Page Created: 08/18/20, Last Updated: 12/21/25.
The Writers Sunday Critique is held from 4:00 PM to 6:00 PM on the fourth Sunday of the month. The Sunday session covers two or three offerings.
The group commenced in March 2020 to replace the in-person Sunday session which had gone into hiatus due to the covid pandemic and remained as a separate event when the in-person group resumed. A J Bartholomew serves as moderator with Carol Gyzander assisting on the technical end of things.
Dates, Attendees, and Stories Critiqued Appear below.
2025
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December 21, 2025 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Philip De Parto. Clif Flynt. Robert Kalison. Paul Leporino. Julie Saad. Alina Shosky.
Illegal Alien by Clif. Read by Julie.
THE DAN CHRONICLES, Book 2 by Robert. Read by Clif.
Big Bill's Lonely Hearts Bar & Grill by Clif. Read by AJ.
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November 23, 2025 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Philip De Parto. Clif Flynt. Robert Kalison. James Kim. Paul Leporino. Alina Shosky. Max Wanner.
LEFT IN ASH, Chapter 1 Rewrite by Max. Read by Clif.
The Second Shift by James. Read by Robert.
A Familiar Horror by Clif. Read by Max.
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October 26, 2025 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Robert Kalison. Paul Leporino. Stewart Moore. Alina Shosky. Max Wanner.
THE DAN CHRONICLES, Chapters 36 - 37 by Robert. Read by Stewart.
LIFE IN ASH, Chapter 1 by Max. Read by Stewart.
Never Put a Key in this Lock by A J. Read by Robert.
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September 28, 2025 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Clif Flynt. Carol Gyzander. Robert Kalison. James Kim. Gary Kleinman. Stewart Moore. Alina Shosky. Max Wanner.
THE DAN CHRONICLES, Chapters 35 - 36 by Robert. Read by Carol.
Shall the Dust Praise You by Stewart. Read by Robert.
The Prom King of New Pyongyang High by James. Read by Gary.
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August 24, 2025 (Zoom Critique Session)
PHILIP DE PARTO. Clif Flynt. Gregor Hartmann, Robert Kalison. Stewart Moore. Alina Shosky.
THE DAN CHRONICLES, Chapters 33 - 34 by Robert. Read by Stewart.
Carved in Stone by Clif. Read by Gregor.
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July 27, 2025 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Clif Flynt. Carol Gyzander. Robert Kalison. Julie Saad Alina Shosky.
Spooky Puppets by James. Read by Stewart.
Unidentified by Peter. Read by Julie & Robert.
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June 22, 2025 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Ken Altabef. Philip De Parto. Clif Flynt. Carol Gyzander. Robert Kalison. Paul Leporino. Julie Saad Alina Shosky.
THE DAN CHRONICLES, Book 2, Chapter 29 by Robert. Read by Carol.
Gifts, Rewrite by Paul. Read by Robert.
Hollywood & Vine, Rewrite by Ken. Read by Julie.
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May 25, 2025 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Carol Gyzander. Robert Kalison. Julie Saad. Alina Shosky.
THE DAN CHRONICLES, Book 2, Chapters 26 - 28 by Robert. Read by A J & Julie.
Invasion from the Plumbing by A J. Read by Robert.
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April 27, 2025 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Clif Flynt. Carol Gyzander. Gregor Hartmann. Robert Kalison. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad Alina Shosky.
THE DAN CHRONICLES, Book 2, Chapter 25 by Robert. Read by Gregor.
The Monster's Wife by Stewart. Read by Julie.
The Endarkenment, Part 2 by Julie. Read by Carol & Stewart.
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March 23, 2025 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Clif Flynt. Carol Gyzander. Gregor Hartmann. Robert Kalison. Paul Leporino. Matt McHugh. Stewart Moore. Alina Shosky.
THE DAN CHRONICLES, Book 2, Chapters 22 & 24 by Robert. Read by Carol.
Scorn to Change My State with Kings, Part 1 by Matt. Read by Stewart.
Not There by Clif. Read by Robert.
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February 23, 2025 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Paul Calhoun. Clif Flynt. Robert Kalison. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad.
THE DAN CHRONICLES, Book 2, Chapters 22 & 23 by Robert. Read by Stewart & Julie.
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January 26, 2025 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Clif Flynt. Carol Gyzander. Gregor Hartmann. Robert Kalison. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad. Alina Shosky.
