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Journal Writing During a Pandemic

March 16, 2020 was the last day of 7th grade as we knew it. The 70+ 7th grade students at the CPS school I am teaching were sent home with some information about checking Google Classroom for assignments. We were not too worried, after all we would be returning to school later in March, or at worst, in early April.

Of course, we all know now that was not, is not, the case. Today is June 21, 2020 and we are finishing up our experience with Remote Learning for the 2019-20 school year. One of the ideas I read about on-line learning was to establish a routine, especially for middle school students. The middle school team worked hard to establish a schedule that would work for everyone and not conflict with other teachers as we attempted to reach out to the students throughout the day.

I also recognized that having an online meeting with 30+ 7th grade students would not work. I felt they would not be focused on our lesson, but instead on each other. Or, they would not want to participate in the meeting or see themselves on the screen during the entire meeting. I don't like seeing myself for the whole 30 minute meeting! From the very start of our first meetings, I had the students divided into groups. Each group has 8-9 students. Then I assigned each group weekly meeting days and times. In that way I could engage with the students on the lessons for the week and still feel like the meeting was controlled. I could see each student and talk with them and teach them. It has been mostly successful, with a consistently 65% attendance rate. Of course, I wanted more of the students to attend our meetings, so I continued throughout remote learning to reach out via email, google chat, and calls with parents. Some weeks the attendance would increase, but those students that attended every lesson were consistent in their participation and work completion.

Another success from the Remote Learning experience has been the Covid-19 Journal we have assigned each week since the beginning of the stay-at-home order. The students had made great progress throughout the year in developing their writing, both formal literary analysis, argument and informational writing and informal response and journal writing. I was very concerned that my students would lose writing fluency and writing skills if there was not a writing assignment that would continue the expectations for writing that had already been established in the 7th grade ELA classes.

Personal journals can be vital primary sources. While we all coped with the mental health challenges in these anxious times, health professionals say journaling can help reduce anxiety, stress and symptoms of depression. In addition to being good for our health, journals will help historians as they try to understand our lives today.

At first, the Covid-19 Journal was very open ended. It encouraged students to reflect on the experiences they were having at home, the experiences they were having while online learning, and really, any observations they may have about this new "normal". I explained to them that this could become a primary source doc for them, 50 years in the future. There was some buy in...

Date: 3/30/20

Days in quarantine: 1

Time: 7:50

Today I stayed inside all-day except to get in the car to pick up my mom from the hospital where she works. Luckily, my mom, who is an Infection preventionist, did not have to work late like she usually does because of this pandemic. So when she got back from work we played Twister, which was very fun. One thing that is good for me from all of this is that my mom gets food from where she works. l get milkshakes, donuts, etc. This is what I am doing on quarantine day one.

AND

Date: 4/2

Days in quarantine: 19

Time: 3:06

Each day that goes on I feel like things get worse and worse. I’ve been trying a lot to make progress and to keep up with all my classes. Me and my mom have been binge watching lots of our favorite shows together lately which is fun. I’ve been motivated to start more workouts lately. To me that’s weird because I hardly do workouts in my room. But I guess here we are. I’m just happy that now it’s spring. And the weather has been better lately. From what me and my mom have seen on the news, an advantage of everyone being inside, lots of oceans have been starting to clear up with all the trash that was in there. It’s like the world needed a break from people. But the sun has been out more, the weather has seemed to be getting better and I’m really glad about that.

But, I felt after 2 weeks of this, the kids would get bored and, as predicted, they did get bored with this idea. So I created prompts for the students to respond to, helping them to stay focused:

  • What has challenged you about doing work from home?

The biggest challenge is staying focused. There are so many distractions at home. My phone buzzes and I have to check it. My dog barks and I have to calm him down. I look for what work I have to do and spend hours trying to figure it out.

It’s hard with no instruction because you basically have to teach yourself. I’m in seventh grade! I’m not qualified to teach anyone, especially not myself. How am I supposed to learn if the teacher (me) doesn’t know what she’s doing?

  • What is a positive that has come from the stay-at-home order?

Less pollution! There are so many less people outside polluting that the Himalayas can be seen for the first time in years. Despite the posthumous circumstances of why there is less pollution, I think it’s great for the environment. I also like how quiet it is outside in the city.

  • What has been disappointing or frustrating about this experience?

I think that the most disappointing and frustrating part of this experience is the most obvious. Not being able to see my friends at school. Not being able to see them in person is very hard for me because I don’t have anyone to talk to about things that I like. Some of those things are music, memes and personal life. Not being able to see my friends and not having a phone makes it harder for me.

  • What have you learned about yourself during this forced confinement?

