Editing & Review Services

Tier 1: Quick Read
Ideal For: Authors looking for a general sense of how the story flows or how the characters resonate.

• Includes:

  • General feedback on pacing, structure, and overall enjoyment.

  • Comments on characters and their development (whether they are engaging or consistent).

  • General impressions of the world, setting, and plot.

  • A brief report (1-2 pages) with major highlights and suggestions for improvement.

• Pricing: $90 (for manuscripts up to 30,000 words)

• Add-On: Extra word count at $0.02 per word.

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Tier 2: In-Depth Beta Read
Ideal For: Authors wanting a thorough review with detailed insights into plot and character dynamics, pacing, and structure.

• Includes:

  • Detailed feedback on plot, pacing, character arcs, and overall story flow.

  • Comments on dialogue and character motivations, suggesting areas for improvement or strengthening.

  • Insights into world-building and any inconsistencies or confusion in the setting.

  • Line-by-line comments in the manuscript (up to 10% of the document) with suggestions for specific improvements.

  • A 2-3 page feedback summary with actionable advice and areas for revision.

• Pricing: $200 (for manuscripts up to 50,000 words)

• Add-On: Extra word count at $0.03 per word.

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Tier 3: Comprehensive Beta Read
Ideal For: Authors looking for a deep, holistic critique with actionable suggestions and advice for story development, character depth, and consistency.

• Includes:

  • Full manuscript review with detailed feedback on all aspects of the story: plot, pacing, character development, setting, and themes.

  • Extensive comments on character motivations, behaviors, and interactions, with suggestions for improving emotional impact and believability.

  • Comprehensive feedback on world-building, ensuring consistency, immersion, and clarity.

  • A 5+ page written report with overall suggestions, critiques, and in-depth ideas for revisions.

  • Optional (for an additional fee): Follow-up Consultation (30-60 mins) to discuss the feedback and answer questions.

• Pricing: $400 (for manuscripts up to 80,000 words)

• Add-On: Extra word count at $0.04 per word.

Editing for 1000+ Word scenes

Ideal for: Longer, intricate action scenes, complex battles, extended chases, or multi-character confrontations.

• ​Pricing: $0.07 per word

• What You Get:

  • Detailed in-line edits focused on pacing, clarity, and emotional stakes.

  • Suggestions for choreography and movement flow.

  • Analysis of how the scene integrates into the overall story

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Editing for under 1000 Word scenes

Ideal For: Short, intense action sequences or moments. Standalone fights, key turning points, or high-impact emotional beats.

Pricing:

• 100-300 Words: $20 flat rate.

• 301-500 Words: $40 flat rate.

• 501-999 Words: $60 flat rate.

What You Get:

• Precision editing for clarity and impact.

• Quick turnaround for shorter scenes.

• Optional focus on specific elements (e.g., pacing or sensory detail).

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Full Manuscript Action Pass

Ideal For: Authors seeking a comprehensive review of action scenes throughout their novel, manuscripts with recurring battles, chases, or other high-energy sequences.

Pricing:

• $200 for manuscripts up to 50,000 words.

• Add-on: Extra word count at $0.03 per word.

What You Get:

• Comprehensive edits across all action scenes.

• Scene-by-scene feedback for consistency and escalating tension.

• A summary document with overall suggestions for improvement.

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Add-Ons:

• Choreography Consultation

  • Price: $100 per session.

  • What You Get:

    • Brainstorming and refinement of physical movements within fight scenes.

    • Suggestions for realistic or dynamic choreography tailored to your characters’ abilities.

    • Flow diagrams or scene breakdowns (optional).

• Sensory Immersion Editing

  • Price: $0.03 per word.

  • What You Get:

    • Enhancements to sensory detail (sounds, sights, smells, textures).

    • Focus on creating vivid, immersive environments to draw readers into the action.

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Free Sample Edit (new clients only):

• What You Get:

  • A complimentary review and edit of up to 300 words from an action scene.

  • Feedback on pacing, choreography, and sensory elements to showcase the value of my service.