A Peaceful Sojurn by Clif. Read by Gregor.
Bound by Love by Stewart. Read by Clif.
Conscripted to Sing His Own Dirge by Gregor. Read by Julie & Carol.
2024
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December 22, 2024 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Peter Gutierrez. Robert Kalison. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad. Alina Shosky.
THE DAN CHRONICLES 2. Chapters 15 - 18 by Robert. Read by Julie & Peter.
COLLEGE TOWN, Chapter One by Peter. Read by A J.
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November 24, 2024 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Clif Flynt. Peter Gutierrez. Gregor Hartmann. Robert Kalison. Matt McHugh. Robert Morrell. Julie Saad. Alina Shosky.
THE DAN CHRONICLES 2. Chapters 7 - 11 by Robert K. Read by Stewart.
Dead Stephanie, Part 2 by Robert M. Read by Carol.
Alone in the Dark by Carol. Read by Robert K.
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October 27, 2024 (Zoom Critique Session)
CAROL GYZANDER. Robert Kalison. Stewart Moore. Robert Morrell. Alina Shosky.
THE DAN CHRONICLES 2. Chapters 7 - 11 by Robert K. Read by Stewart.
Dead Stephanie, Part 2 by Robert M. Read by Carol.
Alone in the Dark by Carol. Read by Robert K.
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September 22, 2024 (Zoom Critique Session)
Ian Caskey. Peter Gutierrez. CAROL GYZANDER. Robert Kalison. Paul Leporino. Stewart Moore. Robert Morrell. Julie Saad. Alina Shosky.
THE DAN CHRONICLES 2. Chapters 6 - 8 by Robert K. Read by Carol.
Dead Stephanie, Part 1 by Robert M. Read by Stewart.
Bad Moon (Club Remix) by Ian. Read by Robert K.
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August 25, 2024 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Ian Caskey. Clif Flynt. Carol Gyzander. Gregor Hartmann. Robert Kalison. Julie Saad. Alina Shosky.
She Screams at Night by A J. Read by Julie.
Fragile Wall by Clif. Read by Gregor.
Impressions of My Incarceration by Carol. Read by Ian.
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July 28, 2024 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Ian Caskey. Ed Gregory. Robert Kalison. Sid Motaghi.
THE DAN CHRONICLES 2, Chapters 4 - 5 by Robert. Read by Ian.
AUGMENTED PSYCHE, Chapter 3 by Sid. Read by A J.
Parking Offenders by Ian. Read by Robert.
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June 23, 2024 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Robert Kalison. Paul Leporino. Stewart Moore. Sid Motaghi.
THE DAN CHRONICLES, Chap 44 - 47 by Robert. Read by Stewart.
The Dormouse by Stewart. Read by A J.
ARRESTED SOULS, Prologue (rewrite) by Paul. Read by Robert.
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May 26, 2024 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Clif Flynt, Carol Gyzander. Robert Kalison. Sid Motaghi Julie Saad. Alina Shosky. David Willison.
One Way Trip by Clif. Read by Robert.
SCATTERED, Chapters 5 - 9 by David. Read by Julie & Clif
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April 28, 2024 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Carol Gyzander. Gregor Hartmann. Robert Kalison. Stewart Moore. Erin Roll. Julie Saad. Alina Shosky.
Under the Knife by Carol. Read by Stewart.
The Star-Pocket Night by Stewart. Read by Robert.
SUPPORT YOUR LOCAL MENAGERIE, Section by Erin. Read by A J.
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March 24, 2024 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Clif Flynt. Carol Gyzander. Robert Kalison. Paul Leporino. Erin Roll. Alina Shosky.
THE DAN CHRONICLES, Chapters 39 - 40 by Robert. Read by Carol.
SUPPORT YOUR LOCAL MENAGERIE, Section by Erin. Read by A J.
How Do You Want Your Eggs? by Carol. Read by Clif.
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March 17, 2024 (Zoom Critique - Special Session)
A J Alanson. Andres Castro. Reyna Favis. Clif Flynt. CAROL GYZANDER. Gregor Hartmann. Paul Leporino. Matt McHugh. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad.
NO STRANGER TO NATIVE SHORES by Matt McHugh.
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February 25, 2024 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Paul Calhoun. Clif Flynt. Carol Gyzander. Robert Kalison. Stewart Moore. Erin Roll. Julie Saad.