I have learned from this confinement that I love school! I hate e-learning because I can’t do hands-on science activities or work with my friends. School gives me a community, and something to keep me on schedule. My days are more exciting at school, because we have Win period and recess and after school time. I have to say though, I don’t think I would have said this when we were in school. I always get so stuck up on the homework and thinking I have so much to do, making me not having much time to relax. I wonder how people do things like not doing homework until 8:00 at night. The times I haven’t done homework right when I get home, I get anxious (remembering the time I went to Ines’s house, everyone kept asking if I was OK!). Anyways, I miss seeing my friends and teachers, and I miss the teachers being able to help me without having to do a video call or an email.

Yet, as the weeks of remote learning have dragged on and my efforts to keep my students engaged and writing have taken on new perspective. I decided that giving the students choice, which they had experienced throughout the school year, was very helpful at keeping them writing. Therefore, I asked the students to submit their own ideas for journal prompts/questions. I received quite a few responses that have kept us going over the last few weeks. The questions the students generated have been insightful and have generated much interest from their peers. It was important to give students credit if they provided questions for the journal experience. And the questions poured in...

  • How has the news/media affected the way you thought or think about the virus?

The news has affected the way I think about the virus because it shows reality. The way they talk about it on the news, it makes it seem like that is what is going on in a different world, not like we are living in it. They do not make it seem like we are living in this world. They talk about the cases, but then it seems like we are observers, not on the same planet.

Another reason why the news has affected my view is because they over exaggerate it. They make it seem like the only thing going on. Every story is based on it. The news makes it seem like a do or die thing. It is, but it is not to that level. In conclusion, the news make things seem like what they are not.

  • During the pandemic, a lot of people have been binge watching shows. If you could live in or jump into one TV show, what would it be?

I personally watch a lot of Vampire diaries and the Originals. These are shows about vampires and their battles. I would probably want to live in Vampire diaries. The show is filled with drama which is no different from my life. In the show there are normal teens but with the twist of there being Werewolves and Vampires.

I enjoy watching it because of the powers the characters possess. There are not only Vampires and Werewolves but as well witches, hybrids, Originals, and of course humans. It seems like lots of fun and I have always been interested in myths like Vampires. It seems like a normal high school life unless you're one of the main prominent characters who have supernatural powers. This is one of my favorite shows and that leads me to want to live it.

  • When the pandemic ends, will school change forever?

Not really, because we’ll just have a “reunion” and that’ll be that. I don’t think many people will even remember what the Remote learning was like even two years afterwards. However I do feel bad for the eighth graders because they don’t ever get to go back to Nettelhorst again, for school at least.

I don’t even think it’ll be that bad of a transition going back to school, because most of us like normal school much better than E-Learning, because we get to see our friends, and also there are after-schools available. The one thing I’ll miss from E-learning, however is not having to get up at 7:00 every day. To be honest, it’s insane that we have to normally. Even just thirty more minutes is enough.

  • If you could only see one person during a “never-ending” quarantine, who would it be and why?

If I could see anyone I wanted during a never ending quarantine it would most likely be my grandpa or one of my grandmas because this is a scary time for all the elderly, so I would never know if it would be the last time I’ll ever see them. I would also do this because my mom is very worried about her parents so if they were to come and see us it would make her feel better about her parents in this pandemic.

My grandparents have also been very nice to me and my brother, it would be tragic if they were to die especially without saying a simple hello before they would pass away so I’d love to check on them knowing that they are okay in front of me. It would mean a lot to spend time with them if something bad were to happen. It would make my brother, my mom, and me feel better if anything horrible would happen.

  • What are your hopes for Summer 2020? What are your worries?

My hope for the summer is that everything goes back to normal in time that we can have school again. It would really suck if we had to do e-learning again in the fall, because I really hate it. I miss seeing everyone at school and the community it provides.

Even if we have to wear masks to school, It’ll be worth it because I think it will make me feel like I’m actually learning again. I think that if we can’t go back to school in the fall, I’m actually going to lose knowledge and feel like this is a waste of time. I’ll just have to see how it turns out.

  • Has your personality changed while in lockdown? Elaborate.

I don’t believe my personality has changed that much other than being a bit irritated. Upstairs a person has gotten a new dog that likes to run around loudly. Its small feet can get quite annoying and distracting when I am trying to get school work done. It can also be annoying when I’m watching TV as it can sometimes be especially loud then . The dog loves to run around so much that I have named it “Skiders.”

Another irritating thing that has affected me is the school next door. Today I was awoken by the sound of workers drilling into the school’s driveway at seven a.m. in the morning. As far as I know, it is a gas company that is doing the work. The construction work has changed my personality as it wakes me up in a rude way that leaves me tired in the morning.

