Friends -

As of December 2022, we removed the copyediting ordering options.  Some people have asked the reason we no longer offer copyediting. Here's some information about that:

Question: Why are you no longer offering copyediting or proofreading services?

Companies like Grammarly and PerfectIt introduced machine learning to catch contextual errors and stylistic missteps back in 2009. But the real game changer was  Generative AI (2022–Present). The release of large language models to the public in late 2022 drastically changed the industry. Instead of just highlighting a typo, AI can entirely rewrite sentences, adapt tone, and structure paragraphs, along with catching grammar, punctuation, and spelling errors better than any human can.

Question:  Couldn't you, as a copyeditor/proofreader, adapt?

While proofreading and copyediting has been automated by software, human editors are still in demand for developmental editing. The problem is: I, personally, am not a developmental editor. I'm a writer who is good at copyediting but not the best at developmental editing. And I don't pretend to be. 

Question: Not everyone knows about AI copyediting and proofreading. Can't you continue to offer services to some?

No, I can't. Basic Microsoft Word has AI copyediting features built in. Grammarly is free and well known. Many AI options are completely free for anyone to use. It would be incredibly dishonest for me to charge money for something someone could very easily do themselves at no cost. Writing is different. I'm certainly not an expert. But I've done enough research to know that AI can't write fiction the way a human can. 

Question: You're a great fantasy writer! You already work on stories for others through ghostwriting. What's the difference between ghostwriting and developmental editing?

Here is why a great fantasy ghostwriter could struggle with developmental editing:

Creator vs. Critic Mindset

• Ghostwriters create. They build worlds from scratch, invent characters, and write prose.

• Editors deconstruct. They analyze an existing, messy manuscript to find out why it's broken.

• The barrier: Shifting from "How do I write this story?" to "How do I fix their story?" is difficult.

Fixing vs. Rewriting

• Ghostwriters execute. If a plot hole exists, a ghostwriter just writes a new scene to fix it.

• Editors guide. A developmental editor cannot rewrite the book. They must explain the problem to the author.

• The barrier: It is often easier for a writer to do the work themselves than to teach someone else how to do it.

Ownership of Voice

• Ghostwriters adopt voices. They step into the shadows and mimic the client's style perfectly.

• Editors preserve voices. They must evaluate the manuscript objectively without changing the author's unique style.

• The barrier: Writers often struggle not to overwrite the author's voice with their own preferences.

Structural Diagnosis

• Ghostwriters use intuition. They follow a narrative flow naturally as they create.

• Editors use frameworks. They analyze pacing, character arcs, and thematic consistency using strict structural mechanics.

• The barrier: Being able to intuitively write a good story does not mean you know how to diagnose a bad one.

Question: Can you provide examples of developmental editing tasks vs. ghostwriting editing tasks?

Yes! Here are some:

Handling a Plot Hole

• Developmental Editor: Writes a detailed memo explaining that a magic artifact appears in Chapter 10 without explanation. They suggest three possible ways the author can introduce it earlier.

• Ghostwriter: Opens the draft and writes a completely new scene in Chapter 2 where the main character discovers the artifact in a market.

Developing Magic Systems

• Developmental Editor: Points out that the rules of the magic system change halfway through the book. They ask the author to define the costs and limitations of the magic to keep it consistent.

• Ghostwriter: Interviews the client about their rough idea, builds a 10-page "magic rulebook" from scratch, and writes the action scenes showing the characters using it.

Fixing Pacing Issues

• Developmental Editor: Identifies that the middle of the book drags. They advise the author to cut a specific travel sequence and merge two minor characters to speed up the plot.

• Ghostwriter: Takes the client's slow draft, deletes the boring chapters, and writes a fast-paced action sequence to bridge the gap between major plot points.

Improving Character Arcs

• Developmental Editor: Notes that the protagonist's shift from a coward to a hero happens too fast. They mark specific pages where the author needs to add internal dialogue showing fear.

• Ghostwriter: Rewrites the protagonist's dialogue and inner thoughts across five different chapters to gradually show their growing bravery.

Resolving World-Building Gaps

• Developmental Editor: Questions how a desert kingdom gets its water and notes this missing detail hurts the story's realism. They prompt the author to brainstorm a solution.

• Ghostwriter: Invents an underground magical aquifer system, names the labor guilds that manage it, and writes a scene describing the grand aqueducts.

So there you have it. 

I'm just a writer who lives in other worlds, not a developmental editor looking into one.

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