THE DAN CHRONICLES, Chapters 37 - 38 by Robert. Read by Clif.
SUPPORT YOUR LOCAL MENAGERIE, Chapters 2, 3, 4.5 by Erin. Read by Robert.
All That Glitters by Clif. Read by Stewart.
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January 28, 2024 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Paul Calhoun. Clif Flynt. Robert Kalison. Julie Saad.
THE DAN CHRONICLES, Chapters 36 by Robert. Read by Clif.
Elusive Death, Come Find Me by A J. Read by Julie.
The Empathectomist, Part 1 by Julie. Read by Paul
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2023
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November 26, 2023 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Carol Gyzander. Robert Kalison. Stewart Moore.
THE DAN CHRONICLES, Chapters 31 & 32 by Robert. Read by Carol.
The Four Year Carnival by Stewart. Read by Robert.
Triangulations by Carol. Read by Stewart.
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October 22, 2023 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Paul Calhoun. Robert Kalison. Matt McHugh. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad.
THE DAN CHRONICLES, Chapters 29 & 30 by Robert. Read by Paul.
A Mischief of Disciples by Matt. Read by Julie.
Sanctuary by Stewart. Read by Robert.
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September 24, 2023 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J Alanson. Christopher Chiller. Clif Flynt. CAROL GYZANDER. Robert Kalison. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad. Alina Shosky.
THE DAN CHRONICLES, Chapters 27 & 28 by Robert. Read by A J.
Between a Rock & a Hard Place by Carol. Read by Stewart.
Eye on the Prize by Clif. Read by Julie.
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August 27, 2023 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Carol Gyzander. Robert Kalison. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad. Alina Shosky.
THE DAN CHRONICLES, Chapters 25 & 26 by Robert. Read by Stewart.
As You Know, Bob (Rewrite) by Carol. Read by Julie.
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July 23, 2023 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J Alanson. Sarah Amann. A J BARTHOLOMEW. Philip De Parto. Jade Gardner. Robert Kalison. Roger Kuhns, Luis Murrell. Julie Saad.
THE DAN CHRONICLES, Chapter 24 by Robert. Read by A J Alanson.
What the Hitchhiker Knows by A J Bartholomew. Read by Julie.
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June 25, 2023 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J Alanson. A J BARTHOLOMEW. Clif Flynt. Carol Gyzander. Robert Kalison. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad.
THE DAN CHRONICLES, Chapters 23 & 24 by Robert. Read by Clif & Carol.
The Uses for a Lock of Hair by Stewart. Read by A J Bartholomew.
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May 21, 2023 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW, Clif Flynt. Carol Gyzander. Robert Kalison. Stewart Moore.
THE DAN CHRONICLES, Chapter 21 by Robert. Read by Clif.
All Lesbians Are Virgins by A J. Read by Carol.
A Lucky Ring by Clif. Read by Robert.
Because, Science by Carol. Read by Robert.
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April 23, 2023 (Zoom Critique Session)
Robert Kalison. Paul Calhoun. Philip De Parto. Robert Kalison. STEWART MOORE.
THE DAN CHRONICLES, Chapters 19 & 20 by Robert. Read by Jerri.
When the Mountains Tumble Out of the Sea by Stewart. Read by Robert.
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March 26, 2023 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Carol Gyzander. Robert Kalison. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad. David Willison.
THE DAN CHRONICLES, Chapter 18 by Robert. Read by Julie.
Angel Lust by Julie. Read by Carol
Wearing White Out of Season, Part 1 by Carol. Read by Stewart.
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February 26, 2023 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Peter Gutierrez. Carol Gyzander. Robert Kalison. Christian Langworthy. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad, David Willison.
THE DAN CHRONICLES, Chapter 17 by Robert. Read by Julie.
THE KING OF COMEBACKS, Chapter 1 by Christopher. Read by Stewart.
The HOA's Rules for Trick or Treating by A J. Read by Robert.
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January 22, 2023 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Clif Flynt. Carol Gyzander. Robert Kalison. Christian Langworthy. Stewart Moore. Sean O'Connor. Julie Saad. David Willison.
To Keep a Secret by Robert. Read by Julie.
Just Another Drifter by Clif. Read by Robert.
Useless People, Part 1 by Julie. Read by Clif.
2022
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November 27, 2022 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Carol Gyzander. Robert Kalison. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad. David Willison.