The key to learning is to stop passively consuming information and start actively engaging with the ideas we encounter. One effective way researchers have found to reinforce learning is through reflective writing. It turns out that regular journaling can be used to train our attention and strengthen neural pathways. Neurologist and authority on brain research regarding learning and the brain and correlations of this research to best teaching practices Judy Willis explains:

"The practice of writing can enhance the brain’s intake, processing, retaining, and retrieving of information… it promotes the brain’s attentive focus … boosts long-term memory, illuminates patterns, gives the brain time for reflection, and when well-guided, is a source of conceptual development and stimulus of the brain’s highest cognition."

The remote learning experience in Spring, 2020 has been unique. Exploring new instructional strategies has been challenging, yet this journal writing activity will be remembered as a journey of discovery for the students who actively engaged, as well as for the teacher who learned along with her students.

-Paulina Levy- 08/2020

15 Benefits of Independent Reading by Laura Robb

  1. Refines students’ understanding of applying strategies, for during independent reading, students have multiple opportunities to practice what they learn during instructional reading.

  2. Develops an understanding of how diverse genres work as readers figure out the likenesses and differences among realistic, historical, and science fiction, fantasy, mystery, thrillers, biography, memoir, informational texts, etc.

  3. Enlarges background knowledge and deepens readers’ understanding of people as they get to know different characters.

  4. Builds vocabulary as students meet and understand words in diverse contexts. Independent reading, not vocabulary workbooks, is the best way to enlarge vocabulary because students meet words in the context of their reading.

  5. Teaches students how to self-select “good fit” books they can and want to read.

  6. Develops students’ agency and literary tastes. Choice builds agency and as students choose and dip into diverse genres and topics, they discover the types of books they enjoy.

  7. Strengthens reading stamina, their ability to focus on reading for 20-minutes to one hour.

  8. Improves silent reading. Through daily practice, students develop their in-the-head reading voice and learn to read in meaningful phrases.

  9. Develops reading fluency because of the practice that voluminous reading offers.

  10. Supports recall of information learners need as they read long texts that ask them to hold details presented in early chapters in their memory so they can access these later in the book.

  11. Improves reading rate through the practice that volume provides.

  12. Develops students’ imagination as they visualize settings, what characters and people look like, conflicts, decisions, problems, interactions, etc.

  13. Fosters the enjoyment of visual literacy when students read picture books and graphic texts.

  14. Creates empathy for others as students learn to step into the skin of characters and experience their lives.

  15. Transfers a passion for reading to students’ outside-of-school lives and develops the volume in reading students need to become proficient and advanced readers.

Tracking is tracking no matter what you call it or how you try to reimage it into "accelerated", "advanced", or "tiered". This article from Teaching Tolerance shows how tracking can successfully be eliminated from schools and "give every student a chance to shine."

Tracking and ability grouping remain common practices in schools across the country despite research showing these practices contribute to segregated classes and opportunity gaps. In Walla Walla, Washington, a group of educators decided to try something different.

Issue 62, Summer 2019 by Michelle Higgins

Getting on the Right Track: How One School Stopped Tracking Students

The Negative Effects of Ability Grouping

This post from George Couros (The Innovator's Mindset) was especially thought-provoking.

How do you deal with criticism?

I am a total sucker for quotes. I feel short quotes are often like great song lyrics in the way that they tell the consumer a story made for their interpretation in a way that is needed at the moment. This article providing quotes on criticism has some thought-provoking ideas from different viewpoints.

For example, we sometimes need to ignore criticism in the way that it can hold us back:

“Don’t waste your energy trying to change opinions…Do your thing, and don’t care if they like it.” — Tina Fey

The dread of criticism is the death of genius.” — William Gilmore Simms

But on the other end, criticism is beneficial and necessary:

“Let me never fall into the vulgar mistake of dreaming that I am persecuted whenever I am contradicted.” — Ralph Waldo Emerson

“The trouble with most of us is that we’d rather be ruined by praise than saved by criticism.” — Norman Vincent Peale

My favorite quote on “criticism” as of late, is from Brene Brown in her recent Netflix special. I was half asleep when I heard it but when she said it, I became wide awake:

If you are not in the arena getting your ass kicked because you are being brave, I am not interested or open to your feedback on my work. Period.

I have been thinking a lot about the idea of criticism in how I receive it and how I give it. I am a big believer that challenge is necessary for growth and development, but I also know how criticism is delivered and where it is delivered from matter tremendously. We have all encountered those who seemingly criticize everything and have a problem with every solution. The intent might be from a positive place, but it doesn’t seem that way. A relationship of only push with no support is bound to cease or fail.

