Writing essays for college applications, fellowships, or competitions can be tricky — you know what you want to say, but not always how to say it. That’s where a little perspective helps.
If you’ve written a draft and want someone to look at it with fresh eyes, I’m happy to help. I’ll share insights on what’s working, what could flow better, and how to make your story feel more authentic and personal.
Here’s what I usually do:
Help refine your narrative and structure
Highlight what stands out most about your story
Suggest ways to bring clarity, depth, and balance
Offer perspective on how your essay reads to an outside audience
A strong essay isn’t about sounding perfect — it’s about sounding real.
Want feedback?
Reach out on LinkedIn or email anjalijayaraman1903@gmail.com with your draft and the prompt.
I’ll send back honest, constructive notes to help you make your story shine.
Disclaimer: Feedback is provided voluntarily and intended solely for educational and developmental guidance.