THE DAN CHRONICLES, Chapters 15 & 16 by Robert. Read by Stewart.
Under the Sea by Carol. Read by Julie.
Entangled by Stewart. Read by Carol.
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October 23, 2022 (Zoom Critique Session)
Ken Altabef, A J BARTHOLOMEW. Philip De Parto. Clif Flynt. Robert Kalison. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad.
ZONBI IN THE SECTOR, Prologue by Julie. Read by A J.
Dan Has a Lunch Date by Robert. Read by Stewart
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September 25, 2022 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Clif Flynt. Gregor Hartmann. Robert Kalison. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad. David Willison.
ZONBI IN THE SECTOR, Prologue by Julie. Read by A J.
Dan Has a Lunch Date by Robert. Read by Stewart
Arvia: Voice in the Forest by David. Read by Julie.
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August 28, 2022 (Zoom Critique Session)
Clif Flynt. CAROL GYZANDER. Gregor Hartmann. Robert Kalison. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad. David Willison.
Bruce by Stewart. Read by Robert.
Storm Warning by Carol. Read by Julie.
TV Monsters by Robert. Read by Gregor.
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July 24, 2022 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Philip De Parto. Clif Flynt. Robert Kalison. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad.
A Knock at the Window by Stewart. Read by Clif.
Turtles All the Way Up by Clif. Read by Julie.
Bad Handwriting by Stewart. Read by A J.
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June 26, 2022 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Clif Flynt. Carol Gyzander. Gregor Hartmann. Robert Kalison. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad. David Willison.
THE DAN CHRONICLES, Chapters 9 & 10 by Robert. Read by Carol & Stewart.
The Scientist's Book of the Dead, Part 1 by Gregor. Read by Julie.
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May 22, 2022 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Clif Flynt. Carol Gyzander. Robert Kalison. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad. David Willison.
Bad Boogie by Clif. Read by Julie.
Summer Squall by A J. Read by Robert.
SUMIDA (formerly Zonbi in the Sector), Part 6 by Julie. Read by Cllif.
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April 24, 2022 (Zoom Critique Session)
Jerri Angermueller. A J BARTHOLOMEW. Clif Flynt. Shawn Frazier. Robert Kalison. Matt McHugh. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad. David Willison.
Current Events, Part 3 by Jerri. Read by Julie.
My Life for My Child by A J. Read by Robert.
Zonbi in the Sector, Part 6 by Julie. Read by Matt.
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March 27, 2022 (Zoom Critique Session)
Jerri Angermueller. A J BARTHOLOMEW. Clif Flynt. Robert Kalison. Matt McHugh. Stewart Moore. Erin Roll. Julie Saad. David Willison.
The Dormouse, Part 1 by Stewart. Read by Clif.
The Polynesian Monkey Trap by Matt. Read by Julie.
THE DAN CHRONICLES, Chapters 6 & 7 by Robert. Read by A J.
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February 27, 2022 (Zoom Critique Session)
Jerri Angermueller. A J BARTHOLOMEW. Andres Castro. Clif Flynt. Shawn Frazier. Carol Gyzander. Gregor Hartmann. Robert Kalison. Julie Saad. David Willison.
Chance Favors the Prepared by Clif. Read by Robert.
Call of the Void by Carol. Read by Julie.
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January 30, 2022 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Clif Flynt. Carol Gyzander. Gregor Hartmann. Robert Kalison. Matt McHugh. Julie Saad. David Willison.
Undertow, Part 2 by Gregor. Read by Julie.
The War of the Trees by Julie. Read by Matt.
NO STRANGER TO NATIVE SHORES, Section by Matt. Read by Robert.
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January 2, 2022 (Zoom Critique Session)
Clif Flynt. Jade Gardner. CAROL GYZANDER. Gregor Hartmann. Ron Lottermann. Matt McHugh. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad. David Willison.
GOD OF BEARS Chapters 3 & 4 by Stewart. Read by Julie.
KEEPER OF RECORDS, Chapter 1 C by Julie. Read by Gregor,
CYBERSPEARE, Chapter 1 Rewrite by Carol. Read by Stewart.
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2021
November 28, 2021 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. George Galuschak. Jade Gardner. Carol Gyzander. Robert Kalison. Matt McHugh. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad. David Willison.
TALES OF ARVIA 3, Chapter 20 by David. Read by Julie.
Dan Goes for a Stroll by Robert. Read by George.
