Nieves is a short epic I wrote for the application process of KultOU, the graphic literature organization of UPOU. Applicants were tasked to create a comic and a short story by group—and our group won best story! Check out Shadow Bunnies' comic!
I. THE RABBIT HOLE
Deep in the rabbit hole,
a magical carrot floats,
secured in place
by a pedestal woven of veins.
Each tendril stretches toward it,
protecting it,
as it pulsates with magic,
beats with the forest’s breath.
“Only for the pure-hearted souls,”
says the engravings on the stone,
but the words are left ignored,
forgotten,
for the temptation is too much,
too hard to resist.
One bite and immediately,
magic finds home in Nieves’ heart
and proceeds to pump
immortality through her veins.
II. THE CURSE
As she reenters the meadow,
her eyes scan every corner
her excitement now replaced
by fear, longing, and sorrow.
Long gone is the meadow
she knew and loved.
Long gone is the clear sky,
the moist grass, the hay, and the—
house:
Where she grew up.
Where she played with her siblings.
Where shadows now linger,
eyes soulless yet vengeful.
Clutching the carrot like a rosary,
Nieves murmurs a prayer
as she flees deep into the forest,
chased away by the shadows and her guilt.
II. GOATMAN
She reaches a cave where a goat sat idle.
“The name’s Goatman,” he says weakly.
“The world has gone dark and I cannot see
The plants have died and I cannot spot
The last ingredient, a daffodil, to cure my soul.”
Determined to restore the meadow
and still be with her beloved immortality,
she scurries off to find the daffodil—
her last chance at redemption.
IV. THE DAFFODIL
In the garden, decay has taken over
and replaced all greens with beige.
The curse keeps the flowers wilted,
the leaves brittle,
the branches askew.
Surrounded by death is a daffodil
so lone and sickly yellow.
A sight of life
neither inspiring nor blissful,
But awfully vile,
a power that thrives
by sucking all
from those that threaten it.
Breathing so long as the others don’t.
As Nieves plucks it from the soil,
the garden releases a gasp,
as though it has received
a true love’s kiss.
But as quickly as it caught its breath,
it succumbs to sorrow once more,
leaving Nieves with a daffodil,
a goat to cure,
a heart to turn pure,
and a meadow to restore.
V. THE LAKE
The lake carries memories
Nieves refuses to reminisce
As she passes by it,
the shadows whisper and taunt,
reminding her
of the torment she had wrought.
“It was you who turned the world cold and dark
Did you want to see your inside manifest on the outside?
The flowers have died
The sky has lost its color
We are all inside you now
Witnessing your soul after our eyes.”
Nieves dives into the lake,
wanting to drown out the whispers
more than she fears drowning to death.
There is a certain beauty to terror
when you are trapped in it,
forced to experience it in its entirety.
When you sink, sink, sink, and realize—
perhaps sinking isn’t that bad at all,
perhaps you aren’t sinking at all,
perhaps you are only drifting,
only experiencing another part of life.
Is that so bad at all?
Back on the grass,
the shadows dance and play,
unguarded, distracted,
too close to the lake.
The sight is all-too-familiar,
all-too-horrifying.
It’s a sight she knows too well:
It’s her siblings
hopping on the grass,
ignorant of the danger to come,
with much vigor
she could never match.
VI. THE ANTIDOTE
Daffodil in hand,
Nieves hurries back to Goatman.
He offers a weak smile,
“Keep the daffodil, dear Nieves,
for I no longer need it
more than I need to be
reunited with my family.”
“No, no, no,” Nieves begs,
“I have to cure you, it’s the only way!”
“Feel your heart from your chest, dear.
Do you not feel its warmth? Its power?
Only pure hearts beat that way.
Now leave me be,
for there is no greater pain
than staying for anything
other than meaning.”
VII. THE SACRIFICE
Back in the rabbit hole,
Nieves meets once again
the pedestal woven of veins,
now empty and desperate
of the magical carrot
that once vitalized them.
She offers the carrot back
but the veins stay still,
for it is no longer pure,
no longer sacred.
She places her hand over her chest,
Goatman’s words in her head.
Her heart pulsates strangely, familiarly.
It beats with the forest’s breath.
She notices the veins timidly stretching,
attempting to reach her.
And she slowly understands,
slowly accepts.
As her fingers meet with the veins,
she steps into the pedestal.
Then the world glowed
like it has never glowed before.