Day1
About today's class
I learned how to research and write a good paragraph. First, I researched Rab Paterson on the Internet. There is too much information on the Internet to find appropriate information. So it is important to limit the word which I want to research. Second, I found the importance of cooperation. I had to get enough information in a limited time. So I needed to communicate with friends and divide what to research. Finally, I learned to write a paragraph. It is important to write in the same font and change colors. Also I have to write a theme, three body paragraphs and a conclusion. Therefore, I learned the points of researching and writing, and the points will be useful for my college life.
Day2
①What did we do?
②what did you think about what we did?
①
Today, we learned how to write a good paragraph. First, our teacher Rab checked our homeworks. He told us to change the font and the character size. Also he told us to widen between lines. Second,he told us to check the paragraph by ourselves. Especially, I had to check spelling and grammar. Also, if the sentence started “ I ~ ”, I had to add a conjunction. Finally, we check each other. It made us find mistakes. I couldn’t find the mistakes by myself, but our friends checked carefully so my paragraph was completed. Therefore, we can make a perfect paragraph using these three steps.
②
Today, our class checked last week homeworks. First, our homework was checked by Rab. Our homework was projected on the screen so I was embarrassed. However, I could understand the mistakes which everyone often makes. Second, I checked my paragraph by myself. There are not any spelling mistakes or grammar mistakes, but I had to add a space between the period and the next sentence. I think reading again is very important. Finally, we checked each other in pairs. Actually, I was told that I had to add a comma. I couldn’t find it alone so I think checking each other is the most important. Therefore, I understand that I need some steps to complete the paragraph.