Fiction: A fictional story written about a teenager named Kai searching through the deep truths about technology and government control.
In a world where every click, word, and heartbeat is monitored, privacy is no longer a right—it’s a memory people are slowly forgetting.
The camera looks at her and starts scanning her face. Up and down. Side to side.
“Am I going crazy or is that camera staring directly at me?” She says, with a confused look on her face.
“What?” Stevie says, analyzing her confusion.
“Did I just say that out loud?” she responds back to Stevie.
“You definitely did,” Steve laughs. “It’s nothing new, that camera has always been there.”
It’s the year 2036, and cameras have been placed everywhere. The government called it Safety Network. Everything was connected to it. And everyone believed it was a safety thing. Her name is Kai and she is just like any other ordinary teenager. Or as she thought.
Eventually, Kai brings it up.
“Don’t you think all of these cameras are pretty suspicious?” Kai asks.
Her dad looks up. “No, they’re just to keep everyone safe.”
Her mom then adds, “Everything is always being tracked. It’s how things work.”
Kai looks back down. Her overthinking floods her brain and at this point she doesn’t know what to do.
Kai begins testing the system.
She decides to leave her phone at home to see what would happen next. She searched for information about government surveillance.
Soon, more warnings began to appear.
Location error.
Account under review.
Everyday, it just seemed like someone was watching her every move.
“They’re definitely watching me, I’m not crazy,” Kai says.
“No they’re not Kai,” Stevie replies.
But even Stevie started to sound a little skeptical, as if she almost believed her for a second.
Not even a week later, Kai noticed she started to lose access to her own school account and transportation services. The more questions she asked, the more were ignored.
Looking out of her bedroom window, she suddenly hears a noise.
People say the system was meant to protect us. That’s what they were taught in school, what played on every screen, what echoed through the streets, people always said “Safety requires awareness.” Cameras lined every street, every corner, every hallway, and every classroom ceiling. Phones didn’t just connect people, they record, they learn, and they track. Every movement turned into data. At first it feels normal, but lately it’s been feeling closer.
Kai calls Stevie.
“Did you see a drone hovering over your street?” Kai asks.
“I think I heard something, but I didn’t think anything of it,” Stevie replies.
Kai realizes she had a choice. Whether to do this alone and find answers or to just stay quiet. She wasn’t sure which could be more dangerous.
WARNING: IRREGULAR BEHAVIOR DETECTED
“You got one too?” Kai asks, finally looking up.
Stevie shakes her head. “No, but even if I did, I wouldn’t freak out about it too much.”
“I’m not?” Kai responds.
“You kind of are,” Stevie says with a weird look on her face.
Kai presses her lips together, looking back at the screen, the warning still hasn’t gone away.
“Then why isn’t it going away?” Kai asks.
Stevie shrugs.
“Give it a second maybe,” Stevie mentions.
But it doesn’t. And that’s when things start to feel more weird.
Not in the world, but inside of her.
Because once she notices it, she can’t un-notice it.
The next day at school everything looks the same. Too clean, too quiet, too perfect. Screens flicker, cameras hum, teachers smile like they trust the system more than they trust us, and maybe they do. Their desks light up as they sit down, automatically logging attendance. Kais’ glitches, but only for a second. A flicker, a pause. Then suddenly, her screen reads: ACCOUNT UNDER REVIEW.
“Did that happen to you too?” Kai whispers to the boy sitting next to her.
“What?” He responds.
“Did you see my screen?” Kai says.
“No, but it’s probably nothing,” he claims.
Nothing.
That’s what everyone keeps saying. That it’s nothing. That nothing could go wrong.
Kai starts paying more attention after that. She’s not just listening closely, now she is watching closely. The cameras don’t just follow after everyone. They follow after who they want. The notifications don’t just appear for everyone, they only appear for some.
At night, Kai searches through the web. She finds deleted posts. Deleted threads. Deleted messages. And one by one, they disappear as she goes.
“That isn’t safe Kai,” Kai’s mom's voice cuts through the dark.
Kai slams her computer shut and looks straight ahead.
“I was just trying to--”
“No Kai, those websites are not safe,” her mom quickly responds.
Safe.
That word that keeps on being repeated.
It continues to repeat in her mind as she sits at her desk, the glowing of her laptop screen lightens her room. Her parents’ voices echo downstairs faintly, calmly. Kai continues her search. Questions she cannot form, questions she cannot ask. She eventually starts to doubt herself, the results appear, but they don’t stick. Websites load, then disappear. The words she read just vanish. The pages refresh by itself, replaced with empty articles.
Content is unavailable.
Refresh.
More searches.
A thread is in Kai’s view, the text is rushed.
They are not just tracking, they’re predict—
“Why?” Kai asks herself.
Her reflection looks back at her in her computer camera. She’s breathing slowly, then little by little her heart rate begins rising. The realization settles.
This is not an accident. It’s intentional. People are removing it. Watching as we watch.
Something is wrong.
Kai’s stomach drops.
The next day feels different. The wind is the same, the streets are the same, but Kai is observing more. Cameras moving quicker, people moving weirdly, even conversations are starting to feel shorter.
That afternoon after school, she decides to make a decision. She can’t just watch and sit back. She finds Stevie behind the school, near the fence surrounding the garden where the cameras are placed a little farther away.
“We have to do something about this, Stevie,” Kai says.
Stevie gives it a moment before responding.
“What do you want to do,” Stevie responds.
“There has to be a way around it, maybe we have to start telling people,” Kai’s voice lowers.
Now it’s feeling real.
As the days pass by, Kai and Stevie take different paths to school. Different ways of searching, anything that might reveal itself.
She goes home and begins searching for answers.
For a second, it works. Real information pops up. Nothing vanishes out of the blue. She’s not just observing anymore, she’s anticipating. She’s expecting the next move.