Fodder, Part 1 by Julie. Read buy Stewart.
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October 24, 2021 (Zoom Critique Session)
Jerri Angermueller. A J BARTHOLOMEW. Clif Flynt. Carol Gyzander. Robert Kalison. Matt McHugh. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad.
GOD OF BEARS, Chapters 1 & 2 Rewrite by Steward. Read by Matt.
CYBERSPEARE, Chapters 1 & 2 Rewrite by Carol. Read by Stewart.
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September 26, 2021 (Zoom Critique Session)
Ken Altabef. Jerri Angermueller. A J BARTHOLOMEW. George Galuschak. Carol Gyzander. Robert Kallison. Matt McHugh. Stewart Moore. Anthony Pawlak. Julie Saad.
Only One Can Keep a Secret by A J. Read by Ken.
Fair Trades by Robert. Read by Stewart.
Camp Murder by George. Read by Julie.
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August 22, 2021 (Zoom Critique Session)
Ken Altabef. A J BARTHOLOMEW. Carol Gyzander. Gregor Hartmann. Matt McHugh. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad. David Willison.
Ghosted by Julie. Read by Stewart.
Comet Wine by Ken. Read by Julie.
Family Recipe Mind Stew by Carol. Read by A J.
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July 25, 2021 (Zoom Critique Session)
Jerri Angermueller. A J BARTHOLOMEW. Andres Castro. Clif Flynt. Jade Gardner. A J Kohr. Christian Langworthy. Matt McHugh. David Willison.
THE UNHOME CATACLYSM, Chapter 5 by Andres. Read by A J B.
CrabCam by Carol. Read by A J K
NEARLY DEAD - Arising Ceremony by A J K. Read by Julie.
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June 27, 2021 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Paul Calhoun. Clif Flynt. Christian Langworthy. Stewart Moore. Erin Roll. David Willison.
Brother's Burden by Clif. Read by Stewart.
A One-Marshmellow Kind of Girl by Stewart. Read by Erin.
NON-PLAYER CHARACTER (section) by Erin. Read by A J.
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May 23, 2021 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Philip De Parto. Clif Flynt. Jade Gardner. Carol Gyzander. Christian Langworthy. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad. David Willison.
THE SEARCHLINGS, Chapter 1 by Christian. Read by Stewart.
Needs by Clif. Read by Julie.
Pool Party by Phil. Read by AJ.
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April 25, 2021 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Andres Castro. Clif Flynt. Carol Gyzander. Robert Kalison. A J Kohr. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad. David Willison.
NEARLY DEAD, Chapter 10, Part 2 by A J Kohr. Read by Julie.
BOKOR, Chapter 1 by Julie. Read by A J Bartholomew.
THE GOD OF BEARS, Chapter 1 by Stewart Moore. Read by Clif.
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March 28, 2021 (Zoom Critique Session)
Jerri Angermueller. A J BARTHOLOMEW. Andres Castro. Clif Flynt. A J Kohr. Christian Langworthy. Matt Mc Hugh. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad. David Willison.
Clouds and Everything, Part 1 by Christian. Read by Stewart.
SIEGE OF ARIANA, Chapter 5 by David. Read by Jerri.
NEARLY DEAD, Welcome to Limina by A J Khor. Read by Julie.
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February 28, 2021 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Andres Castro. Jason Edwards. Carol Gyzander. Christian Langworthy. Matt Mc Hugh. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad. David Willison.
UNHOME (Previously titled The Bonedrinkers), Chapter 4 by Andres. Read by Stewart.
Virtual Choices by Stewart. Read by Julie.
SIEGE OF ARIANA, Chapter 3 by David. Read by Jason.
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January 24, 2021 (Zoom Critique Session -- Regular January Session)
A J BARTHOLOMEW. Paul Calhoun. Andres Castro. Clif Flynt. Carol Gyzander. Gregor Hartmann. Christian Langworthy. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad. David Willison.
THE BONEDRINKERS, Chapter 3 by Andres. Read by Julie.
Doing the Rounds by Paul. Read by Christian.
HomeGoing by Clif. Read by David.
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January 03, 2021 (Zoom Critique Session -- December Make-Up Session)
A J Bartholomew. Paul Calhoun. Andres Castro. Jason Edwards. Clif Flynt. Carol Gyzander. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad. Alex Shvartsman. David Willison.
ASCENSION, Chapter 3 by Stewart. Read by AJ.
