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Our internal spreadsheet has individual assignments, contact information, and links to our introductory videos.
Mon, 9/28: How do we introduce ourselves?
Introductions: we went around the table and introduced ourselves multiple times: name + hometown, name + what you did this summer, name + major.
"Zoom" improv game: passing our energy around (zoom / eerk / oil slick / life is a highway).
Re-introductions: we went around one more time and gave our names, a mnemonic to remember our names, and a gesture to support that mnemonic.
We passed out the introduction of Rose Horowitch's "The End of Reading is Here" from The Atlantic (August 2026). Please read this for Wednesday. [Not required, but here's the full article—access to members of the class only]
Wed 9/30: What does it mean to make a first impression?
Check-ins.
Why are first impressions important? How do we control the first impression? What does it mean to receive a first impression? What are first impressions like across different types of interactions (written, online, media)? Examples: our re-introductions on Monday, the introduction of Horowitch's "The End of Reading is Here," video introductions.
Among the things we discussed: the pressure of crafting a first impression, what information is withheld (and from whom). We also talked about the impressions made upon us and what it takes to click with another person.
How do we learn the rules of a new place? In "The Merchant" Part 1, we hear a story about a time and place similar to our own. How does Ted Chiang teach us something different? How is this different from a 'factual' document, like a syllabus? (Does a syllabus tell a story?) A deeper question: how do you learn?
Read the syllabus | Article referenced at the end (optional read)
By Wed, Sep 30: Listen to part 1 of "The Merchant and the Alchemist's Gate" by Ted Chiang, read by LeVar Burton. Pandora | Spotify | Apple
By Mon, Oct 5: Listen to part 2 of "The Merchant and the Alchemist's Gate" by Ted Chiang, read by LeVar Burton. Pandora | Spotify | Apple
For the near future: On Canvas there are now modules to watch Arrival and the "Darmok" episode of Star Trek: The Next Generation. Please feel free to watch these ahead of time. This is the one time we'll use Canvas in this course.
By Monday, read one science "explainer" article from the following list and be ready to present it next week.
Introduction Video | Prof. Tanedo's intro video (Due Friday, 10/2)
Pre-Class Survey (Due Friday, 10/2)
One Page Reflection (Due Monday, Oct 5), to be posted
Watch Arrival by Week 3. This available on our Canvas page.
No action required, please feel free to peruse.
When playing our "zoom" improv game to pass energy across the room, one of the options was "life is a highway" where we identified someone across the room to pass the energy to. We did this without pointing to them. This meant that we made eye contact. In fact, the advice to "make eye contact" is a standard part of professional training in the US. However, this is also something with cultural codings that then affect how we navigate professional spaces. (See also this piece by Ed Yong and this blog response).
Here's the link to Braid: Anniversary Edition which is available on Steam. We will discuss playing this game in the second half of the course.
Mon, 10/5: The role of narrative
We discussed the second part of "The Merchant and the Alchemist's Gate" by Ted Chiang as read by LeVar Burton. The story's narrative tells us about determinism and free will in this universe. In addition to telling us a moral story, the narrative also makes clear the rules of fate in this fictional universe. We discussed how these rules are different from other science fiction universes
We each presented a "just the facts" one page summary of the science explainers that we read. Then we discussed the narrative elements that made the articles much more than their facts. Human connection, subversion of expectations, and a compelling narrative make for excellent science writing.
Wed 10/7:
Improv: "Yes and..." collective world building
Exercises:
warm up (wiggle it out, rubber chicken)
A-B-A (variations: B uses a word from A, B responds with emotion, +1 detail)
What's in the Box?
A: "What's in the box?" B: "It's a gift for you." [gives gift]
A: Defines the contents. (e.g. "It's a semi truck!")
B: explains why it is a good gift (e.g. "I knew you were moving this weekend ... ")
A: reinforces the reason, adds support. (e.g. "It's perfect. I didn't think I could fit all my stuff in my Honda Civic.")
Chairs: A is sitting. B must convince A to let them swap chairs.
Discussion: "How I Learned To Stop Worrying About Their Many Tiny Legs And Love The House Centipede" by Sabrina Imbler in Defector (2022) [pdf for class members].
This example is inspired by The Best Science Stories and How They Work edited by Siri Carpenter. It is an excellent companion for learning what makes an effective 'explainer' article.
Week 2, One Page Reflection (Due Monday)
By next week, please read Sabrina Imbler's "My Metamorphosis" (Harper's Bazaar, 2022)
By next week, please watch Arrival on Canvas. You can view it on your computer as a module, see the image below. (If you're curious why Prof. Tanedo can't stand Canvas, you may read this academic essay by professors at UC Irvine; it's from a book edited by Hines called University Keywords)
Not mandatory, just following up from class.
