark you want? Get more inspire