Story Plan

Characters 

Goon 1 

• Tough, loyal to Mafia higher-ups, has little compassion 

• Reacts by denying mistake, wants to continue with the plan and “dispose of him”

• Reluctantly goes along with initial plan of letting him free but not telling anyone

• Embarrassed by dragging the body along, pretending that it’s conscious.

• Acts instinctively

• Dialogue - sarcastic, frustrated, exasperated

• Inspired by ‘Tangerine’ (Bullet Train)

Goon 2

• Softer, compassionate 

• Reacts by disapproving higher-ups, thinks they should let him free

• Leads initial plan

• More hesitant

• Dialogue - plays comments off, optimistic, sarcastic

• Inspired by ‘Lemon’ (Bullet Train)

“Dead” Body

• Starts unconscious, wakes up and gets knocked unconscious again for majority of the story 

• Reacts by wondering where he is and why -receives no answer-

• Dialogue - Frightened 

ACT 1

• Opens with car pulling into undisclosed location

• Body in boot

• “I thought they'd put him in a bag 

• Genre - dark, crime

• They lift body up and lie him next to a tree 

• They take out shovels to start digging up the ground

• As they discuss where to start, they hear a twig snapping in the background

• Focus pull 3 shot (Body stands up in background)

• They slowly turn to face the body

• Genre change

• Person visibly shook and asks where he is 

• Goon 1 hits him around the head with the shovel before answering his question

• Body is unconscious again

• The goons bicker between themselves

• Whether to leave him, kill him, or take him back to the boss 

• Goon 2 spots a wallet in the Body’s pocket

• Wallet consists of a home address (if lost return to …)

• They agree to try and take them home, much to the annoyance of goon 1

ACT 2

• They carry the body back to the car and accidentally shut the boot on his leg

• They decide to slide him into the back of the car

• Their car breaks down, much to their annoyance, meaning they have to carry the body the rest of the way

• Small montage scene

• enter/exit shop with a hat, glasses and bandages 

• People looking at them while they carry body

• Have to pretend to wave with the body

• Find an office chair by the side of the road and put the body on it (?)

• Sat on a bench and body falls off (eating sandwich / ice cream?)

• They bandage up the body’s legs and arms 

• Gun falls out of pocket, goon tries to pick it up, drops body in process (?)

• Sat at the back of bus (?)

• Locations - park, streets, Town centre (?)

• Needle drop - ‘You’re My Best Friend” - Queen