On Monday we discussed the Pablo Torre Finds Out podcast and its reporting on salary cap circumvention in the NBA. The team won a Pulitzer prize earlier this year. It's an example of a public 'explainer' that brought audiences 'into the weeds' of a basketball scandal.
Another pioneering example of an explainer is "The Giant Pool of Money" on This American Life in 2008. The episode became famose for explaining the 2008 financial crisis to lay audiences in a way that was engaging and understandable. It was so successful that it spun off into its own program, Planet Money.
"The Storytelling Genius of Steve Jobs" from The Art of Storytelling's YouTube page was released the same day as our Monday meeting. It is an excellent example of how Steve Jobs used storytelling to craft memorable keynote presentations.
"When you're so good at writing that you put three jokes in one punchline (30 Rock)" by Media Muse on YouTube (26 June 2023). The first 30 seconds of this video summarizes a well-loved joke from 30 Rock. The rest of the video explains the joke. You might enjoy it after this week's improv exercises.
Mon, 10/12:
Prof. Tanedo: the principle of least action
Discussion of Sabrina Imbler's "My Metamorphosis" (Harper's Bazaar, 2022). What is it about? (What was the emotional/human 'aha' moment?)
Discussion of Arrival: what is it about? Discussion of the Sapir-Whorf hypothesis and principle of least time/action. (What was the emotional/human 'aha' moment?)
We prefaced our activity with the proposal that human brains evolved to process language. Many animals also clearly communicate, some are even known to lie. The proposal is that humans are different because we learned to craft collective mythology that allows large groups of humans to collaborate. (See references below.)
Activity: a round of Mafia / Werewolf: the use of discourse and narrative in a competitive game of survival.
Wed 10/14:
"quantum distributions for Sarah Baartman" by Lena Blackmon (pdf); Role of "pathos" in communication
"Sarah Baartman" on Wikipedia
Reflection: emotion and information. We asked: on a team project, do you want your teammates to have mostly positive or mostly negative emotions? We examined the idea that "angry people will do shit," but also the counterpoint that team cohesiveness benefits from positive emotions. We discussed the "Good Jeans" ad from 2025, political polarization, the attention economy. We contrasted this with Scientific American-style explainer articles who (usually) convey emotions of curiosity, wonder, and being part of the discovery process.
We reflected that one of the most powerful feelings is tribal affinity ("us versus them"). With that in mind, we played one more game of Mafia.
As a preview for Week 5, we introduced the twist of The Detective. How did we learn this new rule?
In Mafia, there are two groups: the innocent townspeople and the mafia. The mafia are 'hidden invaders' in the tribe of townspeople. How does this frame the way in which the group reaches consensus? Once one establishes trust, how do trusted-sub-groups interact with the larger town?
For Wednesday (10/14): read "quantum distributions for Sarah Baartman" by Lena Blackmon (pdf)
For next Wednesday (10/21): Create a comic. Use one of the pages of SPACES by Megan Delyani (artist's page) to use visual narrative to convey a technical idea of your choice.
For next Wednesday (10/21): please read Chapters 3-4 of The Dialogues by UCSB professor Clifford Johnson.
Week 3, Reflection (Due Monday; 10/14: now posted)
For coming weeks:
Lightbreakers by Aja Gabel, audiobook via Libro.fm or print version. We're working on bringing Aja Gabel to our class, this may be a chance to get your book signed. :-)
Braid: Anniversary Edition published by Thekla, Inc on Steam.
Clip from the BBC's adaptation of Terry Pratchett's Hogfather on belief. "Humans need fantasty to be human. To be the place where the falling angel meets the rising ape." / "Tooth fairies? Hogfathers? Little –" / "Yes. As practice. You have to start out learning to believe the little lies." / "So we can believe the big ones?" "Yes. Justice. Mercy. Duty. That sort of thing."
A couple of popular-level books that address the role of mythmaking and language in human development. (My book club read both of these books and ended up rather critical of them, though you may refer to them and their bibliographies for primary sources.)
Cat Bohannon, Eve: How the Female Body Drove 200 Million Years of Human Evolution, Ch. 7, "Voice." Bohannon proposes that the first evolutionary modern human was the first mother to tell stories to her baby.
Yuval Noah Harari, Sapiens. Highlights the idea that collective myth-making was a criterion for humans to be able to maintain structures that spanned tribes of 100-or-so people. He calls this the "cognitive revolution" to connect humans through abstract concepts (nationhood, religion, money, morality).
Robin Dunbar's 'social brain hypothesis' that brains developed rapidly to navigate social groups.