I have been thinking of the own way I challenge those that are close to me. I know my intent, but recently, I had a conversation with a close friend, and he challenged me on the way I challenge him specifically. My purpose was positive, but my delivery was weak as I did not show the tremendous value and influence this person had on me not only personally but professionally. I have often made the distinction between “being valued” and “feeling valued”; I was abundant on the first but lacked in the latter in the view of my friend, which was justified.

Criticism is necessary for growth, but it is essential to remind ourselves of our intent and to identify if they are coming from a place where we are dealing with our insecurities. You can’t help anyone grow by only trying to pull them down.


The Growth from Accepting and/or Ignoring Criticism


Professional research supports NOT teaching grammar in isolation

Thank you Joanne Yatvin for restating why we do not teach grammar separate from writing. Very informative post.

Should Schools Teach English Grammar to Children?

BY WRITERJONEY ON MAY 26, 2019

Today I am posting a piece I wrote several years ago for the National Council of Teachers of English. I decided to do that because the teaching of grammar to children in school has again raised its ugly head, and I want to make clear why that is a waste of time.

Some years ago, while visiting a grade 4/5 classroom in the school where I was principal, I listened to a group of children reading aloud the first drafts of essays they had written about the holidays celebrated in America. They were helping each other to correct errors and make meaning clearer. In reading her essay aloud one girl said, “In the United States we celebrate Christmas by giving and receiving gifts and sing Christmas carols.” Immediately, another girl in the group interrupted her, saying, “That word should be singing.” The interesting thing for me was not that the second girl was absolutely right, but that she was able to do it without knowing why. Neither she nor any other child in the classroom could have stated: “Sentence elements of equal grammatical rank should be expressed in parallel constructions.” Yet, all of them subconsciously knew that principle of English grammar and were able—most of the time—to demonstrate it in their speech and writing.

This story is but one illustration of what happens most of the time in language usage; we construct grammatically correct sentences or correct our mistakes by intuitively applying the rules that govern English syntax. If, instead, we had to apply those rules consciously, they would only get in our way, making it impossible for us to speak or write at all. For example, to construct a simple two-word sentence, such as “He dreams,” requires the application of at least seven grammar rules. Imagine trying to apply them consciously following the instructions of English grammar: “To say what I mean, I need a noun phrase and a verb phrase. The noun phrase can be made up of a singular noun plus a determiner, a plural noun, a proper noun, or a nominative case pronoun. If I choose a pronoun, it can be singular or plural, but it must be inflected for a first, second, or third person. The verb I choose can be transitive, intransitive, or copulative. If it is transitive, it needs an object. But if it is copulative, it needs a complement. In any case the verb must also be inflected for a first, second, or third person to agree with the pronoun.”

With grammar rules so complicated and hard to remember, you may wonder why we have them at all. The fact is that such rules were created by linguists in order to explain language phenomena that had already existed for thousands of years. Most of the grammatical explanations were reasonable at the time they were created, but some have been discredited by subsequent discoveries about language. Others were cancelled out by actual changes in spoken language over time. In all cases, though, the rules were merely rough models for incompletely understood mental processes. No grammarian ever asserted that a grammar list exists in the brain, from which human beings select and apply rules as they needed them.

Although grammar rules are explanations for what exists in language– not prescriptions for what “ought to be”– they have been misused for a long time. Teaching those rules in schools started with instruction in ancient Latin and Greek, where it made sense because those were “dead” languages that nobody spoke anymore. But then those rules gradually slipped into other parts of the school curriculum, such as modern foreign language courses and English classes, where they should never have been.

Over the years, the teaching of grammar has continued to be prominent in English and foreign language instruction in schools, leaving less class time or energy for students to speak, read, or write. Yet, many perceptive teachers, sensing that grammar lessons might not be beneficial for students, have pressed for research to determine their real impact on learning. As early as 1906, studies were undertaken that attempted to show the relationship between school-taught grammar and naturally acquired language skills. Since then, hundreds of such studies have produced clear and unequivocal conclusions: the teaching of formal grammar does not help any student to speak, to write, to think, or to learn a foreign language.

It is important for today’s educators to know that recent research studies do not justify teaching grammar as the way to help students write better. Although we accept the fact that many social, economic, and political forces influence education, we ought not allow them to outweigh knowledge and reason in determining what the school curriculum should be.


Writing to Learn Promotes Metacognition

(Reflective Thinking)

Writing to learn is the in-class writing that helps students engage deeply with content, build connections, and retain what they've learned. Writing to learn means using writing as a tool to promote content learning; when students write they think on paper.

