Included some points of editing and also made sure to have lots of jokes, but the setting and way the news was being read of the computers were the parts I thought could be worked on.  There was also a lack of flow and I couldn't tell if the long pauses were intended as a joke or just lack of participation/readiness.

I liked the intro and the image displayed from the green screen but that was it.  Firstly, the two students on the news were obviously reading the news straight off a screen. Secondly, I could barely understand what the one boy was saying as if he didn't even know how to speak.  Lastly, there were no slides, transitions, or videos/pictures added to bring contrast to the anchors who were speaking.