There are some key elements you should ALWAYS use in your persuasive writing:
How to Elaborate:
3. Expand further by using ‘Because’ to fully explain your understanding
4. Add your evidence/ example. "An example of this is when...."
Other points to remember:
absolutely Admittedly at one level because beyond doubt
even though evidence suggests finally furthermore hence
however in addition in conclusion inevitably moreover
nevertheless obviously of course on the other hand
one reason for so such as there are many reasons
therefore it seems likely that ultimately whilst
without question