This is it.
Outside, the camera remains looking at the street. Watching. Everything continues as normal. People walk from A to B, cars move, neighbors walk their dogs, systems continue operating as always.
Nothing changes. But Kai does.
She continues her routines, but now there is no hiding, because she knows.
Stevie is not as loud about it, she sticks by Kai’s side. They don’t talk about it. At least not anymore.
Kai and Stevie pass by Mr. and Mrs. Johnson’s house. The camera follows her.
They look at each time, but with the feeling of acceptance.
But this time, Kai doesn’t look up.
Because she knows that it’s there. Watching.
No matter what she does, and who she does it with, it won’t stop.
And it’s not going anywhere.
Verbit Editorial
Thesis
In today’s world, technology has become deeply rooted into our everyday lives, causing people to become dependent on digital and technology and give away more of their personal information. Even though technological integration can enhance government efficiency, it is true that it invades a person’s personal privacy, handing over people’s power to the state.
Annotated Bibliography
Adjel-Brenyah, Kwame Nana. Chain Gang All-Stars. Pantheon Books, 2023.
In Chain Gang All-Stars, Loretta Thurwar is one of the characters that represents technology and government control. The whole system she’s stuck in is built around turning prisoners into entertainment for the public. Everything she does is being watched, recorded, and nitpicked, which shows how technology is used to control people instead of help them. How it’s so easy to believe what you see. Although Thurwar becomes famous and people begin to admire her, she still doesn’t have complete freedom because this prison system controls her whole life. What sticks out to me is how the novel makes violence seem normal just because it’s something you watch on TV. People watch imprisoned people fight for their own entertainment, and businesses are making money from it. Thurwar is representing how society can ignore those who are truly in need of help when technology makes it seem like it's distant or normal. Her character criticizes the prison system in the real world and how the government abuses power. Through Thurwar, we can see how risky it can be when government, technology, and entertainment all work together.
Gilmor Khan, Daniel. “Government-Mandated Software a Looming Threat to Freedom.” aclu.org, 22 January 2026 https://www.aclu.org/news/privacy-technology/government-mandated-software
Daniel works as a Senior Staff Technologist, with ACLU Speech, Privacy, and Technology Project. In his article, he explains a trend seen around the world and potentially in the US opens the door to what he calls “inescapable censorship and surveillance.” He argues that with the right kind of technology, the government could gain access to people’s personal lives including their political activity, photos, data, settings, etc. This raises many concerns about privacy, what people don’t realize is the government has the ability to see what they want, and find out information about you. If government-mandated software was enforced, it would make it even easier to monitor citizens without their awareness. There have been many efforts to use apps to download information, but unfortunately, the installation was pushed back. Overall, this source highlights the importance of protecting privacy and questioning how much control governments should have over personal information, in our modern society. I believe we should be able to have our own privacy that is protected, and I know I can argue this.
Hooshidary, Sanam, Canada, Chelsea, and William Dark. “Artifical Intelligence in Government: The Federal and State Landscape” National Conference of State Legislatures, 22 November 2024.
Sanam Hooshidary is a legislative specialist at the National Conference of State Legislatures based in Washington, D.C., in this article she is collaborating with, she explains state and federal lawmakers are expanding the use of Artificial Intelligence because it improves efficiency and effectiveness. Already, some developers have agreed with the use of AI and claim it’s necessary for better data. The government believes that if AI can be used appropriately, it can be useful for technology. She uses a survey as an example to further strengthen her idea, state and local government employees showed that 51% use an AI application daily or several times a week. Government leaders also indicated an increased focus on data integrity with 45% taking measures to verify data within their agency. This is important because the government has enough control to actually put AI to good use, but it’s also up to the people. Yes, it can be useful for some things but eventually wouldn’t people start to take advantage of it? This source is reliable because this is a real word issue that is still relevant and needs to be worked on.
Shively, Pete. “Could Technology Support & Enhance Our Democracy?” interactivityfoundation.org, 16 July 202l, https://www.interactivityfoundation.org/could-technology-support-enhance-our-democracy/
Some people may support technology and government control because they believe it can strengthen democracy and improve society when used responsibly. In the article, it is talked about how technology could be a great resource for education and human necessities like housing, water, and education. The people that support this believe that government involvement is also necessary in order to ensure everyone receives the same benefit and privilege. They believe that if people are informed of technology and government control, their regulations can help make sure valuable resources are not just open to the wealthy. Additionally, advocates for the government to point out important details like Chayn, highlight technology can be a very useful tool. If it is being used responsibly and beneficially, it can create positive and social change and support vulnerable individuals. Working together to break cycles and create a healthier, and more prioritized society can be profitable for everyone.
Stromberg N. Larry and Christopher Moninan .et.al. “I’m Only Getting a Second Chance if Laws Change.” www.prisonjournalismproject.org, 16 October 2024, p. 1-3
Larry N. Stromberg is a writer incarcerated in Pennsylvania. Christopher Monihan is the author of the blog Lettersfromchristopher.com, and spends his time advocating for the incarcerated. He is incarcerated in Ohio. Angel Chavez is a writer incarcerated in California. Tina Lunney is a writer and student enrolled in the NJ-STEP prison college program with Raritan Valley Community College at Edna Mahan Correctional Facility for Women. As these people are in prison, they are limited to things like the right to vote, and being heard as their voices are ignored. Even though they can’t vote, they explain our votes matter and we are also representing incarcerated people that cannot. Being in prison also takes away their right of privacy as the government is painting them out to be bad people and technology is making their own perception of who they are. The government is depriving these people of their legal rights and privileges as if they aren’t just as human as we are. I believe this source is reliable because we are hearing their first hand experience, making it a primary source as these are people that are still incarcerated.