Teachers who assign writing activities do so to help students learn subject matter, clarify and organize their thoughts, and improve their retention of content. Writing to learn tasks can be based on reading, classroom discussion, teacher presentation, media such as a video, or hands-on activities.

Being able to write is as important to learning as being able to read (Vilardi & Connolly, 1989).

Middle School Parent/Teacher Conference Tips.

When meeting with parents at open house night, or in individual parent-teacher conferences, teachers might find it helpful to tuck a few ideas into their repertoire.

Differentiate. Some parents aren’t going to be involved at all. They won’t call, write, question, or offer themselves to the learning process. Other parents will email the teacher for clarifications or explanations frequently. Neither approach is right or wrong, but for teachers, it just means figuring out which parents will be heavily involved and which parents won’t, and reacting to each parent’s needs.

Acknowledge the awkward. “It’s hard work to parent a middle school child, isn’t it?” I’ve heard teachers start conversations with parents this way, and then follow with, “It’s hard work to teach one, too. But I feel really good about us working together. Let’s talk about what we both want for your child.” This acknowledges the shared work—hey, we’re working toward the same goal, and it’s not easy, but we can do it, and we can do it well. It creates unity rather than separation.

Strike a deal. I once had the daughter of my superintendent in my class. I was nervous as a cat at open house night; I had deep admiration and respect for him as a superintendent, and here I was, encountering him as a parent. He shook my hand and grinned. “Let’s make a deal. I’ll believe half of what she says about you, and you believe half of what she says about me.” We laughed, me with relief: I appreciated his acknowledgment that middle schoolers rarely tell the full story about their learning at school, and they tend to lionize their teachers. I’ve used that approach more than once with parents: Let’s recognize the communication tactics of middle schoolers and agree to be on the same team—a grown-up team of adults working toward the same goal.

Be transparent. Reading and writing teachers at the middle school level walk a delicate tightrope: they want and need to connect with students through texts and writing experiences, but have to show caution if their students want to go deep—by reading texts their parents wouldn’t like, or writing pieces that dare, challenge, and question everything. It makes a lot of sense to communicate any concerns or red flags to parents. Thought experiments are normal and expected at this age. They are also, often, pretty awesome. Shouldn’t parents get to share this part of the process?

Offer opportunity. The days of volunteering in the classroom are long gone for parents of middle schoolers, for many legitimate reasons—not least being that a student’s mortification would be too immense for words. It’s up to the teacher, then, to let parents be involved. School-to-home journals, family literacy events, shared texts, digital platforms with photographs (ideally created and maintained by students), and shared work samples are all ways to keep parents present.

Understand the anxiety. Now that I’m living with a middle schooler, I finally understand how most middle school parents are walking around with their stomachs turned inside out much of the time. There is so much to worry about, after all: social stuff, emotional stuff, behavioral stuff, Internet stuff, smartphone stuff, school stuff, preparing-for-the-future stuff. All of it. It depletes and confuses us. Which is just another thing to worry about. I find the best thing to offer the parent of a middle school is a little empathy and the ability to alleviate their worry if we can.

Don’t make homework horrible. When homework is drudgery for a middle schooler, everyone suffers. Middle school students can smell busywork like a shark smelling blood, and they’ll snap in anger or sink into apathy. When a student is doing homework that has no meaning, the frustration and insecurity of the age itself compounds and explodes—often at the parent. Everything sours: the student’s thoughts about school, the parent’s ability to help, a teacher’s credibility. It is just not worth it. At this time of life, more than ever, a teacher shouldn’t be the reason behind conflict at home, and certainly not because of a reading or writing assignment. Homework should add value to the child’s reading and writing. If it doesn’t, it’s time to rethink things.


Jennifer Schwanke, Choice Literacy Blog, 2018.

Writing is Thinking

Writing is a cognitive process that allows students to "show what they know," which not only aids teachers in assessing students, but also helps them plan appropriate instructional strategies that will most benefit each student. Nonfiction writing will help students score higher on tests, but more importantly, will prepare them for life!

When a writer connects their ideas into a written piece, they give voice and direction to their thinking. When a student chooses the words to describe their learning they are giving voice to their thinking. .A writer goes on the record as someone who thinks about why they do what they do, and understands how each decision affects the results.

Through writing we assist our students in developing a knack for critical thinking.

How to Get Students Thinking

Often teachers believe their students are thinking about new learning because they can recall, recognize or reproduce a fact, a definition, or a simple one-step procedure. This is new learning but it is not thinking, it is just as mentioned: recall, recognition or reproduction.

Thinking occurs when our students are engaged in inquiry. How can our teachers engage our students in inquiry?

*Ask questions that encourage thinking.

*Give students time to create their own questions about the learning they will participate in as active learners. This is one of the single most productive methods to get students intimately involved in their own learning.