Other books: The Secret of Our Success: How Culture Is Driving Human Evolution, J. Henrich; The Belief Instinct: The Psychology of Souls, Destiny, and the Meaning of Life, J. Bering, SuperSense: Why We Believe in the Unbelievable, B. Hood
On rage bait and the attention economy
re: "Good jeans" commercial, a response by Tania Fabo. Tania wrote this piece as part of the Op-Ed Project.
"‘Ragebait’ culture on social media exposed in new study", summary of this academic paper. (Reynolds and John 2024)
"Social Media and Morality," Bavel et al, Annual Review of Psychology (2024)
"The Business of Anger," Jodie Shaw on Medium (2025)
Prof. Rachelle Cruz teaches comic literacy at UCR. She has a fantastic book, Experiencing Comics. It is available in Rivera library.
A relatively recent book: Making nonfiction comics : a guide for graphic narrative edited by Eleri Harris and Shay Mirk.
The classic: Understanding Comics: The Invisible Art by Scott McCloud.
Mon, 10/19: Visuals and visual narrative
How does imagery move us? How does imagery inform us? How can stationary images tell a story?
Wed 10/21: practicum: visual communication
Exercise in visual communication: Telestrations. Telestrations is a combination of the game telephone and pictionary. It is our example of both the power and peril of purely visual communication.
Our completed telestrations: Arrival | Bird Watching | Candy Corn | Compass | Dedication | Going Home for the Weekend | Large Intestine | Mafia | The Merchant & The Alchemist's Gate | Metamorphosis | Pancake | Public Transportation | Skateboard Trick | Dr. Tanedo Riding a Polar Bear | Travel Backward in Time
For next Wednesday (10/21) Extended to Monday 10/26: Create a comic. Use one of the pages of SPACES by Megan Delyani (artist's page) to use visual narrative to convey a technical idea of your choice.
Learn how to play one of the following board games. Next week you will teach a group of classmates how to play. You will be assigned one of the games.
Sell Me a Sasquatch (beginner)
We will not be using these games: Trains | Dominant Species (advanced)
Prep for next week
Braid: Anniversary Edition published by Thekla, Inc on Steam. Play the game. There is no instruction manual. How do you learn to play? How does the game tell a story?
Watch "Darmok" (Star Trek: the Next Generation) on our Canvas page
For later: Read or listen to Lightbreakers by Aja Gabel, due November
Week 4 Reflection, due Monday
You may want to read/watch some of the following:
Next week you'll be teaching each other how to play a board game. You may find inspiration in episodes of TableTop, a web show where a group of friends teach each other how to play a board game.
More about TableTop via Wil Wheaton's blog.
There are other play-through video series. Let me know if you have a favorite. I'm not so familiar with the others, but I do think the Smosh Games "Flip 7" videos are just delightfully fun.
Mon, 10/26:
Braid: discussion and play through
Discussion: teaching complex things to colleagues who are intelligent, but not as experienced.
Wed 10/28:
Board games: please refer to our internal sheet for the board game assignment for which you are responsible.
PS: apologies to the Ticket to Ride group. The Ticket to Ride: Europe edition is significantly more involved than the standard Ticket to Ride game whose rules I supplied.
Due Monday Nov 2: Week 5 Reflection
If you haven't done so already, please upload your comic (due this Monday, Oct 26) here: Submission link. Otherwise one of your colleagues will not be able to use it in their reflection.
On Nov 18, author Aja Gabel will be visiting our class (!). Please read her latest novel, Lightbreakers. You have access to this book through the UCR Library; if you would like a physical copy to have Ms. Gabel autograph, the paperback version comes out on November 3 and you can pick up a copy at our local indie bookstore, Cellar Door Books. You can also purchase an audiobook version on libro.fm.
You might also enjoy Ms. Gabel's short story, Little Fish, which was adapted in to a 2020 movie.
The following references may be helpful for preparing for teaching your board games:
"How to Teach Someone a Board Game (and Even Have Fun Doing It)," James Austin for The Wirecutter: The Answer in the New York Times, September 20, 2022. (PDF)
"Teaching Games: A Professional Educator's Perspective," Andrew Gallie on Boardgamegeek.com Forums > Gaming Related > General Gaming, Dec 29, 2024. (PDF)
"How to Teach a Board Game Well," Mark Wilson for bumblingthroughdungeons.com
"He Made 500 Hours of Puzzles to Explode Your Mind" (article in the New York Times on Oct 9, 2026) by Darryn King.
"Jonathan Blow on the Design of Braid" (YouTube)
"Dissecting Design: How Braid Merged Action and Puzzle Design" Game Wisdom on YouTube
"Braid Discussion: Epilogue, Ending, and Philosophy vs. Science," YouTube video by Gaming Philosophy with JustNukeIt
Sell Me A Sasquatch is a recent boardgame created by NPR's Planet Money Podcast. Here's their collection of podcast episodes about the game's design and marketing.
