Project 1 Revision
I made several revisions to my Project 1 to strengthen both the content and the structure of my work. These included a combination of major and minor changes. For the major revisions, I reworked some key sections to improve clarity, strengthen my main points, and ensure my ideas were more effectively communicated. I also made minor edits to fix grammar mistakes, adjust wording, and smooth out transitions between paragraphs. In addition, I added comments throughout the draft to highlight the changes I made and explain my revision process. These revisions helped improve the overall quality of the project and made my writing more clear, focused, and organized. I am also in the process of creating my Works Cited page to make sure all my sources are properly cited and formatted.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IvVBLlrU17tXv-xufgmPXeNzJ4Lh1eP8x7fS0g2eYhc/edit?usp=sharing
Project 2 Revision
I made several revisions to my Project 2 essay, which was a research report, to improve its overall flow and clarity. I restructured some sentences and refined my wording to make my arguments stronger and easier to follow. I also revised my writing based on the professor’s comments, which included fixing grammar errors, clarifying vague points, and reorganizing certain paragraphs. These changes helped make my essay more effective, and easier to read.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/12tOCcFbjkcMeqUnKsQK4K4x9mwFpsG6C3ucitv5zQkY/edit?usp=sharing