* During tests allow students the opportunity to explain what they did to demonstrate learning.

*Ask students to make observations: What did you observe?

*Ask students to make claims and provide evidence. What can I claim? How do I know? Why am I making these claims?

*Assign challenging reading and ask students how their thinking compares to the thinking of others.

*Provide time for reflection: How have your ideas changed? Why?

Metacognition: Thinking about Thinking

Metacognitive awareness is necessary to develop greater intellectual maturity. Consider the metacognitive awareness, thinking about thinking, that teachers use to plan instruction. This type of planning allows teachers a time to reflect on their work, prompting them to evaluate their instructional goals, methods, and outcomes.

This time for self-reflection is always a good thing; asking questions and self-reflection are natural to teaching.

Self-reflective questions teachers can ask include:

*What objectives do I want to accomplish?

*Which academic vocabulary words should I focus on?

*Which disciplinary vocabulary words are necessary for students to understand a concept?

*How can I teach so the students understand my explanations? What is good for teacher planning is also good for student learning. Research that has spanned three decades indicates that metacognition has positive effects on students' academic and personal development. Much of the research has shown that metacognition is vital to social learning and personality development which helps our students increase practical intelligence resulting in personal insights into their own learning.

When our students have metacognitive instruction about their own thinking while learning they become aware of their own learning challenges and learn methods to work through these challenges, reducing the frustration that can occur when a new concept is introduced. Teachers know that their students need to learn higher level thinking skills because cognitive demands become more complex from one grade to the next.

"Through the lifelong skill of metacognitive thinking, students can be taught to reflect on their own learning processes while they complete learning tasks. It is evident that metacognitive awareness creates self-regulated learning, allowing students to develop greater intellectual maturity" (Joseph, 2009).

More on Writing to Develop Thinking

This post is from NCTE member Jenny Kirsch. She teaches middle school English in New York City. She is also an associate at Hewitt’s Center for Teaching & Learning Through Writing, where she works on developing Writing-to-Learn practices for students and faculty in Grades 5-12. She is interested in the intersection of reading and writing, and believes technology can enhance both of these pursuits.

In recent years, as I’ve incorporated more writing-to-learn practices into my classroom, a new solution to this challenge has arisen and taken hold. Formal writing assignments are still accompanied by graphic organizers and group discussions that give students a sense of how much they should write, but short writing responses are quantified differently. I might pose a question about a class novel and ask for 5–7 sentences, but more often, I share a writing prompt and let my students know they have 10 minutes (or 5, or 15) to respond to it. The first go at this always produces a bit of anxiety for some students, but soon our classroom becomes a place where writing is an exercise in thinking and self-expression, in considering ideas and questions and putting them down in complete sentences. The end goal moves away from “Is this long enough?” and toward “Does my writing say what I wanted it to?”

Thoughts on Being a Mentor...

A Few Things I've Learned as a Mentor

Early in my career as a teacher I was lucky enough to have some wonderful, experienced educators to guide me through the process as a beginning teacher. There was Rosalie Lipari a wonderful teacher who gave me advice and just told me what to do in difficult situations during my first few years of teaching in Oak Forest, IL, and Mr. Stern, Fair Lawn, NJ, one of the best principals I've ever been privileged to work with, he was very direct and honest and even walked me through the process of becoming a junior high school reading teacher. Mr. Pipp, Asst. Supt. also from Fair Lawn NJ who gave me the confidence to take on a leadership role in my new position. Michele Lawrence, the most amazing, energetic principal at Whittier High School. During the earthquake that damaged our school she carried a big wrench and knew how to use it to turn off the gas in the event of an emergency and yet her caring for our students in need was something I still strive to achieve. Lynda Cox and Jean King were an amazing team of supportive and esteem building educators in Easton, CT. I could go on and on as I reflect on my many years as a teacher.

When the tables turned, I was lucky enough to become a literacy coach and I found myself in the role as a mentor teacher, I tried to emulate the best qualities of the people who mentored me. Over the years I have had the privilege to mentor a few teachers and I continue to learn about teaching and being a mentor.

  • First, be a friend. The best way to guide is through a genuine, collaborative relationship. I find myself learning from the teachers I work with and the ideas they share are often so innovative. that I build on their ideas by developing a friendship with the teachers. This is not easy. Not every teacher wants to collaborate, so I've learned to watch for those opportunities to develop a friendly collaboration.

  • Second, ask questions. It is important for our students to learn about the benefits of questioning as they learn. I, too, have learned that asking questions often allows me the chance to gain insights and a better understanding of what my colleague was seeking from me. Asking questions helps to initiate a conversation that will lead to increased learning on both of our parts and improved teaching.