Some cheat sheets for a discussion of "Darmok,"
"Darmok, under 8 minutes (Star Trek Abridged)" via Rikerish on YouTube (2023)
"The Episode That Defines Star Trek TNG," via The Art of Storytelling on YouTube
"One Trek Mind: Deciphering 'Darmok' ," Jordan Hoffman (2013) for StarTrek.com. Includes a summary of Tamarian phrases, including:
"Darmok and Jalad at Tanagra" (to work together)
"Darmok and Jalad on the ocean" (to succeed together, Darmok and Jalad left together)
"Shaka, when the walls fell" (failure, perhaps a reference to a city falling to a siege?)
"Sokath, his eyes open" (finally understanding)
"Of Myths and Metaphors: Star Trek TNG’s Darmok" Isaac Yuen (2013) on ekostories.com
"Picard understanding Darmok: A Dataset and Model for Metaphor-Rich Translation in a Constructed Language," by Jansen and Boyd-Graber. An academic paper presented at the 2022 Workshop on Figurative Language Processing arXiv:2107.08146
Next week we're talking about passive voice. The above order from the Supreme Court is an example of deliberate passive voice. [Background]
Mon, 11/2: Introduction to application writing. How do we write to pitch ourselves for the opportunities we want?
Prep for Lightbreakers: how quantum entanglement works.
We had an impromptu discussion about class registration and learning communities.
Wed 11/4: Practicum.
One page "application" workshopping.
Internal folder with our drafts.
Rhetoric: logos (rational), ethos (trustworthiness), pathos (emotions). What is the right balance for your writing?
Assumptions: cross check what we assume about applications. Who is reading them? What do they know? What are they looking for? What about formatting? (Are you allowed to include figures? Should you include references?) What is the grading rubric?
Personal statements: what is the purpose? What are the pitfalls?
For Wednesday, Nov 4: have a short (up to one page) pitch document for something you would like to apply to in the near future. Include a brief summary of what the application is for and what the criteria are. Please submit a Google Doc (Add File > My Drive).
For Monday, Nov 9: Week 6 reflection, "Hire Me" pitch draft 2
On Nov 18, author Aja Gabel will be visiting our class (!). Please read her latest novel, Lightbreakers. You have access to this book through the UCR Library; if you would like a physical copy to have Ms. Gabel autograph, the paperback version comes out on November 3 and you can pick up a copy at our local indie bookstore, Cellar Door Books. You can also purchase an audiobook version on libro.fm.
"Using Science Fiction to Write About Grief, Marriage, and Memory," Sabir Sultan, PEN America (Nov 2025)
"How a Mid-Career Shift Into Screenwriting Helped Inspire Aja Gabel’s New Novel," Seija Rankin, The Hollywood Reporter (Nov 2025)
"#PouredOver: Aja Gabel on Lightbreakers," [video] Barnes & Noble (Nov 2025)
You might also enjoy Ms. Gabel's short story, Little Fish, which was adapted in to a 2020 movie.
If you're looking for place to apply for your "hire me" pitch, consider some of the following. You can also do a search for your major/interests with "summer research" or "summer internship."
Caltech SURF (+search for other "SURF" programs across the country)
On November 5 (virtual) and 6 (in person) UCR is hosting the "California Games + Interactive Media Conference 2026." The conference is free and open to the public. There are talk abstracts on the speaker page.
Our internal page now has our comic interpretations and the artist's captions.
Writing Science in Plain English, 2nd edition by Greene [Publisher, UCR library link] is short and sweet. It's easily one of my favorite books on technical writing.
One of the questions that came up on Wednesday: what do we do if we're faced with a tough interview? This should be handled on a case-by-case basis, but I want to make two points. (1) You are entitled to a fair interview, but not necessarily to a friendly one. Be prepared (in interviews and in your professional life) to grapple with those who will challenge you. (2) However, you may want to think ahead of time of how you would handle unfair challenges. One example from the recent midterm elections may be instructive. You may also find some insight in the episode "Lower Decks" of Star Trek: The Next Generation (S7E15) .
Mon, 11/9: Reflection on our draft writing
Preface: growth versus fixed mindset.
Common writing pitfalls, suggestions
Wed 11/11: No class, Veteran's Day
Writing Science in Plain English, 2nd edition by Greene [Publisher, UCR library link] is short and sweet. It's easily one of my favorite books on technical writing.
Mon, 11/16:
Wed 11/18: Author Aja Gabel is visiting our class! This is your chance to have a copy of Lightbreaker autographed. :-)
Be ready to bring questions to discuss with Ms. Gabel as
Mon, 11/23:
[ something on professional communications, how to write an email, how to interview, when to use honorifics, how to present yourself ]
Wed 11/25:
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