Rumsprings in Sanzheika by Alex. Read by Julie.
SEIGE OF ARANIA, Chapter 2 by David. Read by Paul.
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2020
November 22, 2020 (Zoom Critique Session)
Jerri Angermeuller. A J Bartholomew. Andres Castro. Clif Flynt. Jade Gardner. Carol Gyzander. A J Kohr. Matteo Masiello. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad. David Willison.
The Mountain Is Not a Friend by Stewart. Read by Jerri.
SIEGE OF ARANIA, Chapters 1 & 2 by David. Read by Carol.
FORGET ME NOT, Chapter 1 by Carol. Read by Andres.
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October 25, 2020 (Zoom Critique Session)
Jerri Angermueller. Ken Altabef. A J Bartholomew. Andres Castero. Clif Flynt. Carol Gyzander. Anthony Pawlak. Julie Saad. Lucy Schmeidler.
From Eyes of Glass, No Tears Do Flow (aka Homecoming) by Ken. Read by Julie.
THE UNHOME CATACLYSM, Introduction by Andres. Read by Jerri.
THE DATA POLICEWOMAN Chapter - The Lump of Coal, Part 1 by Julie. Read by Ken.
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September 27, 2020 (Zoom Critique Session)
Jerri Angermueller. Ken Altabef. A J Bartholomew. Paul Calhoun. Andres Castro. Clif Flynt. Carol Gyzander. A J Maiti. James Phillips. Stephen Rubin. Julie Saad.
THE DATA POLICEWOMAN - The Free Lady by Julie. Read by A J Bartholomew.
CURRENT EVENTS, Chapters 1 - 6 by Jerri. Read by Julie.
Rocky Redux by Carol. Read by James
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August 23, 2020 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J Bartholomew. Andres Castro. Clif Flynt, Jade Gardner. Carol Gyzander. Gregor Hartmann. Matt McHugh. Stewart Moore. Erin Roll. Alex Shvartsman. David Willison.
The Wolf Branch, Part 2 by Andres. Read by Gregor.
Swords, Part 1 by Erin. Read by Stewart.
The Night Battle by Stewart. Read by Carol.
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July 26, 2020 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J Bartholomew. Andres Castro. Jason Edwards. Clif Flynt, Peter Gutierrez. Carol Gyzander. Gregor Hartmann. Matt Mc Hugh. Stewart Moore. Anthony Pawlak. Julie Saad.
TRIUMPHS, Chapter 1A by Jason. Read by Carol.
Changeling by Clif. Read by Stewart.
A Weekend in Rural Vermont, Part 1 by A J. Read by Jason.
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June 28, 2020 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J Bartholomew. Jason Edwards. Clif Flynt, Carol Gyzander. Joseph Kennedy. Matt Mc Hugh. Stewart Moore. Alex Shvartsman. David Willison.
Corporate Man by Matt. Read by Alex.
Winner Takes All, Part 1 by Alex. Read by Matt.
THRONE OF LIFE, Chapter 31 by David. Read by Stewart.
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May 24, 2020 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J Bartholomew. Paul Calhoun. Jason Edwards, Jade Gardner. Joseph Kennedy. Matt Mc Hugh. Tony Pawlak. Julie Saad.
Irreconcilable by Matt. Read by Paul.
Jel the Sex-Bot by Matt. Read by A J.
WILL ALLEN & THE UNCONQUERABLE BEAST, Section by Jason. Read by Matt.
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April 26, 2020 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J Bartholomew. Paul Calhoun. Jade Gardner. Carol Gyzander. Dale Kagan. Matt Mc Hugh. Julie Saad. David Willison.
UNREWARDING, Chapter by Paul. Read by Carol.
STAR CONTACT, Chapter 2 by Dale. Read by Matt.
ZONBI IN THE SECTOR, Prologue Part 2 by Julie. Read by AJ.
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March 29, 2020 (Zoom Critique Session)
A J Bartholomew. Sam Capener. Terry Coughlin. Frederick Doot. Carol Gyzander. Dale Kagan. Joseph Kennedy. Matt Mc Hugh. Stewart Moore. Julie Saad.
The Joy of Exorcism by Stewart. Read by AJ.
The Exorcist and Jake, Section by Joe. Read by Stewart.
THE AUTOBIOGRAPHY OF EDWARD DARHENNY, Chapter 16 by Matt. Read by Carol.