  • Last, share and model. Sometimes students need to see how we think through how a lesson is developed, how a skill is taught, or how curriculum is unpacked to create learning. I don't always have the answers, but if I can share my experiences and model a lesson for the teacher, I can create a situation that allows for conversation and deeper thinking about the craft of teaching.

Every great teacher I know has a few tricks they learned as they were learning the craft. They were willing to create the space required to help me become a better teacher. I appreciate all that was done for me as I was learning, I hope I have the same impact on a few of the teachers I have worked with along the way.

The Best Teachers Change Their Minds... And That's a Good Thing

I just finished reading an article that advocates for teachers to rethink some of the commonly held ideas about assessment, instruction, and learning. The author, Terry Heick (2017) writes:

"In many ways, there is no “right” or “wrong,” but only degrees of fit and subjectivity. If you’re changing your mind—about the role of technology in learning, the ideal lesson template, or the best audiences for project-based learning products—that means you’re growing.You’re reacting to formal and informal data in front of you every day. Anecdotal data, parent conferences, literacy rates, test scores, and a thousand other points.

You’re responding to the progression of technology in the world around you. You’re changing to meet the needs of a new generation of students whose natural skills and interests seem to tend towards project-based learning. You see the cognitive rigor of a game like Portal 2, and you wonder if game-based learning might have a place–if even a small place–in the classroom you share with students. (You no longer call it “your” classroom.)

The best teachers change their mind because things themselves change. 21st century learning is, above all else, diverse, interdependent, and formless. Technology, culture, academic standards, assessment forms, and the cost–and format–of higher education all evolve endlessly.

Which means, as their most powerful common mediator, you have to as well."

Heick's writing gave me something to think about. I have changed my mind on the topics mentioned in his writing, as well as several others. It is important for our students' development to keep an open mind and look at what current research and literature says about best practices in teaching. These evolve as we become more experienced teachers, but we cannot let our experience stand in the way of important mind shifts that make learning more attainable for our students.

Make a change in your approach to teaching: a new reading protocol, a new strategy, or add a new approach to your content. It may help you see your students in a new light.

Alfie Kohn is an American author and lecturer in the areas of education, parenting, and human behavior. He is a proponent of progressive education and has offered critiques of many traditional aspects of parenting, managing, and American society more generally, drawing in each case from social science research. Here, his thoughts on instructional scaffolding. Instructional scaffolding is the support given during the learning process which is tailored to the needs of the student with the intention of helping the student achieve his/her learning goals. This learning process is designed to promote a deeper level of learning.

By Alfie Kohn

It was the late Jerome Bruner and his colleagues who first thought to invoke the field of (building) construction in creating an educational metaphor. They described the process of providing learners with temporary support for what they can’t yet do on their own as “scaffolding.”[1] It’s a nifty figure of speech, and the practice itself seems just as appealing: After all, who could object to offering students a boost until they no longer need it?

But as I’ve thought more carefully about scaffolding — and watched as it, like so many other promising terms, has been appropriated by non- and even anti-progressive educators – I’ve become increasingly skeptical. Here are some questions I think we might want to ask when the word is casually tossed around.

1. What’s the hurry? Often the point of scaffolding is not to provide support just because it’s needed but as a strategy for expediting improvement in academic performance. When this is done with young children in particular, might it represent another example of rushing kids along? (“Well, okay, I’ll help you with the big words, but I expect you to be able to read this on your own by the end of the month.”) Could scaffolding with this goal in mind displace the sort of exploration that’s driven purely by curiosity?

2. Must self-sufficiency always be the goal? It’s immensely rewarding to watch kids grow and become increasingly adept at what they’re doing. But we often take for granted the desirability of getting them to do more and more on their own. (By definition, scaffolding isn’t meant to stay up indefinitely.) From a psychological perspective, autonomy — experiencing a sense of volition and being able to act on one’s preferences — is not the same thing as independence. Some very healthy, autonomous young people aren’t particularly independent, and some who are independent really can’t be described as autonomous.

From a cultural perspective, meanwhile, independence is closely connected to an individualistic worldview that is far from universal. It’s more commonly endorsed by men than by women, and it’s more common in the West than the East, in industrialized than nonindustrialized societies, and among professionals as compared with working-class people. For many people, interdependence is valued at least as much as independence — which means that engaging in tasks together, continuing to rely on one another, might be something to be celebrated rather than outgrown.[2]

3. What’s the task? Gay Ivey, a literacy educator, observes that scaffolding is sometimes provided in order to “get students through difficult, unappealing texts.” Even if it works to elicit their compliance, she adds, it’s unlikely to “motivate students to continue learning about that topic on their own.”[3] The broader implication is that a preoccupation with the degree of difficulty — and how best to provide scaffolding – serves to distract us from the far more important question of what we’re asking students to do. Just because a task meets the Goldilocks test with respect to challenge level – neither too easy nor too hard — doesn’t mean it’s worth doing. It may hold no meaning for students. It may have simply been imposed on them, without their having any say in the matter. In short, if we’re busy fiddling with scaffolding, we’re less likely to stop and say, “Hold on — do students really need to do this at all?”

