Tips for writing a story.

1: On the first chapter, never info dump.

2: Use active voice 

3: Avoid large paragraph 

4: Use similes (not necessary)

5: Don't overuse the exclamation mark (!) 

6: Always experiment when about to submit

7: To ensure the viewer remains entertained follow these steps of the story:

• Call to adventure 

• Assistance

• Departure

• Trails

• Approach

• Crises

• Treasure

• Result

• Return

• New life

• Resolution

                                                                                     -Lynx (co-founder)