Good Story

Amethyst Saphire

This is a good story, as we can see the author is a somewhat experienced writer.

Grammer: the Grammer was superb, I only spotted one mistake in the whole story but take this lightly as English is only my second language.

Story: was somewhat unique in that it is the first of it's type that I've read, the world building was lacking but that was to be expected from a short story.

Characters: They are well thought out but they could have had more...character?depth?idk.