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After scanning through the works of 20 classmates, it became apparent to me that the class is a mix of individuals with varying levels of experience: some have photography experience, some have none, and some are self-taught. Among those, there are students who own a camera, and students that use their phones instead. From what I have observed, those who own a camera tend to already have some sort of experience with photography. While their outputs are that of a better quality, this equipment advantage does not mean that phone camera users capture low quality photos. There are those who can produce amazing captures with their phones that can be compared with its counterpart.
Despite the difference in means, a commonality among them is that they are all interested and willing to learn more about the subject, whether to improve as a beginner photographer or to advance to the next professional level. Among the works that I’ve reviewed, many are impressive and features incredible shots that I wouldn’t even doubt it if someone said that it was taken by a professional photographer (coming from someone with minimal photography experience). The two classmates who stood out to me the most were Ayessa Torres Mendoza and Erwin Javillonar. Their portfolios showcase images that truly captures my heart and evoke strong emotions. However, there are also some, while not bad, could benefit greatly from improving the execution of the techniques mentioned in Unit I.
I believe that as we got through MMS 173, many of us would have improved our skills and appreciate photography even more. As those who lack experience learn more, and those who already have experience continue to develop, I am confident that by the end of this course, we will become photographers that can skillfully capture moments in time and confidently showcase our work.
The pictures I’m about to evaluate were both randomly and deliberately chosen. I am, by no means, skilled enough or experienced enough to be assessing other people’s work, but I will base my judgement on what I have learned so far. Some points of my evaluation may not be agreeable, because up until now I have been judging photos on how pleasing they appear to me, which is not the same for everyone. However, I will do my best to evaluate these pictures fairly and accurately.
I really love Erwin Javillonar’s “Sa Batanes”. The colors are pleasing and there is an overall sense of balance. The texture of the plants adds a nice depth to the composition and the rule of thirds is executed well here. Looking at it gives me sense of ease and maybe wonder. The only thing that bothers me is the focus of the image. I think it would fit Erwin’s theme of “coming home” if the focus was on the tricycle rather than plants on the foreground to give emphasis on travelling. Other than that, I think highly of this photo.
The image “Strays from the city” was taken by John Mark Dela Cruz. The principle most obvious here is the scale of the cats compared to the steps, as well as the color — the cats’ fur stands out against the color of the stairs, drawing attention to them. The lack of composition is understandable considering it was taken in a quick snap, but one thing I can suggest is to take advantage of the structure and capture the image at a different angle that would emphasize scale further to add more interest.
Mariana Joaquina Ancheta’s “Met highs”, captures this beautiful, curved ceiling. What I really like about this photo is the arrangement of lines and shapes that makes these intricate patterns. The variation of colors only adds to its attractiveness. The perspective is also a directional force the guided my eyes to look from right to left, following the curve of the ceiling. While I do like the photo, I think it could be elevated by making it so that the people were silhouettes or less noticeable and making the colors and depth of the ceiling design pop-up. Though I don’t know the technical terms, I think these points could help give the photo more charm.
Gabrielle Faith Gloria’s shot of this scenery is truly impressive, especially because it was taken on a phone. The dominating elements here are shape, texture, and lines — from the sun rays. I really like the contrast between the silhouette of the trees and the light peeking from between its branches in a radial manner, creating a whimsical effect. If I were to change one thing in this photo, it would be to place more emphasis on the tree illuminated by the light to further enhance its prominence in the composition or centering the subject.
Clarisse Abad’s capture of this pink cake is another smartphone shot that I really admire. The most prominent element in this photo is the shape — of the cake, cake decorations, and table decorations — as well as the texture and color. The pattern of the icing makes this image really interesting. I also like how the environment is not too overly decorated, making the cake the sole focus of the picture. One suggestion I have is to consider adjusting the angle or moving the cake to hide the area on the upper right of the photo, which could help make the image feel a bit neater.
If I were to rate my current skill in photography, I would give myself a 5 out of 10. A just average score, not that skilled but not unknowledgeable either. Its only just recently when I started to get conscious and mindful on how I take photos. Having no formal training with photography, I learned techniques from what I see on social media and from watching my more photography-oriented friends take pictures. However, imitation can only come a long way, especially if I don’t understand why and how certain things must be done and considered while capturing images.
Going to my gallery and scrolling down, its apparent that I have somewhat improved. But as I look at the photos I took way before, I couldn't help but cringe at how bad it is. Most of the pictures were taken willy-nilly. There was no balance, no focus, no rule of thirds. The only rule is that if it makes me happy. Even blurred and undistinguishable pictures were taken and kept for a long time. It's embarrassing to admit but I sent a lot of these pictures to the trash bin when I was looking through my gallery. I had gained a sense of what photos looks good and what does not then.
Currently, my photography skills are still not at a level I can brag about. At this state, I could only continue to learn more and improve. I’ll think about getting a professional camera later and focus on refining my skills with the basics for now. I should really keep in mind the different photographic compositions and considering the elements and principle while taking photos. It's easy to get distracted while capturing shots, especially if I'm with my friends at the time. I usually leave the photo taking to that one friend and have them send me the pictures later. I think it would be nice to take my own pictures from now on as the process seems enjoyable and fulfilling. I look forward to the day when I’ll be able to take pictures that I could be proud of and put them in my portfolio.
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