4. Whose meanings? Even if students have been asked to do something that’s potentially meaningful, the assignment may just involve reproducing someone else’s understanding rather than making sense of an idea for oneself. Suppose a teacher’s goal is for students to adopt a conventional method for solving a math problem or setting up an experiment, or to be able to repeat the teacher’s (or textbook’s) interpretation of a story or an historical event. And suppose students are having trouble doing so. In that case, it might make sense to give them a hand, a hint, to take them halfway there — in short, to scaffold. But if the goal were to help students find their own way into the topic, to construct meaning in order to understand what they’re doing more deeply, then scaffolding, at least as the term is typically used, would not be particularly useful.[4]

Too often, however, the problem runs deeper: It’s not that students are merely adopting the teacher’s meanings; it’s that meanings aren’t even involved — just the recitation of right answers, the rote recall of bits of information. Indeed, a failure to ask the four questions I’ve offered here may explain why the idea of scaffolding has been appropriated by behaviorists — people who still champion direct instruction, still make kids practice a series of skills devoid of context, still offer rewards for success (or compliance) as if they were training a pet. How ironic that a construction metaphor is placed in the service of a distinctly unconstructivist approach to education.

Of course scaffolding could be defined differently, in which case we needn’t dispense with the word or the practice as long as we were careful to explain what we meant. So what would a better version look like?

* It would offer support for the learner’s own goals, not just a technique for propelling her up an adult’s ladder.

* It would allow for the possibility of collaboration among students rather than assuming each must eventually complete all tasks alone.

* It would be done in such a way as to respond to each student’s needs rather than being presented as one-size-fits-all assistance — for example, by assigning the same (scaffolded) task to everyone.

* The support would change along with the learner’s understanding — which means changes in the type of support, not just in the amount, frequency, or duration.

* It would involve suggesting new possibilities for learners to consider, helping them to “take an active, inventive role and reconstruct the task through their own understanding” rather than just “passively absorb[ing] the strategies of the adult,” as the early-childhood educator Anne B. Smith put it.[5]

* Above all, the process of devising appropriate scaffolding would not displace the more important task of working with students to devise a thoughtful, question-based, learner-centered curriculum that involves understanding ideas from the inside out.

NOTES

1. The concept is sometimes attributed to the early twentieth-century Russian psychologist Lev Vygotsky, but as far as I can tell, he never used the word — nor did Bruner et al. mention Vygotsky in the article where they introduced it. However, Vygotsky’s concept of the “zone of proximal development” is related to, and probably helped to inspire, the notion of scaffolding; Bruner was certainly quite familiar with Vygotsky’s work.

2. I discuss the limits of individualism in two books, one that explores the idea of altruism (The Brighter Side of Human Nature) and another that challenges the ubiquitous, ferocious attacks on “helicopter parenting” (The Myth of the Spoiled Child).

3. Gay Ivey, “Texts That Matter,” Educational Leadership, March 2010, p. 20.

4. For a discussion of similar concerns about scaffolding from a constructivist perspective, see Catherine Twomey Fosnot, “Constructivism: A Psychological Theory of Learning,” in Fostnot, ed., Constructivism: Theory, Perspectives, and Practice (Teachers College Press, 1996), esp. p. 21. James Wertsch, a Vygotsky scholar at Washington University in St. Louis, raised a related concern regarding different types of meaning: “A scaffold is something you build up. You build a structure beside it, then build up the scaffolding some more, and the structure gets built up more. Eventually you take the scaffolding away. The problem is that this metaphor fails to account for qualitative transformation [where]…a partial structure…works well for this stage of development, but now we’re going to have to tear the whole thing down and switch from building in wood to building in brick. We don’t do that with scaffolding. Scaffolding has this kind of incremental quantitative development notion built into it…[whereas] during qualitative change you have major upheaval” (Brenda Fyfe, “A Conversation with James V. Wertsch: Part II,” Constructivist, Spring 1997, pp. 5-6).

5. Anne B. Smith, “Early Childhood Educare: Seeking a Theoretical Framework in Vygotsky’s Work,” International Journal of Early Years Education, vol. 1, 1993: 47-62.